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jedite2012jedite2012 Member Posts: 177 Arc User
edited August 2013 in The Foundry
I will play and review your quest on one condition

It cannot be long, 30 minutes max.

You can review mine if you want
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  • zerkovaplayerzerkovaplayer Member Posts: 51 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Check out mine. Average play time is currently 12 minutes.
    Foundry Quest: Breaking the Chain NW-DELOGH4IH
    (Daily eligible! Could use more reviews. Largely complete.)
  • antonkyleantonkyle Member Posts: 776 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Damb it! Mine can be done in 31 minutes.
  • eldartheldarth Member Posts: 4,494 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    You can check out Invasion! -- should be about 15 minutes - but take your time, it's just under now and I'd like to get it into daily range.
  • jedite2012jedite2012 Member Posts: 177 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    @zerkovaplayer
    Tried your quest, it was fun other than few issues, for one use the out of character text for when the dialog is explaining something directly to you (the player) like "he gives you the amulet" or something.

    And maybe add some music, doesn't have to be music maybe ambient to make the outdoor place more alive.

    other than that, pretty good quest

    @antonkyle
    I played your quest before :)
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  • rogu3ishrogu3ish Member Posts: 84
    edited August 2013
    Not sure if you've run mine or not yet. I'm still looking for feedback on the second one (Fleshrend's Big Adventure). If you don't go exploring the side quests it can be done in about 20 minutes.
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    Felling the Forgemaster: NW-DOHCJ5VE3 (Elligible for Foundry Daily)
    Fleshrend's Big Adventure: NW-DBWJJYFDK
    (Elligible for Foundry Daily)
  • jedite2012jedite2012 Member Posts: 177 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    @ eldarth
    Done your quest, i liked it though i did get confused at the start like i was standing in the blue circle and nothing was happening then i remembered that an NPC suppose to tell me the direction of where the invaders coming from. Also i killed them quick so the timer system was a bit slow and took awhile for the next wave to show, other than that 5 stars.

    I also like what you did with the environment, being able to go inside the mansion without going to the next map was a great idea, i was able to go in and out of the mansion without loading a next map...genius, gave me a few ideas
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  • eldartheldarth Member Posts: 4,494 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    jedite2012 wrote: »
    Also i killed them quick so the timer system was a bit slow and took awhile for the next wave to show

    Excellent. Do you recall how long it took you? I was trying to tweak the between wave delay to get the entire thing up to just over 15 minutes.
  • antonkyleantonkyle Member Posts: 776 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    jedite2012 wrote: »
    @antonkyle
    I played your quest before :)

    Have you played part two? :p

    It's a good 40 minutes though.
  • jedite2012jedite2012 Member Posts: 177 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    probably between 10-20 seconds, dunno did not really count,

    @rogu3ish
    I played your quest, bit long but still enjoyed it, as an animal lover only thing i didn't like was killing the small dog even if they are not real i don't really like that stuff

    other than that interesting story good ending too
    Have you played part two?

    It's a good 40 minutes though.
    Probably when i feel up for a long foundry quest i will give it ago

    Don't forget guys you can try out my foundry too, in my sig
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  • evikroevikro Member Posts: 6 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    You can try mine. It is my first quest, The Blight of Korithor.
    The code is: NW-DQBQ73M7V
  • kimbyrkimbyr Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users, Silverstars, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    The Hero Test (New daily quest) 18-20 min. long
    The Hero Test
    Short code: NW-DSRSYXEOJ

    I am not normally speaking English, so I do have some “wrong Typos” in my quest.

    http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?443961-The-Hero-Test-(New-daily-quest)

    I will reviw your quest.
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    The Dark Wizard Campaign
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  • jedite2012jedite2012 Member Posts: 177 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    @evikro not bad for your first quest, the village could use some more detailed, the village people could be more alive like make them move around or something, when i went to free the guy in the cage one of the cobold was stuck inside the bars looks like it wants to attack him, you might have the NPC as contact, you can change it to contact ignore all so the mobs wont attack him

    Look forward to see what you can come up with next
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  • pris23pris23 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 204 Bounty Hunter
    edited August 2013
    I would be happy to play your quest. My information is in my signature. If you check out the link at the bottom for the average playtimes for each of my quests and summary information. I will play your quest(s) later today. :)

    Happy questing/building. Cheers!
    The Secret to Paradise: NWS-DCV313OOC FOUNDRY DAILY
    Part 1 - Paradise Lost? NW-DDMMIKYTB
    Part 2 - Into the Mist NW-DIJXRI4NT
    Part 3 - Wind of The North NW-DFB9K8KWH

    Leave feedback for The Secret to Paradise
  • sarlacc1979sarlacc1979 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 47
    edited August 2013
    I'll swap reviews with you, The Missing Unseen NW-DLW8SB9CN hope you like it :)
    Please try my Foundry campaign, "Olivia's Trials".
  • evikroevikro Member Posts: 6 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Thank you Jedite! I will make some updates to the village, and i'll see if I can fix the problem with the gnolls.
    I am already making a sequel, but it will be much harder, intended to be a dungeon raid.
  • pris23pris23 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 204 Bounty Hunter
    edited August 2013
    I played through your foundry mission. I was a little confused about the difficulty settings as all I could find in game were Very Hard and Normal. Maybe I just missed the Hard option, which is what I was going for. I left some feedback, but wanted to mention that the gamemaster scared the HAMSTER out of me. Nice costume on that one. :)

    P.S. In your signature the Shortcode next to Fun House Beta has a typo. It should be NW-DRXVDREZK. Thanks for the fun! :)
    The Secret to Paradise: NWS-DCV313OOC FOUNDRY DAILY
    Part 1 - Paradise Lost? NW-DDMMIKYTB
    Part 2 - Into the Mist NW-DIJXRI4NT
    Part 3 - Wind of The North NW-DFB9K8KWH

    Leave feedback for The Secret to Paradise
  • kingdutkakingdutka Member Posts: 17 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    I'll have one for you soon! If only I could post new threads so I could get a question answered....
  • evikroevikro Member Posts: 6 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Your suggestions have been implemented.
  • ducdilimoniducdilimoni Member Posts: 44 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Evil Gnome Night
    NW-DBQLOQHMT

    It's a long one, but a lot of optional areas that can cut out some of the time. There's interesting things happening though, but just so you know.
  • karranorkarranor Member Posts: 191 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    I'd love to swap reviews with you. Here is mine: To Be a Nasher | NW-DPBGLL3C2
    Main(s): Kyruel Foecrusher OP, Meriki The Mad CW, Mortalis TR, Gorebringer GWF, Karranor HR
    Loads of videos: Neverwinter Video Guides!
    Find Neverwinter Game Guides on DDM's Realm!

    The Fyxt RPG combines digital convenience with the fun of a tabletop RPG. Play the Fyxt RPG now for free!

    Play Smarter, Not Harder! ~ Karranor
  • colonelwingcolonelwing Member Posts: 1,448 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    jedite2012 wrote: »
    i will play and review your quest on one condition

    it cannot be long, 30 minutes max.

    You can review mine if you want


    tell me if you liked it:

    NW-DKMGKVPY7

  • alymedalymed Member, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 14 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    I would love it if you gave mine a try (short code in signature). The current average is 16 minutes. I'll give yours a try as well (tonight, if possible).
    Hero Recall series (non-Campaign)...

    ~(Prologue) Intro To An End (NW-DULEQZ9KY)
    ~(Deconstruction) Brainframe (work in progress)
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