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Kaelahn's Hatred by @daivonjol

daivonjoldaivonjol Member Posts: 5 Arc User
edited May 2013 in Foundry Quest Database
This is my first attempt at the foundry. Would love to see some critiques but, please be gentle.:cool:



Kaelahn's Hatred by @daivonjol

Short Code:NWS-DDH8H9N4Z

Caverns of Despair
Short Code:NW-DE6BDMG89
Mission Type: Dungeon Crawl
Average Duration:24 min
Amount of Combat:average
Starts at: Custom NPC
Mission Summary:The evil wizard Kaelahn has returned to wreak vengeance upon the king.


Three Kings, Three Crypts
Short Code:NW-DJSXAWLYP
Mission Type: Dungeon Crawl - MULTI DUNGEON
Average Duration:17 min
Amount of Combat:Heavy
Starts at: Custom NPC
Mission Summary:After returning to Liam, you find that there are three powerful relics needed to help defeat the evil.

The Queen's Heart
Short Code:NW-DDEVGT9MI
Mission Type: Roleplay and storyline
Average Duration:11 min
Amount of Combat:Low
Starts at: Custom NPC
Mission Summary:After retrieving the three relics, you are asked to collect the final item needed to fight the evil.

Kaelahn
Short Code:NW-DLUR2T4R7
Mission Type: Puzzle and rescue
Average Duration:15 min
Amount of Combat:average
Starts at: Custom NPC
Mission Summary:The final confrontation with Kaelahn.
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  • kelvedonkelvedon Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 11 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Hi Daivonjol, I just did "Caverns of Despair" and really enjoyed it. I did the quest on my low level test account and left feedback from @Kelv4.

    It was an enjoyable quest but I do have a few little suggestions for you.

    You went to the trouble of naming the NPCs at the start, but left the pigs and dogs as pig 1, pig 2, dog 1 etc. It would have been a nice touch to name them too. I also noticed some interactable objects with default names like "Living Room Chest 01" and "Crypt Door Closed - wooden small". Just try renaming these to "Chest" and "wooden door" or something like that.

    The fairy dust trail was a little confusing in the caverns because the route double backed on itself. If you want to avoid that, you can put in some interim waypoints, so the fairy dust will lead you in the right direction.

    And now for the biggy: You need to ensure you get the short code right in your post. Both the campaign and quest short codes were wrong and I only tracked down the quest by your name. Other reviewers may not be so patient and just move along - there are lots of quests out there competing for reviews. Remember that there are always 9 characters following the NW- or NWS-. Just doing a quick count would have picked up both these errors (one had 8 chars and the other had 10).

    But all in all, it was a fun quest. And some of the mobs were unusual, so that was fun too.

    Would you mind please playing and reviewing my quest. Details are in my sig below.

    Cheers
    Kelv
    Please review my quest:

    The Blue Tower (NW-DKHWQ6FU9)
  • daivonjoldaivonjol Member Posts: 5 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Kelv

    Much appreciation for the review.

    Naming the animals is now on my to-do list. As well as, naming the decor items.

    I have added a waypoint to help move the fairy dust trail in the right direction.

    I did not notice the errors in the short codes, so a HUGE THANK YOU for that. They are fixed. I appreciate your giving the extra effort to find the quest in spite of my error.

    The remaining portions of the campaign are story-lined to get you further in with Liam and Sara and to finally face Kaelahn.

    I added a (at least I think) pretty cool puzzle at the beginning of 'Kaelahn'.

    I am headed to the Blue Tower now.

    If anyone else finds similar errors please let me know.
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