Trading Reviews - First Quest

chieori · August 2013

Hello Everyone!

: Woot! Devils in the Sewer is now Eligible for the Daily Foundry!

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: UPDATE

: Did a overhaul on the class based side quests and added a "Bard" NPC that if asked will give a overview of the side quests. Also reworked the Heretic encounter, and tied the Spirits into the story a bit more, as well as added more question/answer conversation to them. Fixed a number of typo's in dialog's and cleaned up a little. Also found and removed the shaking effect. If you enjoyed the quest the first time, I think the changes and additions will add to the next run. The quest is Daily, and around 20 minutes, so good for quick runs.

I will finish reviewing the quests listed under pending below. But not taking anymore trades at this time. Time to get started on the 2nd part in this chain. Watch for the next trade post about my 2nd quest in the near future! Thanks for all your help

Campaign: Ashmadai Invasion

Quest: Devils in the Sewer
Short Code: NW-DQ9WRV8HX
Combat: Moderate
Duration: 20-30 Minutes (depending if you do side quests or not)

: Reviewed

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Family Secrets - NW-DM71LY21M ( [post=5555971]Review![/post] )
Valley of the dead - NW-DCRYA3XVJ ( [post=5560141]Review![/post] )
A Gladiator's Legacy - NW-DJLZO65TG ( [post=5560681]Review![/post] )
Friendly Foe - NW-DTBNQUDYJ ( [post=5568911]Review![/post] )
The Devil's Playthings - NW-DG6DZO4ZB ( [post=5578791]Review![/post] )
The Missing Unseen - NW-DLW8SB9CN ( [post=5580271]Review![/post] )
Assassination Contract - NW-DOD6JMS5H ( [post=5602721]Review![/post]
A time of need - NW-DTNQ57N4B ( [post=5640401]Review![/post]
Riddles in the Dark - NW-DLEWTKWKD ( [post=5660221]Review![/post]

: Pending Review

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~ Complete ~

adylhere · August 2013

I enjoyed it. Although if you follow the main objectives it is technically straightforward there is nicely placed additional stuff to do and hidden surprises which make it feel pleasantly varied.

I think I missed roots, as they are placed on walls I kinda saw them as part of the decoration, I suppose it is on purpose as it is a side objective and needs attention. Combat is just right. Greetings to Freddy, he’s a nice dancing fella.

You can try mine if you want NW-DM71LY21M

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @adylhere !

Thank you for running and reviewing my quest, much appreciated. Freddy says hi!

I also ran Family Secrets tonight, it was fun, interesting and humorous. I wasn't expecting the twists, but you did a good job on story flow.

gapaldur · August 2013

Hi there i am trying to get my foundry out there. I am willing to trade reviews. i cant make my own posts yet. so trying to get in touch with people that will delve into it an tell me what they think.
quest: valley of the dead.
short code:NW-DCRYA3XVJ
time: 30-55 minutes
#story #combat
read the description for more info. can be challenging. try it with a friend or solo.
ill wright both yours down an go preview them. hope you both go check it out.

gapaldur · August 2013

Devils in the sewers: was good. nice little side quests.
Family secrets: was good too. i really liked the out door area great detail.
hope you get time to go check mine out.
Valley of the dead. NW-DCRYA3XVJ

janusthemad · August 2013

That was a really good adventure, I very much enjoyed it. Your attention to detail is really impressive, especially with the side areas. I gave you 5 stars and left a tip. If you could take some time and review my adventure, it would be much appreciated.

etharylan · August 2013

Nice job for your first attempt. Good combat pace. I guess I missed a couple of side quests, but I found the roots.

The main storyline has good potential to become part of a campaign (at least I believe it does).

The only thing that really bothered me was the screen-shaking effects. Made me a little bit nauseous a couple of times. Other than that, I have no complaints.

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @gapaldur!

Thanks for running and reviewing my quest, much appreciated. Glad you liked the side quests.

I ran Valley of the dead this afternoon, wow, you weren't kidding about make use of the terrain lol. Quest flow was good, stacking in some places with the types of encounters was a bit tough on the potions, but mostly ok. Was an interesting run, always busy, good beginning.

Sent you a PM with a few specific comments, don't want to spoil anything for anyone

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @janusthemad!

Thank you for running my quest, very much appreciated. Thanks for the comments on the detail as well

I ran A Gladiator's Legacy today! Really enjoyed your quest, I marked it for doing again. Loved the detailing, well done. So as not to spoil it for anyone, I sent a PM with a few comments

gapaldur · August 2013

Thanks to.
@adylhere
@chieori
Glad you enjoyed my dungeon. chieori happy u mentioned the environment in post. i really didn't want a dungeon that anyone could just roll through as solo. but still very possible with use of the environment. if you like to just run in and kill stuff take a friend with you.
just a big thanks to both of you for checking my dungeon out. I look forward to seeing your next dungeons.

sarlacc1979 · August 2013

I enjoyed the quest, the writing was good, the combat moved along well and the side quests were fun.

I'd appreciate it if you would try mine as well. Its also a sewer quest

I'd like to hear your opinion.
The Missing Unseen
NW-DLW8SB9CN

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @etharylan !

Thank you for running and reviewing my quest! Yes, I actually want to remove the shaking, just haven't figured out what I put in that's causing it, so I can remove it lol

I ran Friendly Foe today. Thoroughly enjoyed the quest, the story was very well done and in depth. The details and progression was well done also. I would deffinately run it again

tseran · August 2013

Well done! Great first quest

I sent you a PM with a some notes.

Check my sig for mine

(yay more Devils! haha)

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @tseran!

Thanks for running and reviewing my quest. I got your PM and sent a reply. Thanks for giving such a detailed review, it helps a lot.

I ran The Devil's Playthings, I enjoyed the quest and the bonuses. I sent you a PM about it

lolsorhand · August 2013

I'll check it out today/tomorrow depending on your timezone

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @sarlacc1979!

Thank you for running and reviewing my quest. Glad you liked the side quests

I ran The Missing Unseen tonight. Enjoyed the quest, combat was smooth, good variation on the types of mobs and story. Sent a PM with a few comments.

aaldaemon · August 2013

I'll trade you a review!

My quest is in my signature.

EDIT: Played and reviewed it.

I quite liked your quest. Combat amount was just right, no mob stacking, perfect smooth run.

Also liked that you actually included side quests, that's bonus effort I always appreciate.

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @aaklaemon !

Thank you for running my quest. I really enjoy making the side quests and trying to come up with different activities for people to do, while in the quest, aside from just hack and slash for 15 minutes and done.

I had the chance to run Assassination Contract earlier today, though had to work, so a late review heh. I really enjoyed your quest, you put a lot of detail and interactive items to add to the story. I also like the choices of easy or more difficult. Gave me a few ideas myself. Well done

vephid · August 2013

Hello chieori

Reviewed your foundry hours ago, and was worth it. The maps were well detailed, i wouldnt mind to live in the sewers if they are like in your map.

Getting a reward when you help the spirits is something that i liked a lot (the reward is not an item) never seen that in any other foundry and deserves a mention.

The story, it is a simple story, but was interesting enough to keep you wanting to know more about it. Somehow i felt bad about the kobolds but you reap what you sow.

Its a very good quest and was worth to play.

PS: Could you try mine? heres a short code NW-DTNQ57N4B.

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @vephid!

Thanks for running my quest, glad you liked the side quests, one of the things I enjoy making

I ran A time of need tonight, interesting quest, good story detail, combats were good, nice detail on the village and inn as well.

chieori · August 2013

Greetings @lolsorhand!

Thanks for reviewing my quest.

I ran Riddles in the Dark and had a fun time. Lots of detail, good story, many options, be it story or combat choices.

Only thing I had happen was at the end, with Elisabeth, I asked her to take the pendant back and she said ok, but the pendant was still in my inventory? should consume it at that point?

Also, I think it was a typo, but not positive, depending on the slang ... was on the injured cleric, 2nd time, after killing the goblins, before starting the escort.

"I'll thought i was done for..."
"I thought I was done for..."

Trading Reviews - First Quest

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