For no reason, here's a story

Lairian - Sanctuary

Hungry?

Huh, I thought I died. After all, isn't that what happens when someone bites you? 'Specially a crazy guy with a bloody face. Wonder what that guy's problem was. Oh well. I can move around, and nothing hurts, so I guess everything's fine.

Wow. I'm really hungry for some reason. It's weird, considering I just ate a few minutes ago. I had a burger at the diner across the street. But for some reason, I'm really hungry. Starving actually. I guess I should just go back to the diner or something. Actually, I think I'd like something fresh. Yeah, fresh is definitely better. None of that over processed stuff like I had earlier. The more recent, the better. What to have, what to have. Hey, there's a bunch of other guys walking towards that gas station over there. Maybe there's some food over there. I'll go check it out, just in case.

No wonder everyone's crowding around, there's something moving fast over there. Sure looks tasty it does. And it's still moving, so I know it's definitely going to be fresh. All I have to do is beat everyone else going for it. Shouldn't be too hard, nobody here's moving that fast, well, except the food anyway. not that I'm moving very fast either. Why it that? I was a runner before I got attacked... Wow. It looks like there's a large chunk of my leg missing. I wonder why that is? Oh well, as long as it works, I don't really care. Besides, I'm too hungry to think about that now. I'll worry about my leg after I've eaten.

Still, it looks like I'm getting to the front of the crowd. It looks like lots of us are missing parts of our legs--and a bunch of other parts as well. I guess being a runner does still have some advantage. Now let me see what my meal is going to be. Oh hey, it's person. Mmmmmm...he does look tasty. More so than everyone else around me anyway. Should I be worried that I'm thinking a human being looks really good right now? Meh, I'll worry about it after I've eaten him. Besides, this guy looks like prime meat. Young, healthy, and with just enough fat to make him nice and juicy and tender. But what to eat first? Hm, his head looks strangely tempting. Maybe Il'll just see what his brains taste like. After all they're considered a delicacy in some countries. I just have to get him before he gets inside.

Oops. Too late not. he's inside, with the door shut. He probably locked it to. Better try the windows. Oh wait, the gas station windows don't open. Guess I'll have to break the glass or something to get in. It's harder than I thought it would be. It must be really thick glass. Of course, the fact that my elbow is apparently dislocated probably doesn't hurt. Why didn't I notice that before? Come to think of it, I didn't notice my leg either. Oh well, I'll eat first, and then think about why I didn't notice stuff like that before.

Wait a minute, what's that guy doing? Looks like he's going to get something from behind the counter. What is that? Is that a shotgun?

Oh damn it.

SilverCleric - Lost City

*Removed by me do to invalid post*

Lairian - Sanctuary

Yay! I finally got it to work. b:pleased So, this is just a little story I wrote for class last year. What do you guys think? Any comments, criticisms, complaints? And do you want me to put up some other stuff I've written? They aren't about the same thing as this one is.

SilverCleric - Lost City

Lairian - Sanctuary wrote: »

Yay! I finally got it to work. b:pleased So, this is just a little story I wrote for class last year. What do you guys think? Any comments, criticisms, complaints? And do you want me to put up some other stuff I've written? They aren't about the same thing as this one is.

Make sure you finish making the thread before posting it... lol

Now you made my post invalid.... I'm removing it..b:surrender

Lairian - Sanctuary

SilverCleric - Lost City wrote: »

Make sure you finish making the thread before posting it... lol

Now you made my post invalid.... I'm removing it..b:surrender

Sorry. It's just that the forum can be a real pain to use sometimes. I was originally trying to move it in from Word, and then just making it more 'forum friendly'. But even so, the forum kept eating it up. Many times. So I had to type it all in myself which finally worked.

Lurani - Raging Tide

"Oops. Too late now, he's inside, with the door shut."

Just had to fix that, was bugging me rofl.

Other then that, it's a fun lil thing to read. Mainly since i do enjoy zombies.
Also this thread made me more hungry, too lazy to get up, gr.

lizrau

by reading the first few sentences Is this about someone being turned into a vampire???....-goes onto the 4th sentence...-

DOUBLE POST!! nvm it's a zombie story.

Lesthar - Heavens Tear

Resident Evil? House of the Dead? Night of the Living Dead?
At any rate it is funny to see what a zombie may think about when transformed as one (do they even think? Are they not just driven by the instinct of hunger and destruction?)

Anyway, good end for the guy at the counter (unless there will be more of them) and bad end for the zombie. Man, I am almost tempted to replay zombie-related flash games, namely 'Dead Frontier Outbreak' one and two... some kinda fully-voiced choose your destiny zombie-related stories.

Abstractive - Archosaur

Really cool story, bro. In a totally NOT sarcastic way.