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Benjamin's Bottom - My first quest...Ill try yours if you try mine!

chaodchaod Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
edited May 2013 in The Foundry
Hi,

Made my first quest, which is much more story oriented than mob. It is the first of a quest chain that will be filled with comedy, parody and fun!

Check it out and please leave links/codes to your quests. I love to try new ones!

The Code for my quest is: NW-DUKFV7V4G
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  • atiaxiatiaxi Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 36
    edited May 2013
    Just ran it, here's my impressions:

    - For me, the humor was somewhat hit or miss. I didn't care for the mindflayer at the end who tells me to do what I've already done (I mean, I get the joke, I just didn't like being ordered around even if I /had/ just done it) but I laughed out loud at the "Penguin Job" explanation. Feel free to chalk this one up to subjective humor

    - Decent combat. Bosses were fairly challenging but not overkill

    More general notes / bugs:

    - What's the deal with the wolf at the beginning?

    - Jonder's summoned guys beat up on him, too. This is because any friendly NPC is always regarded as a valid target by Encounters. To fix this, you can have him disappear after summoning the monsters then reappear afterward, or just work it into the humor (e.g. "Not me, you idiots, kill THEM!"

    - In next map, I spawned on top of the treasure chest

    - Wendell is labeled "Ashmadi Warlock 1"
    --
    My foundry campaign "In Thrall to the God of Rage":
    Crumorn the Spiked: NW-DCDX6KMED
    Nerisatis the Cold: NW-DNIEWE95D
  • synolsynol Member, Neverwinter Beta Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Just played through your map also. The I died twice to the Magma / Forgecaller combo's they are tough as a Guardian Fighter and on the last fight they knock me into a corner and I couldn't get away because I was boxed in. I enjoyed the humor.

    My map is also a comedy, but I guess a bit more... insane? Check it out if you have time, takes about 10 mins also:

    The Fool - A Brief Comedy
    Shortcode: NW-DD73ZPVCO
  • eulerdmoogleeulerdmoogle Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Fair enough. I'll try your mission asap.

    My mission:
    A small dwarvish grudge: NW-DUI8A8I7R
    Author name: @cphonx
    Solo
    about 20 min.
    Story and combat. Some humor.
    Try my missions:
    A Small Dwarvish Grudge: NW-DUI8A8I7R
    The Brink of Disaster: NW-DFDJKW9QF (Still in beta)

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  • docbachdocbach Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 35
    edited May 2013
    Unholy Matrimony
    @DocBach
    NW-DPYM52476

    Solo if you have a decent amount of potions/a healer companion. 40 minutes long, mostly story but some difficult boss fights with some sidequests / easter eggs.
  • eulerdmoogleeulerdmoogle Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Hero Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    I just finished your mission.

    1) Really? A giant boil on his rear?
    2) During the combat mobs are fighting Jonder Frahill. You might want to de-spawn him during the combat and bring him back after.
    3) I do like the invisible wall transition.
    4) I did find fire enemies in a wooden orc decorated structure a bit jarring. Would a custom map have been better? If not, you might want to have more things on fire, and a lot more fire fx.
    5) In said structure the magma beast and the forgecaller were stuck in the low ceiling.
    6) "Wendell" was still named "Ashmodai Warlock 1"
    7) That ending with the mindflayer was really .... surreal. I think that's a word that will pass this forum's censors.

    Still, it was a very interesting adventure and I enjoyed it alot.
    Try my missions:
    A Small Dwarvish Grudge: NW-DUI8A8I7R
    The Brink of Disaster: NW-DFDJKW9QF (Still in beta)

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  • chaodchaod Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    Thanks so much for the feedback. I didnt realize that Jondor was being attacked too...I'll have to remember that! I kinda rushed the combat because I was more focused on the story....the second map shows that badly. I wish I could go back and fix that second map.

    The wolf at the beginning is the Big Bad Wolf from "The Three Little Pigs"...he hurt his bum too...Did anyone catch what the homeless guy was saying?

    You didn't actually rid either of the gangs. you just approached the boss (the spawns were only minions, not actual members). your focus was to help get Benjamin out of his "bind"...not kill the gangs!

    The mind-flayer plays a big part in the next part of this quest chain. Be prepared for a crazy turn of events (and better fx, combat and mob placement :P)

    Thanks again for all the reviews...wrote down all the quests and will do them today or tomorrow!
  • pilatorpilator Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    I delete "Imagination" quest. Wait for "Return to Neverwinter" :)
    "Return to Neverwinter"

    (ID: NW-DPZS2MN86)

    Role novel about a former hero of Neverwinter, who returns ...
  • chaodchaod Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    pilator wrote: »
    Imagination v1.2
    NW-DHI5CNOR3
    Imagination - what could make a man to dream bride.

    Story: mystery, light, funny, combat
    Combat: normal
    Tips: enjoy
    Play time: 3 minutes
    Code: NW-DHI5CNOR3
    Author: @pilator
    Tags: #fun #short #al pacino #combat #story #mystery
    Players: solo

    Feedback request:
    I welcome you:)
    It is my first map, so I ask for the understanding. I will be trying is to update
    out new concent and not only:)
    I am greeting and enjoy!

    ===
    ===
    MAP VERSION:
    1.0 - original
    1.1 - mobs is too strong, i fixed it
    1.2 - add music

    Nice map chaod!

    awesome! at work right now, but will subscribe to it and play it...look foward to it!
  • pilatorpilator Member Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    chaod wrote: »
    awesome! at work right now, but will subscribe to it and play it...look foward to it!
    Very nice! Im wait for your preview :-) But remember its my first map and its very short 5min. Max ^^
    "Return to Neverwinter"

    (ID: NW-DPZS2MN86)

    Role novel about a former hero of Neverwinter, who returns ...
  • chaodchaod Member, Neverwinter Beta Users, Neverwinter Guardian Users Posts: 0 Arc User
    edited May 2013
    pilator wrote: »
    Very nice! Im wait for your preview :-) But remember its my first map and its very short 5min. Max ^^

    No problem at all! Im siked!
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