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First Part in the Of the Cinder Campaign is up

mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
edited August 2013 in The Foundry
I'm trying to build a strong story based campaign, and want to get some reviews from folks who've been around.

NW-DNDE4KQMA

This first installment introduces some of the major player in our little story, how big this gets will be up to the players and what you want to see

It's a little tongue and cheek.. so have fun.
Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
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  • mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Self Bump Attention grabber
    Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

    First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

    If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
  • mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Done some revamping tweeked some atmospherics. Still think there might be a dead end or two. Thanks to those who've played it so far please let me know if there are any quests you'd like me to take on.
    Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

    First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

    If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
  • aaldaemonaaldaemon Member Posts: 94
    edited August 2013
    I'll trade you a review. :) My quest is in my signature.

    I'm going to go play and review yours now.
    Assassination Contract NW-DOD6JMS5H - story + combat. Trading reviews.
    I'm improving my quest on an almost daily basis - so if you come back to it after a week or so, it won't be quite the same!
  • mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    I'm jut starting work but i will get you tonight thank you
    Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

    First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

    If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
  • aaldaemonaaldaemon Member Posts: 94
    edited August 2013
    Just played and reviewed it.

    Wow, now that was strange! :D

    Good combat pace, loads of strangeness, overall it was one of the most unusual quests I've seen so far.

    My suggestion would be to add more details to environments, and maybe explain some steps a bit better. :) I also noticed a few minor text errors, mostly use of punctuation. Polish is always good. :)
    Assassination Contract NW-DOD6JMS5H - story + combat. Trading reviews.
    I'm improving my quest on an almost daily basis - so if you come back to it after a week or so, it won't be quite the same!
  • mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Tried to run your dungeon but could not complete it.. i was really enjoying it too. i was in the room with the bust of a man pointing out. and because of the combat or something in the next room i couldn't open the door to get in to start the next section. I was playing on the standard difficulty not easy. let me know it the bug gets fixed I'd like to finish it
    Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

    First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

    If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
  • mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    revamped using constructive info from previous plays .. thanks to those contributing
    Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

    First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

    If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
  • mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    3.0 is up Lots of new goodies for people who've already run this one once.. Really want this one to work part 2 is going to be a blast
    Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

    First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

    If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
  • mrdivianmrdivian Member Posts: 18 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Cheap plug new look modified story
    Hiltrig'n Trixter Rogue on Beholder

    First Foundry: Divian's Dagger: NW-DNDE4KQMA

    If at first you don't succeed, get the shovel and find a good place to bury it :)
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