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The Deceived Protector Ep.1 + NW-DKCZD9C7H *(Awsome)*

lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
edited December 2013 in The Foundry
I Would like if some of the foundry community can find time try out my new foundry map " The Deceived Protector" NW-DKCZD9C7H its only found in the "new section of foundry . I Spent a lot of time and effort into this map and working on the second episode. I would Really appreciate it if I could get a couple reviews...

You were given a cursed book bound in human flesh. You were told it contains the knowledge to change the fate of neverwinter and reject dagult Neverembers claim to the throne. With book in hand you find yourself in a world of visual detail and amazing storyline. This is episode one of three. hope you enjoy!:cool::D:D
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  • lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    screenshot_2013-12-12-13-49-19_zps74cc460f.jpghere are some screen shots of my quest..screenshot_2013-12-12-13-54-37_zpsf898ed6d.jpgscreenshot_2013-12-12-13-53-00_zpsd305d29a.jpg
  • lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    the storyline and visual detail are very enjoyable. Please try it out and review.
  • lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    well this sux.. spend days on top of weeks and find out foundry is dead and the whole reason I started to play again was for not..."F" it im still going to make my campaign and hope the true foundry lovers will enjoy. PLEASE PLAY MY MAP LOL!
  • antonkyleantonkyle Member Posts: 776 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    It looks good from the pics so I will play it when I can. I have a few to do and little time though. Maybe you could offer trades and get your guild to play the quest if you have one. Also a bit of info here would help. Combat level, duration time, quest type.. that sort of thing. Once you get 20 plays it becomes available for the Daily. But sadly the search system is not working and it is very hard to get plays.
  • melindenmelinden Member Posts: 619 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    Always offer trades, just always. Help other authors help you.

    When I have today's stack of grading done I'll do today's reviews. But to be honest I'm less inclined to play when the authors are demanding plays, although I usually let my sense of duty to new authors (since we were all new once) win out.
    Find me in game with @DoctorBadger
    (Un)Academic Field Work Foundry Campaign: NWS-DAPZB2CTZ
  • antonkyleantonkyle Member Posts: 776 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    OK, Where to start. First of all this was an easy five star for me. but...

    Oh and there is a but.

    First of you could mention that the mysterious traveler is in Blacklake. I had an empty quest log so just followed the z thing, but it could have been frustrating.

    It would be a good idea to break your text up. All that writing is hard to digest in one go without any gaps. The content is very good however, but there is far, far to much. Most of it is discription writing. It's not a book. You could cut half of it out and still be left with a heavy read. Let your maps do the talking they are amazing.

    The story is very good, but because there is so much text the temptation to skim read proves just to great and then I found myself annoyed because I missed things. The maps are breathtaking, good job.

    My final thoughts are: It's a good quest, it could be epic and I really do mean that. EPIC!
  • lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    thank you so much all =) I appreciate the comments ... I will polish the first episode asap, but working on episode two at the moment and have good ideas so im trying to get it going before I polish part one... thank you guys please keep the ideas and comments coming it will help me polish the quest to epic from good =)..
  • lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    atonkyle thank you for you expertise.. its priceless for a new author thank you again and I would love more ideas and comments from you on anything I make...
  • slinkyalslinkyal Member Posts: 33 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    I will give it a play when this stupid patch finishes downloading.
    Play "Deed to My Soul" NW-DH713QG92
  • lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    sweet thank you
  • lordshade420lordshade420 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited December 2013
    anyone els wanna give it a try. ?
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