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Enter the Circle of Pain! Looking for reviews! I'll trade reviews if needed.

shrapevilshrapevil Member Posts: 8 Arc User
edited May 2013 in The Foundry
Circle of Pain - @Sharp - NW-DNOZIRKG2

Hey all. I recently put together my first quest in the foundry. It took me about a day to make, and I'm still learning the foundry, but I feel I've put together something worth playing. It puts you into a seedy backroom fight club with an eccentric MC.

It's short, sweet, and not very serious. I hope you'll give it a try. And possibly subscribe to me, if you like it. I plan on creating more, even better content in the future.

If you'd like to do a review trade, just post your quest/campaign, and I'll be sure to play and review it, so long as you play and review mine.

Constructive feedback is always appreciated, and while I don't intend to overhaul this quest, I'll certainly make small fixes if need be.

To review:
The Fear That Freeze

Reviewed:
The bones of Xunvrae (Was not able to complete)
Invoking the Mad God
In Thrall to the God of Rage
The Three Dials
The Camp and bandits
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  • zekrallmizzrymzekrallmizzrym Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 101 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    I will review your quest, hopefully you will have a go at mine.

    Reviewed your quest: 16th May 2013

    My Quest

    Campaign: Resurrection of Xunvrae (4 parts)
    Quest Name: The bones of Xunvrae
    Author: Elimgarak83
    Short Code: NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    Tags: Story, Explore, Combat
    Tested: 14 GWF, 60 CW, 60 DC, 29 CW

    Campaign
    House Arken'etts' has a long history of producing the finest wizards throughout the Underdark. Since the spellplague ravaged the planes, house Arken'etts' power has been vastly diminished.

    Sin'Afay Arken'ett has enlisted your help in restoring the once proud house to its former glory.

    Treachery and torment will be your companions during this campaign, taking you from the darkest crypt's deep enough Torils' surface to planes of nightmare and legend.

    Part 1: The bones of Xunvrae
    Part 2: Xunvraes' Resurrection
    Part 3: Shadow stalkers
    Part 4: Xunvrae Must Die

    Part 1 - The bones of Xunvrae
    Xunvrae, once the most accomplished wizard in house Arken'ett disappeared over 100 years ago. If house Arken'ett is to be restored to its former glory, then the archmage must returned to his rightful place.

    Venture into an ancient Netherese crypt and discover what became of Xunvrae.
    Resurrection of Xunvrae - NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    House Arken'etts' power is shattered, to restore this once proud house Xunvrae must return.
  • zekrallmizzrymzekrallmizzrym Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 101 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    Really liked your character names "No really is is a bear".

    Maybe add a few more details to the pocket plane, seems a little empty.
    Resurrection of Xunvrae - NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    House Arken'etts' power is shattered, to restore this once proud house Xunvrae must return.
  • shrapevilshrapevil Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Thanks! I'll be sure to get to reviewing your quest as soon as possible.
  • shrapevilshrapevil Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Looking for more challengers!
  • notauriousnotaurious Member Posts: 156 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    I am going to head to your quest now. I will post full feedback here when I do. Please visit my quest via the info in my signature. Thank you.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Short Code Copy/Paste: NW-DJC4R9H3R
  • notauriousnotaurious Member Posts: 156 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    Done:

    Rating: 5 Stars

    What I liked: The humor was toxic, man. At the part where you give us dogs and they're called "these might not be puppies," I laughed. When the severely disproportionate mobs came at me, I was laughing so hard I almost died.

    Your character work with Jesto was superb. I think you have a whole campaign here.

    What I did not like: The final platform. One of my mobs fell off and it took me forever to find her again. Put up some invisible walls, or something :)

    Suggestion: Put up invisible walls right in front of your non-interactive mobs in the first room. It was distracting to watch them cower in fear, and your mobs went to them by default when I stealthed as a trickster. There are some neat ways to set up your room that would work well for this style.

    I would also ask you put more effort into your scenery. Just something else to help add to the awesome job you did with this go. Thanks for sharing!
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Short Code Copy/Paste: NW-DJC4R9H3R
  • shrapevilshrapevil Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Thanks. I'll see about figuring out how to make invisible walls.
  • notauriousnotaurious Member Posts: 156 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    They're in the details box. Please check out my quest when you have time. Thank you.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Short Code Copy/Paste: NW-DJC4R9H3R
  • atiaxiatiaxi Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 36
    edited May 2013
    My quest is in my sig should you feel like reciprocation :)

    I really enjoyed this. I saw the initial description of it being an arena quest and groaned, because I'm not a huge fan of just straight-up arena style matches. But this one's different! The humor was good (unlike many a quest that bills itself as humorous, I might add), Jesto was a great host/villain, and the custom enemies in the pocket plane were very well done. Here's my additional notes:

    - Jesto had a number of speech options I couldn't take (e.g. 'bundle of nerves') but no explanation as to why I couldn't take them beyond I didn't have the skill. What skill?

    - The platform with the jesto fight is cool and all, but there's way too little room to maneuver. I kept falling off. This may be intentional, but if so then it wasn't really clear.
    --
    My foundry campaign "In Thrall to the God of Rage":
    Crumorn the Spiked: NW-DCDX6KMED
    Nerisatis the Cold: NW-DNIEWE95D
  • shrapevilshrapevil Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    atiaxi wrote: »
    My quest is in my sig should you feel like reciprocation :)

    I really enjoyed this. I saw the initial description of it being an arena quest and groaned, because I'm not a huge fan of just straight-up arena style matches. But this one's different! The humor was good (unlike many a quest that bills itself as humorous, I might add), Jesto was a great host/villain, and the custom enemies in the pocket plane were very well done. Here's my additional notes:

    - Jesto had a number of speech options I couldn't take (e.g. 'bundle of nerves') but no explanation as to why I couldn't take them beyond I didn't have the skill. What skill?

    - The platform with the jesto fight is cool and all, but there's way too little room to maneuver. I kept falling off. This may be intentional, but if so then it wasn't really clear.

    Addressing both points:

    1 - The bottle of nerves can be picked up from the beginning of the quest if you pick the right speech option on your way into the back room. Unfortunately, the foundry will always say you don't have the 'skill', even if what you are missing is an item.

    2 - I've fixed that. There are now invisible walls to keep you and Jesto on the platform.
  • shrapevilshrapevil Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Still looking for reviews!
  • zekrallmizzrymzekrallmizzrym Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 101 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    shrapevil wrote: »
    Still looking for reviews!

    Did you review my quest after I did yours? If so you forgot to leave an in game comment and rating.
    Resurrection of Xunvrae - NWS-DNNZST5FJ
    House Arken'etts' power is shattered, to restore this once proud house Xunvrae must return.
  • notauriousnotaurious Member Posts: 156 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    While I DID enjoy this quest, the author did NOT exchange reviews. Be aware of this.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Short Code Copy/Paste: NW-DJC4R9H3R
  • shrapevilshrapevil Member Posts: 8 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    notaurious wrote: »
    While I DID enjoy this quest, the author did NOT exchange reviews. Be aware of this.

    Relax. While I've had time to bump the thread, I haven't had time to actually get on neverwinter in the last couple days. I'm about to get to it now.

    As for the bones of xunvrae, while I did play it, it was not completable due to a glitch. I PMed you what happened with the glitch as well as my thoughts on the quest. Check your inbox.
  • chinspinnerchinspinner Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    shrapevil wrote: »
    Relax. While I've had time to bump the thread, I haven't had time to actually get on neverwinter in the last couple days. I'm about to get to it now.

    As for the bones of xunvrae, while I did play it, it was not completable due to a glitch. I PMed you what happened with the glitch as well as my thoughts on the quest. Check your inbox.
    haha the number of reviews I have given without reciprocation, it is part of the game. Review me first though you mad clown.
    My new quest:

    WIP
  • dugadadugada Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 77
    edited May 2013
    I played your quest and its quite fun ;) Really good for relax :D

    Pls, test my NW-DDJJA7X98 (Camp and Bandits) its story quest but I hope you will like it.
    I need to test my new changes there, so pls leave some feedback.
    Thanks
    The Cry from the Past -(name changed from "The Camp and bandits")
    NW-DDJJA7X98
    Solo quest with a great story
    http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?256402-The-camp-and-bandits
    My foundry in Slovak language: NW-DOBV4VXBC
    Ezrianova skrysa
  • voivodakvoivodak Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 147 Bounty Hunter
    edited May 2013
    my quest is in sign. I'll play yours this evening, then please, return me the favor :)
    My Campaign and Quest :

    Campaign - In The Streams of Inferno
    Act I : The Fear That Freeze - nw-dnuzsyeey
    Act II : Demons Never Sleep - nw-dbj2us96n
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