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Humbly submitted for your honest feedback: Follow up to Nightmare on Market Street

lovepeaslovepeas Member Posts: 162 Arc User
edited July 2014 in The Foundry
Just published part two of my campaign. It's still in beta mode at the moment but if you have some time to check it out and provide feedback to help improve it, I would be very grateful.

-Lovepeas (aka Amy)

My Best Friend's Evil Wedding NW-DAFDX91PG

Travel to a small village to help out Zanvin. Apparently his best friend is about to make a big mistake. One that he might regret for the rest of his life. Just don't let the wedding eve party distract you from saving the groom. (Designed for solo play.)

This is the second quest in the Delusions Quartet. It can be played as a stand alone adventure and has a complete ending of its own.

The Delusions Quartet
Part 1- Nightmare of Market Street
Part 2- My Best Friend's Evil Wedding
Part 3- My Mother-in-Law is a Zombie
Part 4- The Wishmonger's Wife

As background, in part one you helped a young girl named Sophie who was trapped in a nightmare. Since then you have been working with Guard Frinko to get to the bottom of things. Your only clue so far is that a mysterious and apparently wealthy woman is somehow involved.
The Delusions Quartet
Act 1: Nightmare on Market Street
Act 2: My Best Friend's Evil Wedding
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  • lovepeaslovepeas Member Posts: 162 Arc User
    edited July 2013
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    The Delusions Quartet
    Act 1: Nightmare on Market Street
    Act 2: My Best Friend's Evil Wedding
  • zagnar1zagnar1 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 46
    edited July 2013
    I really enjoyed your first quest. I will check your second quest out when I get home from work later.


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  • drakesigardrakesigar Member Posts: 231 Bounty Hunter
    edited July 2013
    Great quest names. :D Loved Nightmare on Market Street, I'll definitely check this one out.
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  • nyghomanyghoma Member Posts: 546 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Anyone who doesn't like this quest should be burned at the stake! Once again Pea's creates another masterpiece mind-bender!
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  • dzogendzogen Member Posts: 550 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Three thoughts:

    #1: lovepeas is a girl? it all makes sense now.
    #2: Is it me or does the third one in this series seem far and away like it will be the best one.
    #3: I guess in the meantime tonight I'll have to content myself with this one (in between marathon episodes of breaking bad)
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  • lovepeaslovepeas Member Posts: 162 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Thanks all! The feedback really helps!
    The Delusions Quartet
    Act 1: Nightmare on Market Street
    Act 2: My Best Friend's Evil Wedding
  • oortexploreroortexplorer Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 185 Bounty Hunter
    edited July 2013
    I will definitely be playing this one. Looking forward to it, loved the first one!

    If you want to play mine (which also happens to deal with a wedding) and haven't already, link in sig.
    All's Fair in Love and War - Explore the lighter side of Neverwinter!
    Code: NW-DJ5BFT52F
    Author: @oortexplorer
    Now eligible for Daily Foundry!
  • lovepeaslovepeas Member Posts: 162 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Awesome! I'll go check it out right now!
    The Delusions Quartet
    Act 1: Nightmare on Market Street
    Act 2: My Best Friend's Evil Wedding
  • groshiegroshie Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 146 Bounty Hunter
    edited July 2013
    I'll say it again - Awesome quest made by an awesome author! ;)
    PM sent here on the forum as well with some feedback!
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  • redneckroninredneckronin Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Ok, wow.

    What else can be said... ...wow!

    Another stunningly excellent quest from Lovepeas.

    Like a mad mix of elements of Lewis Carroll, stirred together with aspects of Michael Moorcock, all viewed through the lens of D&D.

    Totally and utterly brilliant.

    I have sent a PM regarding two elements that may require small bit of attention; didn't want to mention them here to spoil anything for people who haven't played this yet.

    Rock solid 5/5.

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  • oortexploreroortexplorer Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 185 Bounty Hunter
    edited July 2013
    Wow, this quest is awesome. I really enjoyed the story, maps, characters, basically everything about it. First time I've seen a "flashback" in the Foundry, extremely well done. I must have spent at least 5 minutes exploring the town map in appreciation, only to see it outdone by the very next map.

    I mean, I really don't have any suggestions for improvement. I think in your quest description it says "Nightmare of Market Street". I noticed one typo but didn't write it down (think it was in one of the Blue Dragons dialogs). The combat may be considered a little easy by some.

    One of my favourite Foundry quests played so far. An easy 5/5.

    I suspect you may have a "feature" in your future.
    All's Fair in Love and War - Explore the lighter side of Neverwinter!
    Code: NW-DJ5BFT52F
    Author: @oortexplorer
    Now eligible for Daily Foundry!
  • lovepeaslovepeas Member Posts: 162 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Thank you guys for the kind words and also for all the great feedback so far! I'll be sure to implement them tonight after work!

    <3 this amazing community!
    The Delusions Quartet
    Act 1: Nightmare on Market Street
    Act 2: My Best Friend's Evil Wedding
  • zbkoldezbkolde Member Posts: 689 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Omg! :D<3<3<3

    *bows*

    K, sending you a forum private message with a couple things. :)
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  • streaker79streaker79 Member Posts: 1 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Stuck on "Find the flames to go down" for two hours before giving up :(
  • docsc00terdocsc00ter Member Posts: 291 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Hey, Lovepeas!

    Played through "My Best Friend's Wedding" this morning and really enjoyed it! Fun storyline, balanced encounters, terrific environments... the works! I was especially impressed by your use of spawning NPCs and effects during dialogues; very clever (and something I'm sure I'll steal from ya at some point! :p ). Looking forward to the sequel!
  • gornonthecobgornonthecob Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 421 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    *sorry, double post*
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  • gornonthecobgornonthecob Member, NW M9 Playtest Posts: 421 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Wow, Lovepeas. That was a great quest! I was blown away by the mirror world!
    I only found one typo: In Marla's Journal it says "Father is brilliant. He has been found the perfect combination of mind-numbing psionics."

    My only pieces of feedback would be finding Marta's journal at the end of the level. I'd rather have found it while exploring. Perhaps in her inn room? And...is Guard Frinko a dwarf now? Sure talks like one! :eek:

    I'm literally blown away by the experience here. Great fun!
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  • chili1179chili1179 Member Posts: 1,511 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    Bumping this for my favorite Texan, besides myself. <3

    Great quest, must play.
    There is a rumor floating around that I am working on a new foundry quest. It was started by me.
  • bodyknock1bodyknock1 Member Posts: 3
    edited August 2013
    Is this quest broken? There's a part that talks about a firepit but I'm completely stuck at that point. Seems like there's supposed to be something somewhere to click on to progress but nada. :(
  • aeonsageaeonsage Member Posts: 16 Arc User
    edited August 2013
    streaker79 wrote: »
    Stuck on "Find the flames to go down" for two hours before giving up :(

    While I found the fire portal, I couldn't interact with it...it said it was out of line of sight from every angle...I am asuming it's part of the teleporter issue.
  • gynchigynchi Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited September 2013
    Well ist not easy to find but its working, on the side where the cat sits.
  • tserantseran Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 48
    edited September 2013
    aeonsage wrote: »
    While I found the fire portal, I couldn't interact with it...it said it was out of line of sight from every angle...I am asuming it's part of the teleporter issue.

    I was able to just find a small spot that I could use the teleport. And yes it is part of the issue from the Fey update. After using it, it places the player under the intended "ground".

    I was thankfully still able to complete that part. The rest of the quest played wonderfully, and is definitely worth it.
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  • sachmet21sachmet21 Member Posts: 1 Arc User
    edited September 2013
    tseran wrote: »
    I was able to just find a small spot that I could use the teleport.

    Lucky you. Didn't find that spot even after restart and without the cat which might block the way...
    I do hope lovepeas fixes this bug soon, I would like to see the rest of the adventure.
  • reiwulfreiwulf Member Posts: 2,687 Arc User
    edited September 2013
    I loved your first quest, I'll surely try it as soon as I get home.
    I wish I was able to rate your first quest yesterday, but foundry ratings are still offline :(
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  • sztclansztclan Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited September 2013
    im stuck at find the fire pit to travel down.... could some1 pls tell me how to continue? im stuck for over 1 hour now QQ
    but except from that loved the 1st quest and this one is great too (except for the fact that im stuck)

    edit: found a spot where i can tp down...cant tp up tho, seems like the teleport is bugged...pls fix
  • j1886264bj1886264b Member Posts: 1 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    I'm sorry, but how do I find Marta, so I can follow her? I've been everywhere in Protector's Enclave... it's driving me MAD I tell you!!! ;o)
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