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The Dagger and The Rose

xiaofungfungxiaofungfung Member Posts: 4 Arc User
edited November 2013 in Foundry Quest Database
The Dagger and The Rose by @xiaofungfung

Short Code: NW-DKAP4DJ2F
Mission Type: Investigation
Average Duration: 20 minutes
Amount of Combat: 75%
Start at: Protector's Enclave, Nobleman Burkhard
Mission Summary: Collecting Debt, Investigate missing Coins
Hints: The Blood Dagger able to slay some mobs instantly
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  • phoeniciansonphoenicianson Member Posts: 150 Arc User
    edited October 2013
    I will run your quest, will you run mine in exchange?

    Fall of the City of Grumura

    I will PM you any notes when I am done playing through tomorrow.
  • xiaofungfungxiaofungfung Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited October 2013
    I have run City of Grumura, great work. Any comment on my foundry is appreciated, I am learning to approve myself.
    I have make 2 more foundry, both under "for review" Blood 1.0 and Blood 2.0, if you have time please comment what to improve.
    Cheers.
  • phoeniciansonphoenicianson Member Posts: 150 Arc User
    edited October 2013
    I have played through your quest. It is a strong foundation to what could become a solid quest. I have taken some notes for you, and I am going to PM them to you.

    If you are interested in joining an out of game guild of foundry authors, check out Scribes Enclave. I am actually a reviewer for the guild, so I tend to review a ton of foundries and provide insight and suggestions. I am PMing you my suggestions now.

    I will play your other quest... can you also play my sequel. I saw your review, I think you will find that the sequel puts together more of the story for the follow up quests that I am working on publishing now. It has just been published tonight, "The Demi-God's Return". You can search for it probably under Review, or perhaps the New Tab, since the City of Grumura and this new quest have been consolidated into a Campaign. The title of the campaign is called, "The Revenge of Asmodeus".

    Please consider posting your review on my actual publication's forum page, I provided the link in my last post, as well as my signature leads you to a link to the page as well.

    Thanks in advance for playing the follow up quest, and I am sure you will find the storyline more satisfying. The storyline in Grumura was intentionally thin. It was like an intro quest, but there was optional dialogue that you could have engaged with Priest Pius.

    Let me know what you think, the new quest does not have a foundry page yet. If you are interested in joining Scribes Enclave, check out the guild website at, www.scribesenclave.guildlaunch.com
  • boudicciaboudiccia Member Posts: 74 Arc User
    edited October 2013
    I will run your mission if you run mine: The Return to Sloping Street NW-DACVPHGHW

    Thanks
    Try my Foundry: Claiming the Halfling Quarter NW-DIRT5MWZH
    Sequel: The Return to Sloping Street NW-DACVPHGHW
    Part 3: The Merchant's Tower NW-DC3LB6TZ9
  • xiaofungfungxiaofungfung Member Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited November 2013
    I run the return, the cathedral is cool, the first outdoor map is ok, overall a nice foundry.
  • boudicciaboudiccia Member Posts: 74 Arc User
    edited November 2013
    I just finished the mission: The Dagger and the Rose. It was a good well thought out story but it was a little too hard. My Cleric could not even complete it. I had to run it with my Control Wizard to beat the stacked encounters on the second map.
    Try my Foundry: Claiming the Halfling Quarter NW-DIRT5MWZH
    Sequel: The Return to Sloping Street NW-DACVPHGHW
    Part 3: The Merchant's Tower NW-DC3LB6TZ9
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