Mission idea?

uncle2fire

I'm kinda new to the Foundry and would like some feedback on some mission ideas. So far I have developed two missions, one of which is published (you can't play it right now because Foundry mission are down, but it's a Federation mission called "Torg's Treason").

The other mission (also Federation) has a pretty long way to go, and I'm still revising the storyline, but here's a quick rundown of what I have so far:

You are sent to the Risa system to investigate an anomaly just outside of orbit. When you approach the anomaly, you are pulled into a portal taking you back in time and to an alternate universe. When you arrive in the alternate Risa system, you find a Klingon fleet warning you to leave "Before the Cardassians return". They tell you about the Cardassian invasion of Earth several years before and direct you to the staging grounds of a counter-attack. Once there, you find a fleet of ships from many species (most of whom were featured in Enterprise); when a Cardassian patrol enters the system, you are dispatched to defeat them. Afterwards, while the Allied fleet is diverted to assist a Vulcan-Andorian fleet under attack in a nearby system, you are sent to a different system to intercept a Cardassian invasion fleet. After gaining control of the system, you take an away team to an orbital station to clear it of Cardassian troops. Then a surprise awaits you in orbit: a Romulan senator announcing the existence of a Civil War between the Romulans and Remans.

I'm still developing the second and I'm not sure if it will ever be completed because it was based on a random idea. Not sure where to go from there, so criticism and comments are welcome!

PS: Is it possible to use the Andorian battlecruiser (from Enterprise) in the Foundry? I want to use it and the D'Kyr in the mission, but I can't find it anywhere. Will it be added in the future?

Once again, please feel free to leave comments and criticisms of the missions (if you don't like them, please say why!)

rickysmith1

Sounds good, but you gotta have a reason why your going to have to put your crew in jepody to help out people in this universe, perhaps they are the only ones who have sensor data on the anomaly you passed through that you need in order to return but they will trade it for help!?

The Andorian ship wont be available till January-Febuary and even then theres no certainty that it will be put on Foundry straight away.
Perhaps you can simply have them use one of the default ships or even a starfleet ship with a blue paint job and then change it when its released!? I often just change my story slightly to accomodate the Foundrys abilitys.

Best wishes on your creations, perhaps you should try out in the Foundry Challenge when its back!?