"The Bank Heist" "NW-DFF41RK2X" Need feedbacks/review trades

imperialmen · July 2013

Hello all! I have created my first foundry quest, "The Bank Heist". Its a short, fast-paced adventure meant for soloing. I am looking forward to read feedbacks and get it reviewed. Looking forward to it.

"The Bank Heist"

"You find a piece of note describing how to enter a tunnel in Blacklake District and get directly into Neverwinter's Bank. You decide not to lose this opportunity and swiftly get into action."

"NW-DFF41RK2X"

theninja0 · July 2013

I'll play your quest. My quests are in the signature.

Edit: I played it but unfortunately was unable to complete it due to a glitch. In the room with the chest, it says to beat two guards, I defeated all the guards that turned up, but it still said 1/2.

Otherwise its not bad. A bit random and aimless, but nothing particularly wrong with it.

edvai · July 2013

I'll run through yours as well! My first foundry is in my sig, will be interested to see how it stands next to someone else's first!

imperialmen · July 2013

Hello guys. Thanks for the plays. I will run through your quests in a short while, after having my breakfast.

So how was it?

Looking for negative feedbacks, need to improve my skills.

runebane · July 2013

Played and reviewed! An interesting theme. Funny too.

Not sure if I would have used the Ogre/Bear combinations. Since the bears don't animate attacks (and ogres don't have the red ground markings) you just have to guess when to dodge the knockdown swings. You might have intended that though, idk. Overall I thought it was pretty good.

For trade, a review on any of mine would be great. Thanks.

lolsorhand · July 2013

Will play this now.

edvai · July 2013

Finished it up. I totally agree with runebane, those bears were jerks! Couldn't dodge their attacks because they dont animate!

The good news is- it all worked great. Zones transitioned, nothing bugged out. My personal taste was that the story didn't really flow, I was fighting bandits and then conjured demons out of no where, but, to each his own, just not my personal taste. I could tell it was your first one because you were experimenting with a bunch of different things you could do ala enemy combinations and costumes etc.

I did like that it was relaxed, there were jokes, twists, turns, etc. All in all, I think it was a good first Foundry!

lolsorhand · July 2013

Played and reviewed. Good work

imperialmen · July 2013

I am doing your quests. But I have a bug where I seriously start lagging when damage/heals floaters come up. My computer is powerful enough to run the game flawlessly, but this still happens. Cryptic's fault I guess.

I was doing Edvai's quest, but I had to quit because of this **** bug. Starting all over again

Anyway regarding my quest -

1)I thought the bug of 'Defeat the guards 1/2" bug was solved. Tell me if it still persists.
2)Even I am unhappy with the cave/ogre combo. I am planning on changing it to a wolf alltogether, no combo. But to maintain the difficulty, I will add multiple wolves.
3)Yes the story is very fast-paced and short, its a blink and miss. But regarding the conjured monsters, I did add a "Nasher Conjurer" to fight after you kill all the conjured monsters.

Back to the game now. . got your quests to review

imperialmen · July 2013

Done! All your quests done and reviewed!

I need one more review though. I have 4/5.

imperialmen · July 2013

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imperialmen · July 2013

I have made many changes to the quest. I think its a make or broke. Please review and let me know if the changes fit in.

ambitionxp · July 2013

I reviewed it. Overall, it was enjoyable, though I think it could do without some random things (jumping jacks/pushups,etc).

I found the two bird encounters toward the beginning impossible as a 58 DC. I had to run past them to the campfire, die, and respawn past them. The combat in the vault was also very challenging with the 4 guards.

There was a minor typo with The Dark One in the Bank Vault..."we aren't going out to let you go".

I still gave it 5 stars. It was good as a first quest and was fun to play.

If you can, review my quest, NW-DNR5AK4ZK, when you get the chance. It's a balanced dungeon quest that I'm trying to get foundry eligible. Thanks.

imperialmen · July 2013

I want to know which version did you do? Did you do the one where The Dark One spawn everywhere in the Bank Vault?

pris23 · July 2013

That was a fun little quest. The story was fun and the combat was challenging. I'll PM with my feedback to avoid spoilers.

If you have time, I would love feedback on any of my quests. My info is in my signature and my thread is http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?407831-Part-3-Wind-of-the-North-The-Secret-to-Paradise-Will-trade-as-always&highlight=pris23 or you could PM me if you prefer.

Thanks for the fun quest. Happy questing/building. Cheers!

imperialmen · July 2013

In need of 2 more plays for Daily Eligibility.

copi369 · July 2013

Your quest is now available for a daily! I just reviewed this and I loved the fact that there was plenty of combat. I also liked the skins of the fiery conjured demons. All in all, awesome quest!

ambitionxp · July 2013

imperialmen wrote: »

I want to know which version did you do? Did you do the one where The Dark One spawn everywhere in the Bank Vault?

If you were asking me, yes. There were like 20 of them in the bank vault.

imperialmen · August 2013

I have incorporated many changes after going through feedbacks. You guys should test it and tell me.

I hope I havent made it too easy. If that is so, please tell me because easy combat is not what I was hoping for.

imperialmen · August 2013

Just got a 1-star review, which totally wrecked the ratings. I don't think it deserves a 1-star just because someone has the power to click some buttons. Anyhoo... just a game. Working on my second quest.

"The Bank Heist" "NW-DFF41RK2X" Need feedbacks/review trades

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