Review my Quests' please! I will review others' in exchange!!

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• phoenicianson Member Posts: 150 Arc User

  September 2013 edited September 2013

  I do your entire campaign, if you play through my one quest, although I am sure my one quest will be the length of your entire campaign. Yet, I believe, similarly to your feeling over your quest, that you will also thoroughly enjoy mine.
  
  Let me know, you can find more about it here:
  
  http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?493731-Introducing-New-Foundry-The-Dark-Secret-at-Highgate
  
  The person who finished playing though first provided a very nice review that you can read when you look at the quest on the Review Board. You can also save my quest by leaving a map and returning, unless of course it bugs, but each map uses the Overworld Feature, so you can return to each map and continue where you left off if you need to break up the quest into a couple of plays.
  
  Let me know.

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• boudiccia Member Posts: 74 Arc User

  September 2013 edited September 2013

  I attempted Culling the dead but had to abandon due to the end boss being too hard. Remember not everyone has high GS. First part needs more story. This was pretty much all combat with lots of stacked encounters.

  Try my Foundry: Claiming the Halfling Quarter NW-DIRT5MWZH
  Sequel: The Return to Sloping Street NW-DACVPHGHW
  Part 3: The Merchant's Tower NW-DC3LB6TZ9

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• nimzowitch Member Posts: 30

  September 2013 edited September 2013

  I tried all four of them. I agree with boudiccia that the boss encounter at the end of Culling the Dead is stacked too high. I died once and burned a lot of pots to get through it. I thought the interiors looked good though, with just enough detail to make them interesting. In the Cleric of Lurue dialogue, "some how" should be "somehow." In the Creed dialogue, "the gates need closed," should be "the gates need to be closed."
  
  In Disturbance in Neverwinter your quest objectives "Speak with Cleric Freemor," and "Return to Cleric Freemor" both lead you to the Cleric of Lurue. In the Zigto dialogue, change "to much" to "too much." And in the second Lurue dialogue, "important then" should be "important than." Even though you have no encounters in this part making it feel like an errand boy mission, I thought it did a good job of setting up the story.
  
  In Finding the Pieces change "to suprising," in the commoner's dialogue to "too surprising." I was not able to finish this as one of your crypt doorways does not connect to the room leading to the next objective. I searched for false walls or a switch somewhere, but had to abandon it.
  
  In Return of Myrukll, "alter" should be "altar" in the Lurue dialogue, and "to long" should be "too long" in Melissa's dialogue. I would move your first encounter away from the spawn point in this quest. I think most players dislike getting ambushed. In the boss fight, Myruklls' Intellect fights with you as a guard. Not sure that you intended it to be that way, but it certainly helped. Also, the interaction you have set up with the Altar of Undeath does not seem to do anything. I was unable to complete the final dialogue to finish this quest due to failing the skill check options and had to abandon it.
  
  I think this will be a good campaign with a little more work. Nice job. Please give mine a try when you get a chance:
  
  -Into the Drow Helix
  
  -Siren's Cove Castaways

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• jayfloyd1979 Member Posts: 10 Arc User

  October 2013 edited October 2013

  Thanks for all the good feedback everyone. Especially nimzowitch. Sorry it has taken so long to respond and fix everything, been dealing with some personal stuff. I am planning on having a new updated version by the next update. Thanks again!! Also I havent forgotten about your quests, I just havent done anything with NW in a few weeks. Again Thanks!!
  
  jayfloyd

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