The hidden secret in the fire

mcdry · April 2015

again online

Hello everyone!
I have just finished my Foundry. If anyone can play it and post his Feedback on this site, I'll be happy.^^
The most important things in my quest are: 1. Graphics 2. Combat 3. Story.
I have integrated 2 Sidebattles and lots of not obligated story. (Watch out for blue flames. They are my sign.)
There are 2 different levels. *difficult* for character above level 60 and *easy* (which is only a bit easier).

The follow sentences in green shows the solution of the 2 Sidebattles.

1. Sidebattle:
Object: Near to the entrance; on the way.
Use: After the room full with ashes go ahead. At the end, there is a banner. Use it there.

2. Sidebattle:
Object: Interact with the altar after the 2. speech with Monsieur. (First read, than interact)
Use: Afterwards there is a bigger altar with totems on it. Use it there.

Q.Name: The hidden secret in the fire
ID: NW-DFABCWBXX
Type: exploration/ fighting/ (reading)
Duration: 20-30 minutes
Lots of combat, a bit of story
2 Maps: (1. Lyncols Inn/ burning memories)
Mission summary:
Looking for a new adventure you hear from a guest house called Lyncols Inn, where just recently a group of adventurers was hired by the organisation, but never came back again.

Visit this guest house and ask for a well paid, fame promising job.

Author: @mcdry

1. Screenshot: Lyncols Inn

2. Screenshot: The beginning

3. Screenshot: What's that?

(Sorry for the bad quality. My launcher is bugged, so I cannot post any better pictures. Something went also wron with the size...)

Thank you for your dedication. I hope you'll enjoy it.

Edit: Map-load failure fixed.

valcontar73 · April 2015

Nice job with the two maps, great at detail.

Didn't found anything wrong, and I didn't have any problem with my TR (15K) smashing all the monsters in hard difficulty.

Keep the good work!

gutspasm · April 2015

Hi,

Played through and enjoyed it, your maps are well stocked, but a couple of comments...

1. Some of the dialogue is a little confusing. Couldn't work out what the main thrust of the quest was, esp in the Inn, it could use a bit of clarity. - As a side note Check through your spelling, look at instances of "There/Their/They're" and make sure you're using the correct one.
2. I played through with a GF level 30 and some of the fights were a bit manic. Wondered if it would be too tough for a caster class?
3. Traps! I agree they're annoying.
4. My companion got trapped behind the rock fall bit. Maybe delay it another second or so??

Regards.

mcdry · April 2015

Thank you.

I'll do something about the rock fall. Maybe 2 more secounds. I'll especially check out my spelling mistakes.
It should be a bit heavy in combat for all classes. But not too hard.

Thanks again
mcdry

melinden · April 2015

I tried to review your quest, but I'm not sure if it was the grammar and spelling that prevented me from understanding what was going on or you were trying to make it as absurd as possible. Unfortunately I couldn't make any sense out of the dialogue in the inn so I didn't continue.

mcdry · April 2015

The dialogues in the Inn should be confusing. They are all NPC's with there individual problems. Only Jonson's and Jack's dialogues are important for the storyline.

But I'm going to change all dialogues to make the story better.

mcdry · May 2015

I have changed my storyline. Now it should be more realistic.
I have corrected my spelling errors too and worked on my maps.

If you find any mistakes, please post them to me.

Thanks for your feedback.

The hidden secret in the fire

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