Need some feedback

Waterfal - Sanctuary

Hea there ^^

so I got bored this evening.. and decided to draw some
Can't scan it in yet unfortunatly (people will kill me since everyones asleep and that scanner makes one hell of a lot of noise ~__~ it's 0.30 here)

Anyway... I did take a photograph from it b:chuckle

I'm going to take classes in visualisation next year (if everything goes well) and want to get better in drawing before that So some feedback would be greatly appreciated ^^

Sorry for the weird angle but otherwise I'm hanging in my own light -_-"




here's another drawing I started on... but ofc I start detailing like an idiot on the eye straight away.. and then never finish it.... ^^" so here's an eye rofl...


Anyway.. I'll put some pics here that are actually scanned in here later
Some feedback would be really appreciated ^^ and don't go soft on me b:laugh


~waterfal

Misspoppycok - Heavens Tear

These are really nice sketches 8D I'll try my best to help >u<

So!:
-your eyes are very proportionate
-your drawing style rocks
-and you have a basic idea of where things are

One thing to keep in mind when drawing faces is to have a midline for the face. It's easier to keep things in proportions that way and figure out placement!

I drew out some lines ;___; hope they help~~ I've by no means a master of this.
When it comes down to drawing people tho, it all goes back to knowing anatomy and proportions (i said that word 3 times now....i feel like an old, forgetful granny >___>) Hope they're easy to see @____@


Anyway! Good luck with your classes b:chuckle

Silvychar - Sanctuary

Nice sketches, Waterfal!
I especially like the eyes =D

Just one thing that bugs me is the mouth ;/
What Poppy said is something I should keep in mind as well

Waterfal - Sanctuary

Thanks a lot to both of you ^^

@Misspoppycok: I indeed gotta watch those lines a bit ^^ I did put a midline, but it's always kinda out of place I guess and ofc I erase it when I'm done hehe...

Going to make some more drawings in a few I guess, so I'll keep it in mind
I indeed gotta look better at anatomy and proportions. I also try to draw full body's.. but omg @___@ proportions are horrible hehe...

@Silvy: hehe yeh, nose and mouth are both bothering me... I tried to draw the mouth in "perspective" so the mouth should be a bit "shorter" on the side that is further away.. it's hard to get that right though xD

And here's the version that's scanned in btw ^^


clicky for bigger version -^-^-