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MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Geckofreak - Sanctuary wrote: »

OMG that chibi looks awesome so far!

Please tell me that since i posted 4th for a chibi I'm next on the list after it's done! b:beg

Lmao thank (: And okay I'll save you a post when I open again XD However that is gonna take awhile since each chibi takes forever.

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Any finally got Bella's veno done. After this one, I don't think I will ever draw phoenixs and birds again LOL. And hopefully, I will get the other one done within this week or next week.

CLICKIE for backgroundless one. It is slightly different (just the glow on nix and surrounding) because SAI doesn't support background-less and PS doesn't suppose the filter SAI have.

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary wrote: »

Any finally got Bella's veno done. After this one, I don't think I will ever draw phoenixs and birds again LOL. And hopefully, I will get the other one done within this week or next week.

CLICKIE for backgroundless one. It is slightly different (just the glow on nix and surrounding) because SAI doesn't support background-less and PS doesn't suppose the filter SAI have.

Oh my gosh it's so beautiful!!!

For the evaluation:

-Well the wait was so longgggggggggggggggggggggg. (jk ♥)

-Seriously I try to find something to help you to improve, but I don't find anything that could be better, the only thing I see is the eyebrow a bit too small, but that's all. (I'm not asking to fix it hun it's really to try to find something for the evaluation xD)

-You take time to ask people what they want (like you did for the hair/tail/ears).

-You accepted the challenge of the nix and hun you did better than what I expected. (seriously if I was trying to draw a nix that would look like a ball of fire mess up xD)

I don't know if it's cause it's mine, but I really find nothing I could want a other way, but I promise you if on my next one or on someone else I see something that you can improve I'll let you know.

Thank a lot for the time you put in it for me, I really appreciate it.

Shizunne - Heavens Tear

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary wrote: »

oh deary Dx Bella's chibi looks stunning!! I mean really, I have to agree with Bella there, there i snothing to add, srsly. I mean I luv the coloring, the textures everything. Idk really, I dun have anything to compare to, it's is your style which is adorable welll..umm.. it seems perfect to me ninja stolen my thoughts again srry ;x

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Bella - Glad you like it c: and thank you for evaluating~ maybe I will make the next ones eyebrow longer? And for the challenges, I always try my best to make it look good. If it turn out ugly then yea, meh XD Which, I'm quite happy the nix didn't turn out that ugly lmao.

Also, for you cleric, do you mind if I change your outfit and hair? I wanted to ask you cause I kinda have something in mind, it is okay if not tho Or do you have a different hair I can pick? One that is not the same as venos ofc xD

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Shizunne - I think you hang out with the ninjas too much b:chuckle but yea, thank you~ However I think, I still have to improve on the coloring xD I was checking the forum on ipad earlier and I saw color mistakes all of the place. I was like so... meh lmao.

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

Oh sure you can try other fash and hairs, I don't have as much fash I had before, so I use the white set since I use the seraphic mist wings (white wings, so I kinda look like a angel in the sky in TW xD). You can use a other color than white too, but I would like it to stay light, could be a light cream or pink.

For the hair I use these since the .ini edit is allowed, you can use other, but I would like keep long hair, but you can change the style.

Shizunne - Heavens Tear

You are so harsh onyourself xD and may I ask what kind of mistakes you made? Because, believe me, I dun see any :c (it will help me to observe more carefully xD)

Geckofreak - Sanctuary

Shizunne - Heavens Tear wrote: »

You are so harsh onyourself xD and may I ask what kind of mistakes you made? Because, believe me, I dun see any :c (it will help me to observe more carefully xD)

+1!

I See nothing But Perfection

ovenusarmanio

Shizunne - Heavens Tear wrote: »

oh deary Dx Bella's chibi looks stunning!! I mean really, I have to agree with Bella there, there i snothing to add, srsly. I mean I luv the coloring, the textures everything. Idk really, I dun have anything to compare to, it's is your style which is adorable welll..umm.. it seems perfect to me ninja stolen my thoughts again srry ;x

I sooo wish that I could have gotten one of the chibi spots when they were still open. But I shall wait until one opens again.

This pic just came out amazingly well. Like seriously amazing. Far better than anything I could do. But since you want to us to post any true criticism to help you improve, I will mention one teeny, tiny, itsy bitsy didn't detract from the pic at all, only mentioned cuz you asked for it thing. The hair highlighting, the white line you used for the line is a bit off. It's like should be more like this:



Or have some thickness somewhere near the light source like this:



You don't have to do it that way of course. And it looks fine the way that it is but it was something I kinda sorta noticed when I looked really hard for anything that could be critiqued. Both of those images are from this site:click me!b:surrender Just thought I'd pop in and say what an amazing job you are doing. keep up the great work! I'm way jealous of your ability to draw Chibis and of Bella's veno, it is so well done!::waits patiently in line::

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Bella - I'm not going to make too much changes with the outfit I think. It will definitely still be white, just the hair is a bit meh xD I will try to find a nice long hair

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Shizu & Gecko -Thanks b:chuckle Well it's not like major mistakes, just some fail coloring like around the ears, near the nix tail and some part of the nix wings. It's not that obvious unless you zoom in and look closely. (I tend to do that so I know where my problems are) I tried to be as careful as possible but still some minor problems xD.

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Venus - Thank so much for pointing that out b:cute I always had issues with hair. First with depth, then shades and highlights xD But because I was trying to use flat colors for chibis, I didn't want to go too much into that. However I think I'm going to try the 2nd highlight style on the 2nd pic on the next one and see if that looks better 8D. And thanks for the patience

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I was out today, so didn't quite have time to do anything regarding the second Bella chibi. Maybe tomorrow I will work on it. b:cute

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

Well if you keep the fash white I don't mind if you change it, there's the courtesan dress that is so pretty, but I don't have it (and prolly will not have it before a long time b:cry), if you can try to do it it could be really nice.

http://pwi-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?p=18367741 post 2373, I think it's the best SS I saw from the dress. You can do the dress if you want, but I would prefer not the hair of that set.

To be honest I would prefer her in a white dress, but I don't have any in game.

Any white fash that look cute and girly will be fine.

(Sorry If I seems to ask a lot. xD)

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands wrote: »

Well if you keep the fash white I don't mind if you change it, there's the courtesan dress that is so pretty, but I don't have it (and prolly will not have it before a long time b:cry), if you can try to do it it could be really nice.

http://pwi-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?p=18367741 post 2373, I think it's the best SS I saw from the dress. You can do the dress if you want, but I would prefer not the hair of that set.

To be honest I would prefer her in a white dress, but I don't have any in game.

Any white fash that look cute and girly will be fine.

(Sorry If I seems to ask a lot. xD)

I don't mind doing what you ask lmao, a challenge is a challenge. However I don't think I will do that dress because for one... just the chest area would take 2x the amount of the nix and it is sheer all over the place... I know I can just make it simple but I tend to go for perfection sooo yeah that just take too much time xD. For two, I still have to spend time on the genie (which is also a challenge), I don't quite want to spend a week on one drawing lmao.

Do you just a change of skirt, like the Witch set or Kitty dress? (not the top part of both, just the bottom) Short in the front, longish in the back or you prefer a whole outfit change, something long and simple like Radiant Ceremony? (it will be very simple, pretty much even the **** part is gonna be plain white) OR I can do the Courtesan all plain, like no crazy chest area details, just a fluffy white dress.

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

Mhmm do you think the ballet dress will be enough simple (in white seems plain anyway xD)?? With aegean heels or gilded ribbon heels. than again I don't have SS for any of those. :S (Kinda sold everything when needed money for gears xD)

krisnda

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands wrote: »

Mhmm do you think the ballet dress will be enough simple (in white seems plain anyway xD)?? With aegean heels or gilded ribbon heels. than again I don't have SS for any of those. :S (Kinda sold everything when needed money for gears xD)

@Bella

Aww, I remember when I gad to do the same. But now I realize that I have more fun with PvE anyway, so I never worried about gear -_-.

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

Krisnda wrote: »

@Bella

Aww, I remember when I gad to do the same. But now I realize that I have more fun with PvE anyway, so I never worried about gear -_-.

I unfortunately love TW so gears are important to me. xD

krisnda

xDDD, Lucky you

Esnemyl - Dreamweaver

Mygawsh, that chibi's tail is so fwuffy ;-;

MetzliDemon - Harshlands

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary wrote: »

Bella's Veno is lovely, I found her in-game

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Okay I will admit I'm feeling extremely lazy today LOL. And I have to help mom out later today, sooo I will see what I can do. b:pleased

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Bella - Uhm, yeah I think I can try the Ballet dress, it might not come out all ballet-ish though xD. And don't worry about the screenie for it. I have a ballet dress in game and Glided Ribbon shoes from ps.

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Krissy - Am I the only one that finds gears important though I'm not into PvP? o.o'' Well of course, it is not more important than fash b:chuckle

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Esnemyl - fuffehh *o* lmao. Though I might take awhile to get to your request, but can you repost the pics for me out of photobucket? For some reason when I view them from PB, they are all so tiny like thumbnail sized, couldn't see close up of anything

I believe there was someone else that also posted from PB, and whoever you are, please do the same cause PB hates me :c

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MetzliDemon - Thanks~ and aren't you a stalker b:avoid lmao.

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Here is a WIP for Bella's cleric. I'm thinking about a hair like this at the moment (pink lines, it is a the Victoria Secret [direct translate] hair with bangs from Prissy), but not quite sure. Any suggestions? and with or without bracelet? If so, which?



Now that I realized the new hair is called Victoria Secret in Chinese, I'm guessing we won't get that set either since it was probably pulled out from VS? - -

Esnemyl - Dreamweaver

Really? o.o huh thats odd.. ok I'll post in two seperate posts for my toons.

Esnemyl

Esnemyl - Dreamweaver

Zharkai
(her pirate pants are pink, and she has shining feather shoes)

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary wrote: »

Here is a WIP for Bella's cleric. I'm thinking about a hair like this at the moment (pink lines, it is a the Victoria Secret [direct translate] hair with bangs from Prissy), but not quite sure. Any suggestions? and with or without bracelet? If so, which?



Now that I realized the new hair is called Victoria Secret in Chinese, I'm guessing we won't get that set either since it was probably pulled out from VS? - -

The hair are lovely, but for me it doesn't feel like it was my cleric cause she never had that kind of bang/hair, I watched my SS and even the oldest one she have the thunder ponytail or no hair fash with long straight hair like that:


(I miss my rainbow hair :x)

and with ponytail:



So yea the one you made are very beautiful, but it's nothing close to any hair she had. :S
So if you think you could take one of the SS I just linked I think it will be better. The rest, dress and shoes are really well done, it's simple and I like it. =3 ♥

P.s: by checking my old SS I found one of my cleric old style:



And I had that style for a while. xD (but was wearing again a thunder ponytail when was tired of the mohawk)

@MetzliDemon: Yea I was afk all night at south with my giant pet and thx for the compliment. (I got often compliments for her eyes)

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Esnemyl - yeah I dunno why either, but thank you very much .

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Bella - I actually customizated it to this while waiting for some sort of reply, but if you don't like it then I will change it to thunder pony tail b:pleased Do you have any bracelet in mind that you think would go with this outfit? I would say not gloves, cause that would add too much to the hand.

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

Oh wow I personally prefer those hair for my cleric, it's really pretty and more straight. b:dirty

For the bracelet I think flourishing bracelets are probably the only one that could fit (the one that is 2 flowers on the wrist), than again I don't have SS of those. xD (I feel cheap I don't have SS of anything I ask, you are awesome to find everything even without SS) ♥

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands wrote: »

Oh wow I personally prefer those hair for my cleric, it's really pretty and more straight. b:dirty

For the bracelet I think flourishing bracelets are probably the only one that could fit (the one that is 2 flowers on the wrist), than again I don't have SS of those. xD (I feel cheap I don't have SS of anything I ask, you are awesome to find everything even without SS) ♥

Lmao, if you like it then I will leave it as is. And really, don't worry about fash screenies xD. I'm one of those people that has literally every cute fash (in my opinion) and ps for fash I don't own in PWI b:chuckleb:victory Or I should just say I'm a crazy fash fanatic LOL

Besides it is not call cheap for having little fash, it is call priorities, which for you is gears. You probably have a lot of good gears that I don't have

PS is you cleric's eyes blue or green or blue-ish green? (Just asking before hand, will try to finish coloring cleric today and do the genie today or tomorrow)

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

Turquoise. xD

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Took quite awhile with the coloring, and is only 3/4 done on cleric. Really tired now so, gonna drop dead. Will most likely finish all tomorrow b:cute kay -poof-

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary

Okie dokie, Bella's cleric done as well~ Yeah I was going to make the outfit pure white, but I realized that won't look as nice so I made it to close white pink, which eventually became pink - -'' lmao. CLICKIE for backgroundless one. Again, tiny differences due to PS and SAI issues. Hope you like it (:



The reason I asked for an outfit change and similar pose for both was because I had this in mind at the beginning. However it didn't come out quite as nice because I dunno how to mix 2 canvas in SAI QQ.

krisnda

dawwwww!

Xx_BeLLa_xX - Harshlands

MikoTenshi - Sanctuary wrote: »

Okie dokie, Bella's cleric done as well~ Yeah I was going to make the outfit pure white, but I realized that won't look as nice so I made it to close white pink, which eventually became pink - -'' lmao. CLICKIE for backgroundless one. Again, tiny differences due to PS and SAI issues. Hope you like it (:



The reason I asked for an outfit change and similar pose for both was because I had this in mind at the beginning. However it didn't come out quite as nice because I dunno how to mix 2 canvas in SAI QQ.

Ok sorry if I took time to reply I was trying to check to find something to improve. xD

As you know for me the veno was perfect. I totally love the cleric as well. The shadow on the dress are amazing (the light pink is perfect), she look like a girly angel exactly like I wanted. The genie is so freaking adorable.

I hate criticize you, cause everything you touch finish wonderfully beautiful and all I want is to say how much it's beautiful and how much I love it cause I do, but I know you want to improve, so I'll break my heart and try to get a criticize that can help you to improve.

The cleric have more light colors and is all sweet, but the lines of the skin are dark while the hair and dress are light and sweet, on the veno since the fash was black and the hair more dark that was perfect, but on a char that is more sweet and light I think maybe the skin lines should be more soft. (if it's possible)

So it's personally the only thing I see that could be improve on the next draws.

Thank a million times Miko. I love both of them and can't wait to see more, you work really fast, thank for all the time you take to be sure we will like it and discuss with us about color/style. You are a wonderful artist and person.