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The Ghosts of Acradis (Will trade reviews)

zefrimexzefrimex Member Posts: 0 Arc User
edited May 2013 in The Foundry
Hi all,


This is another thread requesting reviews. This quest is only about 15-20 minutes, short and sweet. If you review please post here with your own quest for review and I will be sure to return the favor. Thanks!

The Ghosts of Arcadis

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A strange man known as the Pack Merchant hires you to exterminate some ghosts that have been haunting a nearby castle. But this castle is a unique one, and not everything is as it seems.

Enjoy this short adventure for 1-2 players that pays homage to a classic arcade game. I'm sure you will be able to guess which one.
The Pack Man
NW-DE76NJPYV

A mysterious merchant hires you to dispose of four ghosts haunting a nearby castle. Enjoy this short adventure that pays homage to a classic arcade game. I'm sure you will be able to guess which one.
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  • zekrallmizzrymzekrallmizzrym Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 101 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    I will review your quest, hopefully you will have a go at mine.

    My quest

    Campaign: Resurrection of Xunvrae (4 parts)
    Quest Name: The bones of Xunvrae
    Author: Elimgarak83
    Short Code: NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    Tags: Story, Explore, Combat
    Tested: 14 GWF, 60 CW, 60 DC, 29 CW
    Quest forum post: http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?235592-Resurrection-of-Xunvrae
    Resurrection of Xunvrae - NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    House Arken'etts' power is shattered, to restore this once proud house Xunvrae must return.
  • zelrantzelrant Member Posts: 27 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Hey, let's trade reviews. I just published my first foundry quest and I really need some feedback too. =)
    I'll do your quest in a while.

    Here's mine:

    NW-DFJR2DOH6 - The Epic: Secrets of Shiganshina
    Recommended Players: 1
    Est. Playtime: 10-20mins (depending on the choice you'll make at one point and if you like to explore)

    Thanks in advance!
  • zekrallmizzrymzekrallmizzrym Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 101 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    Just played your quest zefrimex. It is a great little old school arcade game style quest. Worth checking out.

    Dialog with pack merchant, you need to add links to go back when you ask questions. Currently it just ends conversation and you have yo restart the dialog.

    This one wont be eligible for the daily foundry sadly, due to its length. This might limit the number of people who play through yours. (sadly people don't play for fun! While is slightly odd, seeing as its a game.)
    Resurrection of Xunvrae - NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    House Arken'etts' power is shattered, to restore this once proud house Xunvrae must return.
  • zefrimexzefrimex Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    zekrallmizzrym wrote: »
    Just played your quest zefrimex. It is a great little old school arcade game style quest. Worth checking out.

    Dialog with pack merchant, you need to add links to go back when you ask questions. Currently it just ends conversation and you have yo restart the dialog.

    This one wont be eligible for the daily foundry sadly, due to its length. This might limit the number of people who play through yours. (sadly people don't play for fun! While is slightly odd, seeing as its a game.)

    Thanks for the feedback. That's a good point with looping the dialog. Also, I didn't think about the length. What is the required length to qualify for the daily foundry quests?
    The Pack Man
    NW-DE76NJPYV

    A mysterious merchant hires you to dispose of four ghosts haunting a nearby castle. Enjoy this short adventure that pays homage to a classic arcade game. I'm sure you will be able to guess which one.
  • zekrallmizzrymzekrallmizzrym Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 101 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    zefrimex wrote: »
    Thanks for the feedback. That's a good point with looping the dialog. Also, I didn't think about the length. What is the required length to qualify for the daily foundry quests?

    Daily must take an average of 15 minutes. Think it took about 10 minutes to run through yours currently (which included reading all dialogue). Possibly adding a few encounters in the passages would add the required length.
    Resurrection of Xunvrae - NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    House Arken'etts' power is shattered, to restore this once proud house Xunvrae must return.
  • dugadadugada Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 77
    edited May 2013
    Hey mate;)
    I previewed your quest, I think its quite good but you should add more objectives and more things to it. It has really good potencial, so just use it. And maybe just little things (emotes - when you collecting and so on)

    Pls review my quest:
    NW-DDJJA7X98 -The Camp and bandits
    I really need test of last map (Interspace) and review about fights and encounters. Thanks ;)
    The Cry from the Past -(name changed from "The Camp and bandits")
    NW-DDJJA7X98
    Solo quest with a great story
    http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?256402-The-camp-and-bandits
    My foundry in Slovak language: NW-DOBV4VXBC
    Ezrianova skrysa
  • zefrimexzefrimex Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    zekrallmizzrym wrote: »
    I will review your quest, hopefully you will have a go at mine.

    My quest

    Campaign: Resurrection of Xunvrae (4 parts)
    Quest Name: The bones of Xunvrae
    Author: Elimgarak83
    Short Code: NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    Tags: Story, Explore, Combat
    Tested: 14 GWF, 60 CW, 60 DC, 29 CW
    Quest forum post: http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?235592-Resurrection-of-Xunvrae

    I have reviewed your quest. I found it quite enjoyable. I love the mix of puzzle and combat. There were a few grammatical errors in the dialogue but nothing major. For the portal puzzle, I would suggest labeling the portals. Right now I think I am supposed to choose the correct portal based on its color but it is hard to sell the color of some of them. If you can label them "red portal" etc, it would be helpful. Another minor glitch is the mind controlled ogre did not despawn when defeated so when the npc version spawned there were two of him. Overall, very well done.
    The Pack Man
    NW-DE76NJPYV

    A mysterious merchant hires you to dispose of four ghosts haunting a nearby castle. Enjoy this short adventure that pays homage to a classic arcade game. I'm sure you will be able to guess which one.
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