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First published Foundry Quest!

digig0dd3ssdigig0dd3ss Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 2 Arc User
edited June 2013 in The Foundry
Hey guys and gals! I just published my first (of hopefully quite a few) Foundry Quest! It's the opening chapter so it's fairly quick and to the point and shouldn't take any longer than 20-30 minutes. I would love some feedback outside of my husband.

The Scarlet Vixen Inn
ID: NW-DMTP42BLU

I'm already starting to map out and work on the second chapter - Seraphs.

Any constructive feedback would really be loved. Thanks guys and gals!
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  • runis12runis12 Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    The name of the quest is enticing. :cool: I'll check it out after some sleep.
  • xila56xila56 Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    I played through your quest. I was trying to leave a review but my son bumped my arm, causing me click away from the review box which closed it. It wouldn't let me leave a review after that, returning me to protector's enclave. Sorry.

    I was going to give it 4 stars. My only thing is I feel you use too much description in the dialogue with the characters. Maybe it's just me, but I'd rather get the story from what the people have to say say than being told how they are reacting. But, I am curious to find out what happens next, so I've subscribed. Thanks!
    The Shards of Brightstar Campaign
    Part One: A Simple Request (NW-DLBQKTP6O)
    More quests coming soon!:D
  • digig0dd3ssdigig0dd3ss Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 2 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    Oh it's ok! I understand how kids are...trust me...had to redo it multiple times thanks to my lovely daughter...

    Thank you for trying to give it four stars! ^^ I understand where you're coming from; my husband had made the same comment and I did tone it down from the original...a lot actually ^^; I'm a writer by nature and very much in the descriptive sense. What can I say...Tolkien had an effect on me! Thanks for the subscription!! I assure you, the next one will be less descriptive and more action/reactionary base.
  • xila56xila56 Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited June 2013
    I'm also a writer, actually. Learning to use dialogue to drive a story instead of descriptions is one of the main things I've had to work on as well. That's probably why it caught my attention the way it did. I did enjoy the story very much. It left me off on such a cliff hanger. I have to find out what happens next!
    The Shards of Brightstar Campaign
    Part One: A Simple Request (NW-DLBQKTP6O)
    More quests coming soon!:D
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