Just in case the new suggestion thread isn't "new" Hellbeasts

griffinsoul

ok im planning on going into game design in a couple years and i have an idea and would like feedback and criticisim too (pm me) so here is my idea for a new race the:

Hellbeasts

Backstory: the hellbeasts are the wardens of hell and have played little part in the war so far; until the Wraiths attacked Hellheim the city hidden in the mists where the gates to Hell stand, they released one prisoner and the beginning of the quest chain is based on you catching the creature.

Classes

Reaperess
Female only
Armor:Magic
Weapon:Scythe (requires vit and magic,mainly magic you will see why on skills)(also it looks like its made of light like an aura more than metal, it glows)
Stats:(based on mystic starter)
Demon:HP increase 10% mp increase 10%
Sage:Revive time increased by 1 minute All Souls summon time increase 1 minute
Skills:(i dont have a full list but i will explain what its based on) The Reaperess Main points are a temporary Revive(has a timer, you can fully revive if you have a cleric but baisically she gives dead body mobility for those moments when cleric can't get close enough) and the fact that when she kills a monster she can absorb their soul after which she can summon that monster(same level as when she killed it) for about two minutes. No exp is gained for using Soul Capture when mob is weak, she uses Wood spell however all her spells cost hp as well as mp to cast(see the vit and magic weapon?) and has race skill (more on this later)
Starter Description:(i have no software to design her so i will describe as detailed as possible)
Skin is Seethrough like a shadow, Red eyes, pointed ears(all seethrough like a ghost) she has a seethrough nose and lips that are red and has fangs over the bottom, she crouches when running with her scythe against her back held by her right hand, the handle across her back like ^\. her top is black leather sleevless and a bellyshirt, it has an X connecting the back of it to her black leather pants and an X in front as well, it has arcane swirls based upon the ****(im not trying to be sexual its just how i imagined her) the pants are also black and have a red line up each outer side that curve and meet at her butt like an upside down U she has Black boots that go up to her thighs and have high heels. when she stands still her scythe is held across her shoulderblades with both hands grasping it on each side.

Darkling

Male only
Armor:Light
Weapon:Death Spikes(is like a long curved aura around his hands)(it requires strength and dexterity (mostly strength very little dex)
Stats:(Based on Assasin starter)
Demon: Increases Hp or MP dealt(hehe you will see) by Spirit Drain or Blood Drain by 5% increases def by 5%
Sage:increases Hp or Mp Gained by Spirit Drain or Blood Drain by 5% increases def by 5%
Skills:(yet again i lay out the baisic outline as how i visualize it) The Darkling classes key feature is that it learns Spirit Drain and Blood Drain at level 19 these being self buffs that make it so damage dealt by their Death Spike is transfered to hp if Blood Drain is in effect(not all just a percentage) and Mana if Spirit Drain is in effect, their other skills are based on close combat physical skills stun the enemy and then chain physical attacks, has very little range.
Description:More beastly outlook but similar to Reaperess same seethrough skin, has a Snout with Canines (reaperess looks human in shape) sort of like a wolf it crouches to run and has spikes instead of hands(these are crossed when standing still and when moving they are held behind him dragging on ground), to stick into foes and drain hp/mp these gain a colored aura and change in length and shape, same as the blade on reaperess's scythe. he is bare chested to begin with and wears black trousers Outlined in red(waist,both sides of legs.) he wears black boots.

Racial skill:(i know its been killing you)

the racial skill is Shadowform it is unlocked at level 9. you baisically stealth and can walk through buildings and walls(not mountains only man made structures and trees) however water becomes like air and you fall through it like air and you cannot see anyone anymore than they can see you, also it eats hp AND mp to become shadow form

So this is me trying to design a class to begin with i know it needs alot more detail and stuff but i thought you should try to run it through, it will be a few years before i can be hired after all... Send me feedback GM plz?

krisnda

The suggestion thread is "new" and being looked at.

No need for this thread because you posted this in that thread.

Closing this.