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I need rates on my first foundry

supergalingsupergaling Member Posts: 14 Arc User
edited October 2013 in The Foundry
Well I made my first foundry, it's rough though.. I'm still getting used to the foundry and I'm still comprehending it's capabilities and such.. A detailed review without being harsh will be much appreciated. NW-DN5473FET Silent Hill: Neverwinter. Yeah, I adapted the silent hill franchise. I made the monsters look like the monsters in SH and the ambiance but the storyline though it's rough was made by me..:cool: I made this foundry because i really like SH.
rate my foundry Silent Hill: Neverwinter/NW-DN5473FET
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  • winterswitchwinterswitch Member Posts: 95 Arc User
    edited October 2013
    Super,

    I could not complete your quest. The dungeon room with the Nurses...there are simply too many mobs for a solo level 60 (without aoe) to kill.

    Sorry.
    The Green Zone (NW-DP66H66F6): Train at a top-secret Goblin military installation.
    Hive Mind (NW-DN9YKEVUS): Get inside a crashed alien ship to discover its purpose.
    Absolute Zero (NW-DOVUXHT8P): Activate a massive teleportation machine to pursue an evil mastermind.
  • nimzowitchnimzowitch Member Posts: 30
    edited October 2013
    I agree with winterswitch. I did manage to complete your quest (with aoe,) but that nurse encounter is stacked way too high. Most of the other encounters in the dungeon area are heavy as well. I liked the costume work that you did on the "strong monster God" encounter, and I thought the sound work was well done. I thought the best environment overall was the final chest area, but you pulled off a good creepy environment throughout. Eliza's mementos need to have their stock names changed. Also, I picked up a few typos:

    Guard Frinko dialogue:
    "I'ts" should be "It's"

    Creepy girl dialogue:
    "Do you know where is Eliza?" > "Do you know where Eliza is?"
    "through out" > "throughout"

    Also, Eliza's name needs to be capitalized in one of the opening dialogues, but I forgot to note it.

    Tame that dungeon area and this will be ready for the average player. Good work. Please give "Into the Drow Helix" a play when you can.
  • supergalingsupergaling Member Posts: 14 Arc User
    edited October 2013
    nimzowitch wrote: »
    I agree with winterswitch. I did manage to complete your quest (with aoe,) but that nurse encounter is stacked way too high. Most of the other encounters in the dungeon area are heavy as well. I liked the costume work that you did on the "strong monster God" encounter, and I thought the sound work was well done. I thought the best environment overall was the final chest area, but you pulled off a good creepy environment throughout. Eliza's mementos need to have their stock names changed. Also, I picked up a few typos:

    Guard Frinko dialogue:
    "I'ts" should be "It's"

    Creepy girl dialogue:
    "Do you know where is Eliza?" > "Do you know where Eliza is?"
    "through out" > "throughout"

    Also, Eliza's name needs to be capitalized in one of the opening dialogues, but I forgot to note it.

    Tame that dungeon area and this will be ready for the average player. Good work. Please give "Into the Drow Helix" a play when you can.

    thanks for the feedback.. i'll be sure to give it go:)
    rate my foundry Silent Hill: Neverwinter/NW-DN5473FET
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