I'm bored so here's a song that has nothing to do with PWI

Hathian - Dreamweaver

feel free to flame or whatever, I generally don't care. Constructive criticism is always welcome but please don't tell me what I did wrong if you know nothing of lyricism.

yes - it is repetitive.
yes - it uses seemingly simple rhyms.

but if you're going to say it's easy to write lyrics, post something better

Untitled - Copyright Kohl Clark all rights etc etc (kidding)

Here I am once again, staring down the road
Not a penny to my name, and I'm going for broke
Will I fall or will I fight; only time will tell
But for now I'll say goodnight, cause the day has just been hell.

And I am - I am just a face without a name
Kick me & trick me, hurts me all the same
And I am- I am a song without a soul
Listed up children, this young man's growing old.

Here we are once again, begging on our knees
Will you come and save me, oh god just save us please
Will we live or will we die, only time will tell
But for now we'll say goodnight, cause the week has just been hell.

And we are - we are tomorrow's left behind
Thrown away, another day, but we don't really mind.
Yeah we are - we are broken down and weak
Got no strength left to crawl, but we'll stand up, don't you see?

For we are - yeah, we are the bricks laid in the streets
The broken homes, long left alone, the flowers and the trees
We are - we are far more than you can know
A driving force, straight on course, our power will be shown

And there you are, once again, begging on your knees
You can give but can you take it, now it's you who's begging "please"
Will we fall or will be thrive, only time will tell
But for now the world'll say goodnight, tomorrow we'll be well.

also, props to anyone who can figure out the 'theme'

b:bye