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xxkarmasangelxxxxkarmasangelxx Member Posts: 7 Arc User
edited September 2014 in Foundry Quest Database
Merlin in Wonderland - Part One- Learn the Basics

Learn the basics of your spell book as you begin your quest for knowledge while learning the path to who you are, play as Merlin (the wizard) in an action filled story line foundry. Follow the story of love, life, magic and adventure (while getting some nice little drops as well -luck provided since i dont control loot/drops-)
Merlin in Wonderland - Part One-Learn the Basics by @xxkarmasangelxx
Short Code:NWS-DPYCS6JH8
Mission Type: med-intended for solo play
Average Duration: 20 mins +/-
Amount of Combat: light- med.
Starts at: any map exit
Mission Summary: Think the hero, be the hero, and continue the story to end the old wizard's tale. Learn your spells, fight off the monsters, and destroy Queen Mabb once and for all (once you train up a bit ofcourse).
Author tips/hints:DO NOT FOLLOW THE YELLOW SPARKLE LINE, use your map instead please.
Screenshots/attachments:
http://imgur.com/9srPIck
http://imgur.com/m99ZqWs
http://imgur.com/9PzfDpG
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    xxkarmasangelxxxxkarmasangelxx Member Posts: 7 Arc User
    edited February 2014
    can anyone please play/ review this please?..It's my first one and I'd like to know what people think of it
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    tiborrustiborrus Member Posts: 94 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Hi!

    I just played your quest with my Lev.60. GWF.
    Very enjoyable, good story, here my advices:

    Forest of Wonders:

    - the house is floating above the ground(see the stairs!)
    - "Press F to A nice spot to rest" -> Press F to rest
    - the "purple lake" not too good in the forest, the water plane is floating in the air
    - Map transition: "Press F to go to the next map" -> Press F to go to the Lair

    The Lair:

    - You use very big rooms, but these are completely empty.More-more details recommended!
    - Lighting: in one room you use three different color torch, yellow, red and blue. I think, this is too much.And on the wall is yellow torch, but the light is white. Use here the static_light yellow or red.
    - Orb of the Past : one typo in the text -> "meed more than tricks..."(need more...)
    - Map transition: "Press F to go to the next map" -> "Press F to go home" (but no teleport, no door...?)

    Home:

    - Very-very big room and empty! Why is the bed in the corner?
    - the barrier and portal effect not too good, I could go on behind the barrier. Use invisible walls here!

    It wasn't a derogatory criticism! This is a good first Foundry quest!

    My review: 4/5! :)
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    xxkarmasangelxxxxkarmasangelxx Member Posts: 7 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    whoot!! ty for doing my foundry and im glad you liked it,
    as for the first map i think i fixed everything ..or hope i did O.o
    and the lair being empty is supposed to give it a cold and distant feel...like youre in the lair of the mistress of magic, and you can feel how cold hearted she has become over the years of watching her subjects turn away from her. but as far as the lighting its all supposed to be blue and purple O.o, so ty for telling me that and i hope i fixed it all xD, and yes im bad on typos :p ty for seeing that one
    and the home lair was supposed to have an invisible wall...i guess it got eaten :( ty for letting me know and that will be fixed too ^-^


    edit: the rock you come in for mabbs lair is the same you leave out of, so no...no door...the rock is the door..and the teleport. :3
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    xxkarmasangelxxxxkarmasangelxx Member Posts: 7 Arc User
    edited March 2014
    Thank you to everyone who played and reviewed my foundry :), 10 plays so far and few great reviews =D. I hope more people will play it and enjoy it too <3
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    xxkarmasangelxxxxkarmasangelxx Member Posts: 7 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Merlin in Wonderland - Part One- Learn the Basics

    Learn the basics of your spell book as you begin your quest for knowledge while learning the path to who you are, play as Merlin (the wizard) in an action filled story line foundry. Follow the story of love, life, magic and adventure (while getting some nice little drops as well -luck provided since i dont control loot/drops-)
    Merlin in Wonderland - Part One-Learn the Basics by @xxkarmasangelxx
    Short Code:NWS-DPYCS6JH8
    Mission Type: med-intended for solo play
    Average Duration: 20 mins +/-
    Amount of Combat: light- med.
    Starts at: any map exit
    Mission Summary: Think the hero, be the hero, and continue the story to end the old wizard's tale. Learn your spells, fight off the monsters, and destroy Queen Mabb once and for all (once you train up a bit ofcourse).
    Author tips/hints:DO NOT FOLLOW THE YELLOW SPARKLE LINE, use your map instead please.
    Screenshots/attachments:
    http://imgur.com/9srPIck
    http://imgur.com/m99ZqWs
    http://imgur.com/9PzfDpG


    NEW UPDATED MAPS!!!!

    added new mobs, better challenges and more for those of you who requested it ^-^

    new screens: Map 1
    http://imgur.com/YjivUfn
    http://imgur.com/ZJywEk0
    http://imgur.com/puKrRmg
    http://imgur.com/bDT7bNc
    ~~Map 2
    http://imgur.com/OXVKJGt
    http://imgur.com/YEMK1DY
    http://imgur.com/ErOiymz
    http://imgur.com/17QIu4x
    ~~Map 3
    http://imgur.com/7DhVBI1
    http://imgur.com/bOFhvVM


    same name, same nub founder :p
    hope you all like the updated version <3
    (p.s. *hints*open maps to look for the quest points
    or follow the blue mushrooms/ blue crystals)
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    xxkarmasangelxxxxkarmasangelxx Member Posts: 7 Arc User
    edited September 2014
    Posting to get more plays :), if you play and have any questions/ comments/advice please let me know
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