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Ghost Ships (KDF Edition)

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edited December 2011 in The Foundry for Star Trek Online - Mission Database
Ghost Ships (KDF Edition)

If you can please take a look at this mission, it is my first piece of work and I welcome input. contact me at @samueldavidson1701


Mission name:
Ghost Ships (KDF Edition)

Mission Description:
General Worf tells he was contacted by an old friend. Who had received a report from the S.S. Denver that there some old Klingon ship's found in the Veyga system.

I need you to go to the Veyga system. If the ships are there. I want you to bring them home or destroy them so they won't fall into the wrong hands.

The Veyga System is located in the Hromi Sector of the Pi Canis Sector Block.
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  • Archived PostArchived Post Member Posts: 2,264,498 Arc User
    edited November 2011
    SamuelDavidson1701 wrote:
    Ghost Ships (KDF Edition)

    If you can please take a look at this mission, it is my first piece of work and I welcome input. contact me at @samueldavidson1701


    Mission name:
    Ghost Ships (KDF Edition)

    Mission Description:
    General Worf tells he was contacted by an old friend. Who had received a report from the S.S. Denver that there some old Klingon ship's found in the Veyga system.

    I need you to go to the Veyga system. If the ships are there. I want you to bring them home or destroy them so they won't fall into the wrong hands.

    The Veyga System is located in the Hromi Sector of the Pi Canis Sector Block.

    I'll take a look this evening and post my report after.
    Brian
  • Archived PostArchived Post Member Posts: 2,264,498 Arc User
    edited November 2011
    SamuelDavidson1701 wrote:
    Ghost Ships (KDF Edition)
    Mission name:
    Ghost Ships (KDF Edition)

    Klingon Mission - Ghost Ships
    Author: SamuelDavidson1701
    Allegiance: Klingon
    Mission ID: ST-HDUR45VPH

    Report Start


    Summary: This is a great concept for a mission. The story is engaging but seems to be missing key story elements that would help to drive the story. I made some recommendations on some of the maps to help you try to bring the story together by adding some additional dialog in various places. The overall mission is very playable from the investigations to the battles. It just needs some fine tuning. The maps you designed are good and the effects well done. The battles are tough but not impossible to win.

    There are several issues with the dialog that I won’t elaborate on here in this forum. I will send them to you separately via PM…

    End Report


    Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. This report is intended to help you and is not intended as a slam on you. Please feel free to ask me if you have any questions.
    Brian

    This critique report also filed 11/16/2011 on forum posting for: [URL=" http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?t=236755&referrerid=312767"]In depth mission reports upon request[/URL].
  • Archived PostArchived Post Member Posts: 2,264,498 Arc User
    edited December 2011
    Update, I have posted info on this mission on STO WIki. here is link to the page.
    http://www.stowiki.org/Foundry:Ghost_Ships_(KDF_Edition)_(ST-HDUR45VPH)
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