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New Quest Reviews

tannxartannxar Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 8 Arc User
edited July 2013 in The Foundry
Hi everyone this is my first quest and just like everyone else i need reviews so please review it and at the end of your review please add your short code so others who read your review can also review your work.

Thank you all very mutch and i hope you all enjoy my work as mutch as i have been enjoying yours.

Name: Undead Rising
code: NW-DEIQQGYKB
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  • bandolinibandolini Member Posts: 25 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    Hi Tann, I gave your quest a try but unfortunately I didn't finish it, I got swamped by the wights after the teleporter because there are two so close together they just kept producing zombies and before I had a chance there was about 12 and I just got swamped. Also, the lack of points meant I had real trouble finding where I was supposed to be going and that was really frustrating. As an idea you also might want to run your dialogue through a spell checker as there are lots of errors, ( replace all the words 'hear' with 'here' and in the objective title 'sorce' should be 'source'). Sorry if I sound a bit negative, don't mean to be, I hope you can develop it a bit because its a really nice idea, just needs a bit of tweaking and I'd love to give it another go. Thanks for putting it up.
  • tannxartannxar Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    bandolini wrote: »
    Hi Tann, I gave your quest a try but unfortunately I didn't finish it, I got swamped by the wights after the teleporter because there are two so close together they just kept producing zombies and before I had a chance there was about 12 and I just got swamped. Also, the lack of points meant I had real trouble finding where I was supposed to be going and that was really frustrating. As an idea you also might want to run your dialogue through a spell checker as there are lots of errors, ( replace all the words 'hear' with 'here' and in the objective title 'sorce' should be 'source'). Sorry if I sound a bit negative, don't mean to be, I hope you can develop it a bit because its a really nice idea, just needs a bit of tweaking and I'd love to give it another go. Thanks for putting it up.

    Thanks bandolini: The typoes have been corected and i added some points to help navigate but not alot i want people to search some.
    The encounter you spoke of is the final fight i want it to be hard but it is doable with solo play.
    Thanks again!;)
  • bandolinibandolini Member Posts: 25 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    cool! I hope you didn't mind me pointing out the spelling, and I know I am not the best fighter, so I'll happily give it another go and try a bit harder! ;-) it was good fun! Cheers.

    Band.
  • tannxartannxar Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited July 2013
    I didn't mind at all it was great help! And hear is a spoiler that might help out some with that last fight...All those zombies are being summoned buy the too witches or priestesses or what ever they are called lol just get to them and kill them with your daily and the others stop being created.
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