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Waterfal - Sanctuary
Waterfal - Sanctuary Posts: 2,723 Arc User
edited April 2010 in The Fanatics Forum
Today I started to draw my venomanver on a3 paper (couldn't scan it >_> so I had to make a photo of it >.<").
It's only a sketch, but I think it worked out pretty well. Later I'll work out two versions, one in black and white and one coloured.

I used two pictures to draw her from. Her face is the one you see below in my siggy ^^ the other screenshot is one I purely made for her armour.
venomancerwaterfal002.jpg

Already saw a lot of people on the forum who are really.. really much beter then me.. but I wanna post it anyway b:chuckle
maybe I can get some feedback and opinions :) b:thanks

oke here's a pic of current status.I tried to fix her face alignment. mouth worked out pretty oke now too :)
venomancerwaterfalinpro.jpg
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
Thanks Silvychar for the awesome sig :3

Characters:
waterfal - lvl 90 demon ferrari veno
Hazumi_chan - lvl 9x sage seeker
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  • Haseo_ThePKK - Sanctuary
    Haseo_ThePKK - Sanctuary Posts: 197 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    it's pretty good to be honest, only issues i see maybe is the mouth is a bit off, other wise very nice work.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Sig by Forsakenx

    "At the midpoint on the journey of life, I found myself at a dark forest, for the clear path was lost."
    ~Dante Canto I of 'The Divine Comedy'
  • Waterfal - Sanctuary
    Waterfal - Sanctuary Posts: 2,723 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    thanks b:thanksb:cute

    I didn't notice the mouth :) thanks for saying. I'll try to adjust it in the coloured version :)
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Thanks Silvychar for the awesome sig :3

    Characters:
    waterfal - lvl 90 demon ferrari veno
    Hazumi_chan - lvl 9x sage seeker
  • Ophida - Dreamweaver
    Ophida - Dreamweaver Posts: 971 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    The right hand side of the face appears to be slightly higher in alignment than the left (or the left hand side is lower - your choice). The right eye is also a tad smaller than the left. Other than that, and the mouth as Haseo pointed out, it is rather nice work. I'm really looking forward to seeing the completed work ^^
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    tempest-dw.shivtr.com
  • Grippieluver - Lost City
    Grippieluver - Lost City Posts: 9,807 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    thatz a really good drawing, soo much better than i could do, ya i agree with Haseo, the mouth seemz a but off
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]Thankiez to Dorset for the sig!

    MagicHamsta will remain in our hearts forever

    P.S. I am a female venomancer ^^ I know it's rare, isn't it?
  • Waterfal - Sanctuary
    Waterfal - Sanctuary Posts: 2,723 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    thanks for all the responses b:thanks

    I already coloured the face :/ so It's going to be hard to change it. But I'll try ^^
    Can't change the eyes anymore without **** it up though. Already coloured around it in a pretty dark colour.

    I'm working it out with coloured pencil atm. (not on the original just in case I **** up) I gues I might try waterpaint too if I feel like it. :)
    For that version I can fix her face alignment and the eyes. :)
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Thanks Silvychar for the awesome sig :3

    Characters:
    waterfal - lvl 90 demon ferrari veno
    Hazumi_chan - lvl 9x sage seeker
  • Haseo_ThePKK - Sanctuary
    Haseo_ThePKK - Sanctuary Posts: 197 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    Ophida is right the face is off, but i didnt notice XP just thought she was at an angle standing lol. but as my art teacher always said there are no mistakes in art just new challenges. X3
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Sig by Forsakenx

    "At the midpoint on the journey of life, I found myself at a dark forest, for the clear path was lost."
    ~Dante Canto I of 'The Divine Comedy'
  • Ophida - Dreamweaver
    Ophida - Dreamweaver Posts: 971 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    Oh totally. I'm a harsh critic - especially of my own work! I'll hopefully be posting stuff for you guys to rip apart soon. So get your revenge then! As I said, I'm really looking forward to seeing the finished product :3 Good luck and most importantly, have fun!
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    tempest-dw.shivtr.com
  • Kittennice - Heavens Tear
    Kittennice - Heavens Tear Posts: 2,744 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    Umm could it be a bit off because the paper is tilted? @.@ I'm seeing slanted paper...

    Good job, Waterfal =^^=
    The VenoX: Heavy Pure Melee (Axe User with a hint of magic) Venomancer and Proud
    Having fun since lv1
    5 more levels baby!
    ^_____^
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    I'm for The Cursed!
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  • Waterfal - Sanctuary
    Waterfal - Sanctuary Posts: 2,723 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    @ Kittennice: I was standing in a weird angle with my photocamera ^^' the paper is laying flat ;)

    @Ophida: hehe ^^ well if noone is harsh enough to tell the lil mistakes in it I wont see them either :P so criticism is good :3

    Still working on it. can't find the right blue for her hair >.<"
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Thanks Silvychar for the awesome sig :3

    Characters:
    waterfal - lvl 90 demon ferrari veno
    Hazumi_chan - lvl 9x sage seeker

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