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Please review my campaign (it's half an hour). Can return the favour! :)

cheiftomcheiftom Member, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 0 Arc User
edited June 2013 in The Foundry
EDIT: It's no longer half an hour. Closer to an hour for all 3 quests. They were not eligible to dailies so short so built on them.

Hey all,

Like all of you I am very excited that the foundry is working. I have spent a lot of time on this campaign and it was sad to have those publishing errors.

Now that everything is all fixed I would really love to get my quests out there and perhaps good enough to submit to Cryptic. For this however I will need you fine folk's help :D Please give it a play, it's half an hour and I honestly reckon you will like it! Code is NWS-DGSPHKAX5.

I am happy to review other peoples, but I am very honest with my criticism if you don't mind that.

Thanks for your time!

Tom (my in game handle is CheifTtom, (a **** typo ):
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  • caustic8caustic8 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 35
    edited June 2013
    Making my way through the chapters now. Just finished part 1 and reviewed. It seems pretty polished already. The battlefield had a good feel to it. A very minor thing: in the first battle you're up against 2 orcs and an ogre. But they all show as group = orcs, name = battletested orc. Maybe change the ogre to a "battletested ogre"?

    The mechanics of the objectives all worked well. The encounters were challenging but not overwhelming for my level 17 CW. I'll followup with reviews of all 3 chapters.

    Edit: Part 2 reviewed. I really like the way you're handling the chronology.
    A Short Dig - NW-DA8O42CFF
  • cheiftomcheiftom Member, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    Thank you kindy :) Ill give yours a go in a bit! Just getting some screenshots.
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  • cheiftomcheiftom Member, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    "Making my way through the chapters now. Just finished part 1 and reviewed. It seems pretty polished already. The battlefield had a good feel to it. A very minor thing: in the first battle you're up against 2 orcs and an ogre. But they all show as group = orcs, name = battletested orc. Maybe change the ogre to a "battletested ogre"?

    The mechanics of the objectives all worked well. The encounters were challenging but not overwhelming for my level 17 CW. I'll followup with reviews of all 3 chapters.

    I played your map. Great job! Maybe destroy those crystals that power the barrier tho :P I wanted a boom when i activated them!
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  • caustic8caustic8 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 35
    edited June 2013
    cheiftom wrote: »
    I played your map. Great job! Maybe destroy those crystals that power the barrier tho :P I wanted a boom when i activated them!

    Strange... there was a pretty fantastic boom linked to that. It must have broken. Thanks for the review. I'll see if I can fix the sound.
    A Short Dig - NW-DA8O42CFF
  • cheiftomcheiftom Member, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    Ok, this campaign is ready I think :) Pls teel me what yall think. Had some issues getting the quests to 15 mins. >.< Hope it doesn't show
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  • harbingerdrumharbingerdrum Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users Posts: 151 Bounty Hunter
    edited June 2013
    Fun entertaining and fast enough you should get some daily runs from it.

    The seek objective for the bartender ?? (other side of statue where the girl is lying down) needs to go further east. Had to back up for it from the fight in middle of the room. Minor thing actually, since your objective worked and I knew where to go.

    Wish I had better detail than that but did not think to comment on it until past that point.

    If you wish to return a review mine is listed below along with a good place for comments.

    Later - DRUM

    edit: looking at comments above, don't remember a boom either.
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  • lolsorhandlolsorhand Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 981 Bounty Hunter
    edited June 2013
    cheiftom wrote: »
    Hey all,

    Like all of you I am very excited that the foundry is working. I have spent a lot of time on this campaign and it was sad to have those publishing errors.

    Now that everything is all fixed I would really love to get my quests out there and perhaps good enough to submit to Cryptic. For this however I will need you fine folk's help :D Please give it a play, it's half an hour and I honestly reckon you will like it! Code is NWS-DGSPHKAX5.

    I am happy to review other peoples, but I am very honest with my criticism if you don't mind that.

    Thanks for your time!

    Tom (my in game handle is CheifTtom, (a **** typo ):

    Tell me when you got a version with less FX and i'll replay it. Think I would enjoy it quite abit more. Currently though, I just can't play through that lag. :(

    PS. Took the review to heart and finalized Riddles, mainly updated the difficulty sliders and tooltips to better inform the player of the changes. And even a tad bit more easy going with the mobs.
    I like turtles.

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  • cheiftomcheiftom Member, Neverwinter Knight of the Feywild Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    lolsorhand wrote: »
    Tell me when you got a version with less FX and i'll replay it. Think I would enjoy it quite abit more. Currently though, I just can't play through that lag. :(

    PS. Took the review to heart and finalized Riddles, mainly updated the difficulty sliders and tooltips to better inform the player of the changes. And even a tad bit more easy going with the mobs.

    I am trying (seems to be down at the moment) to publish a new version now with less FX. It turns out I had multiple layers of fog. I kept the fires etc in, hopefully deleting lots of fog patches will have sorted it. Got a few 1 star reviews for that error >.<. Still my PC plays it fine and its 2 years old.
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