Are you going to play through and review the Foundry Challenge entries? I really enjoy reading your reviews
Yes, I just checked your thread. I didnt know you wanted me to play The Great Escape too sry, I have been bouncing back and forth between my email and this thread for requests. I would be happy to try it out as soon as I get home
Also for both of my review pages I have added a list at the top so you can see what I have already reviewed and in what order, to make them easier to find.
Checkout my contest page too in a few days, as the next one will be for STO. A sneak peak for those who browse this thread...I will be giving away CatStars sword and a Caitian Bridge Officer....a few other prizes too. =^.^=
Great website! When you have some free time, would you mind reviewing my mission The Tangled Webs We Weave? It's my first Foundry mission, so any feedback you have would be much appreciated.
I appreciated your preserverence in the face of trolls last month, which lead me to your website and reviews. Like ashtaku, I'm also interested in a review of my mission for FC6:
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Side note: there's no way to know what uniform design the player uses so I just went for generic. In fact most of the NPCs that make up "your crew" are generic Cryptic NPCs. (I'm screwed if Cryptic ever gives players the ability customize their crew uniforms.) :P
Yes, I just checked your thread. I didnt know you wanted me to play The Great Escape too sry, I have been bouncing back and forth between my email and this thread for requests. I would be happy to try it out as soon as I get home
Also for both of my review pages I have added a list at the top so you can see what I have already reviewed and in what order, to make them easier to find.
Checkout my contest page too in a few days, as the next one will be for STO. A sneak peak for those who browse this thread...I will be giving away CatStars sword and a Caitian Bridge Officer....a few other prizes too. =^.^=
Ah I really only asked for Duritanium man and The Galaxy's Fair, although if you want to review The Great Escape you can too I won't stop you lol
Just a question about your review page, why don't you use anchor links for your mission list? Then it'll be even easier for people to look at specific reviews.
Just a question about your review page, why don't you use anchor links for your mission list? Then it'll be even easier for people to look at specific reviews.
Because I dont know how to do that, im learning as I go with my website. ^^'
I keep adding stuff as I realise what I can do with the package I bought, If you noticed, My recent pics and forum activity are now veiwable on the front page. I've been having lots of fun with this project.
ID: ST-HQ7JQ5IID
Title: Never Count a Gorn Out
Author: @Maziken
Faction: KDF
Playtime: 40 to 60 minutes
Difficulty: Tough
Description: A secret Federation starbase has been revealed and you are ordered to infiltrate it to gather as much data as you can. Will you sneak your way through the installation, only alerting those Starfleet Officers that you must, or will you eradicate every last one of them from the starbase?
Because I dont know how to do that, im learning as I go with my website. ^^'
I keep adding stuff as I realise what I can do with the package I bought, If you noticed, My recent pics and forum activity are now veiwable on the front page. I've been having lots of fun with this project.
If you can edit the html it's quite easy to do it.
An example for the first mission you did (life aborted by chaddy18)
Around that text you'd put
<a href="#lifeaborted">Life Aborted By: @chaddy18</a>
Hi there! I have a couple of missions that I'd love to get some feedback on, as I'm pretty new to the Foundry and still trying to find my feet. The missions in question are:
Name: The Warrior Code
ID: ST-HCMLCN6J2
Author: diotw
Name: Like Father, Like Son
ID: ST-HMUUTXS2C
Author: diotw
I look forward to hearing your thoughts on these!
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
This character is why I don't play my Romulan any more. Tovan Khev is NOT my BFF! Get him off my bridge!
Thank you for reviewing my mission! I'm glad to see you had fun
Any recommendations on things I could do better next time?
I enjoy getting to review your guys work, and im glad so many have wanted me to check out thier works, I hope i can bring them the attention they deserve. As for recommendations, I prefer to be surprised and entertained by what others can come up with, rather then choosing it myself. Every author has thier own charm and technique for telling thier story, its best to let you guys decide how you want it to be. I think the Mona Lisa needs eyebrows, if they where to add eyebrows you loose the artists design, and one of is distiguishing features.
Just wanted to pop in and say that I think your review project is freaking awesome.
Not at all like other Foundry reviews out there, and that's refreshing.
It's obvious you have fun. Nothing's more important.
I'd actually love to hear what you think of my mission "Spectres, Episode Six".
You can find it in the spotlight tab, so it's even gonna get you some Dilithiums ! :P
Of note : it is Episode Six , because parts 1-5 are the Devidian Series from Cryptic.
This is a follow up to that series.
"Desperate Prey"
Level: 16+
Estimated run time: 30-45 mins
Faction: Federation
Description:
Disaster strikes your ship while on a supply mission to New Romulus. Stranded, you must rely on your wits and your crew to save your ship. Unfortunately, your crippled vessel may not be your only problem...
*Designed to not take all day, be action packed, and fun. Hope you enjoy, please give me some good feedback so I can improve my writing!
Thanks.
Don't let them promote you. Don't let them transfer you. Don't let them do anything that takes you off the bridge of that ship, because while you're there... you can make a difference.
-Captain James T. Kirk
I would like some better feedback please... So far I have three good votes (even got some dilithium!) and one one star vote. Unfortunately, no one actually wrote any kind of review or critique.
Name of the mission is:
Eliminate the Borg... Save Earth!
This is my first attempt at a Foundry mission. It's is quite simple. The name of the mission is this thread's title (author: Erocker). Basically, ESD is surrounded by Borg and it is up to you and a few Starfleet NPC ships to clean it up.
I would welcome and appreciate any feedback for this mission as I plan to do more in the future and I would like them to become more complex as I go along.
-It's best if you play solo.
-With it being Borg it is level 41+
You can find the mission by searching for the author: Erocker
Hey Car_star, first, I wanted to say thanks for the review of "Preservers of Nevaria", I wanted to ask if you'd be interested in doing the second part and conclusion?
Hello Catstar,
Just wanted to say thanks for taking the time to give me reviews. It helps!
Don't let them promote you. Don't let them transfer you. Don't let them do anything that takes you off the bridge of that ship, because while you're there... you can make a difference.
-Captain James T. Kirk
While playing around with options I sort of erased the list of missions I reviewed as well as the first two missions I did...luckely it hadent saved yet and I could take a snapshot of my webpage to replace them ^^'
But, this means I had to start a new page for reviews, look for Federation Foundry Page 2, for all my new reviews.
...also I have moved my art contest deadline to the 30th now.
Comments
facepaw lol
Glad you had fun with it.
by @Skydawn - member of Starbase UGC
Foundry Mission Database
Check out my Foundry missions:
Standalone - The Great Escape - The Galaxy's Fair - Purity I: Of Denial - Return to Oblivion
Untitled Series - Duritanium Man - The Improbable Bulk - Commander Rihan
Yes, I just checked your thread. I didnt know you wanted me to play The Great Escape too sry, I have been bouncing back and forth between my email and this thread for requests. I would be happy to try it out as soon as I get home
Also for both of my review pages I have added a list at the top so you can see what I have already reviewed and in what order, to make them easier to find.
Checkout my contest page too in a few days, as the next one will be for STO. A sneak peak for those who browse this thread...I will be giving away CatStars sword and a Caitian Bridge Officer....a few other prizes too. =^.^=
Great website! When you have some free time, would you mind reviewing my mission The Tangled Webs We Weave? It's my first Foundry mission, so any feedback you have would be much appreciated.
404 Error: Admiral Not Found
You might also appreciate Klingon Fried Tribble.
Thanks.
Side note: there's no way to know what uniform design the player uses so I just went for generic. In fact most of the NPCs that make up "your crew" are generic Cryptic NPCs. (I'm screwed if Cryptic ever gives players the ability customize their crew uniforms.) :P
Ah I really only asked for Duritanium man and The Galaxy's Fair, although if you want to review The Great Escape you can too I won't stop you lol
Just a question about your review page, why don't you use anchor links for your mission list? Then it'll be even easier for people to look at specific reviews.
Foundry Mission Database
Check out my Foundry missions:
Standalone - The Great Escape - The Galaxy's Fair - Purity I: Of Denial - Return to Oblivion
Untitled Series - Duritanium Man - The Improbable Bulk - Commander Rihan
God, lvl 60 CW. 17k.
Because I dont know how to do that, im learning as I go with my website. ^^'
I keep adding stuff as I realise what I can do with the package I bought, If you noticed, My recent pics and forum activity are now veiwable on the front page. I've been having lots of fun with this project.
ID: ST-HQ7JQ5IID
Title: Never Count a Gorn Out
Author: @Maziken
Faction: KDF
Playtime: 40 to 60 minutes
Difficulty: Tough
Description: A secret Federation starbase has been revealed and you are ordered to infiltrate it to gather as much data as you can. Will you sneak your way through the installation, only alerting those Starfleet Officers that you must, or will you eradicate every last one of them from the starbase?
If you can edit the html it's quite easy to do it.
An example for the first mission you did (life aborted by chaddy18)
Around that text you'd put
<a href="#lifeaborted">Life Aborted By: @chaddy18</a>
and then where the actual review is
<a id="lifeaborted>Life Aborted</a>
<p><p>by: @chaddy18
of course if you use a different ID the link you put will be different (id="DuritaniumMan" href=#"DuritaniumMan)
You'll also be able to link to it from different pages too:
http://www.catstarsto.com/federation-foundry-reviews#lifeaborted
Here's a reference site for you: http://www.w3schools.com/html/html_links.asp
(PS you misspelled duritanium man in the list)
Foundry Mission Database
Check out my Foundry missions:
Standalone - The Great Escape - The Galaxy's Fair - Purity I: Of Denial - Return to Oblivion
Untitled Series - Duritanium Man - The Improbable Bulk - Commander Rihan
Name: Colonial Defense
ID: ST-HFAJAEWRX
Author: Lorgrius
Federation Mission any level
Discription:
Tour of Duty in the Delta Volanis Cluster colony worlds. Three systems will be patrolled during the tour.
This mission starts at the panel outside of the transporter room on Earth Space Dock.
Mission is 25-30 minutes long with a mixture of space and ground objectives.
Looking for honest feedback and constuctive critisim. Spelling and gramar are weak points of mine so don't hold back. Thanks in advance.
A Day in the Life of a Ranger
NW-DKCE6OZVH
The Mines of Gubasso Daily!
NW-DN7Z5LHAR
The Vault of Hargon Daily!
NW-DP4X6HAEP
Foundry Mission Database
Check out my Foundry missions:
Standalone - The Great Escape - The Galaxy's Fair - Purity I: Of Denial - Return to Oblivion
Untitled Series - Duritanium Man - The Improbable Bulk - Commander Rihan
Thank you for reviewing my mission! I'm glad to see you had fun
Any recommendations on things I could do better next time?
Anyways, if and when you have time I'd like you to review my mission "Preservers of the Nevara".
Name: The Warrior Code
ID: ST-HCMLCN6J2
Author: diotw
Name: Like Father, Like Son
ID: ST-HMUUTXS2C
Author: diotw
I look forward to hearing your thoughts on these!
This character is why I don't play my Romulan any more. Tovan Khev is NOT my BFF! Get him off my bridge!
I enjoy getting to review your guys work, and im glad so many have wanted me to check out thier works, I hope i can bring them the attention they deserve. As for recommendations, I prefer to be surprised and entertained by what others can come up with, rather then choosing it myself. Every author has thier own charm and technique for telling thier story, its best to let you guys decide how you want it to be. I think the Mona Lisa needs eyebrows, if they where to add eyebrows you loose the artists design, and one of is distiguishing features.
Just wanted to pop in and say that I think your review project is freaking awesome.
Not at all like other Foundry reviews out there, and that's refreshing.
It's obvious you have fun. Nothing's more important.
I'd actually love to hear what you think of my mission "Spectres, Episode Six".
You can find it in the spotlight tab, so it's even gonna get you some Dilithiums ! :P
Of note : it is Episode Six , because parts 1-5 are the Devidian Series from Cryptic.
This is a follow up to that series.
Peace, Love and Happy Trekking
- John
"Desperate Prey"
Level: 16+
Estimated run time: 30-45 mins
Faction: Federation
Description:
Disaster strikes your ship while on a supply mission to New Romulus. Stranded, you must rely on your wits and your crew to save your ship. Unfortunately, your crippled vessel may not be your only problem...
*Designed to not take all day, be action packed, and fun. Hope you enjoy, please give me some good feedback so I can improve my writing!
Thanks.
Don't let them promote you. Don't let them transfer you. Don't let them do anything that takes you off the bridge of that ship, because while you're there... you can make a difference.
-Captain James T. Kirk
A Day in the Life of a Ranger
NW-DKCE6OZVH
The Mines of Gubasso Daily!
NW-DN7Z5LHAR
The Vault of Hargon Daily!
NW-DP4X6HAEP
If you would try my mission
Crisis on Calypso
Lvl:31
Federation.
Name of the mission is:
Eliminate the Borg... Save Earth!
This is my first attempt at a Foundry mission. It's is quite simple. The name of the mission is this thread's title (author: Erocker). Basically, ESD is surrounded by Borg and it is up to you and a few Starfleet NPC ships to clean it up.
I would welcome and appreciate any feedback for this mission as I plan to do more in the future and I would like them to become more complex as I go along.
-It's best if you play solo.
-With it being Borg it is level 41+
You can find the mission by searching for the author: Erocker
Thanks much everyone!
It's called "The Fate of Nevara".
This character is why I don't play my Romulan any more. Tovan Khev is NOT my BFF! Get him off my bridge!
Just wanted to say thanks for taking the time to give me reviews. It helps!
Don't let them promote you. Don't let them transfer you. Don't let them do anything that takes you off the bridge of that ship, because while you're there... you can make a difference.
-Captain James T. Kirk
I'd love to get some feedback on my mission:
Name: Minefield
ID: ST-HGETQAUOO
Creator: RemairTamec
Faction: Federation
Level: 16+
Can also be found here. Its currently only available to reviewers, if that's a problem let me know and I'll get back to you once its been approved.
Cheers
Click for more details
My character Tsin'xing
But, this means I had to start a new page for reviews, look for Federation Foundry Page 2, for all my new reviews.
...also I have moved my art contest deadline to the 30th now.