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My First Hero - *Please leave feedback*

Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
edited January 2010 in Costumes and Concepts
Name: Lilith Lancer
Gender: Female
Alignment: ???
Description:

Her powers are: Teleportation, Superhuman reflexes, Superhuman Strength, Superhuman Regeneration, Skilled with a double-edged Axe named "Dabon", Nightvision.

Lilith's unique eyes are capable of seeing how corrupt a person is, visible by a dark aura. Through biting people she feeds off their corruption, leaving only the pure good left in their soul. Feeding off other's corruption boosts her powers, but it makes her more corrupt herself and makes her appearance more inhuman. Despite the cost she cotinues to drain peope's corruption because it helps people and gives her the strength she needs to defeat villains.

I don't really have much of a story for her yet, I'm working on one. I plan for her to be a Hero in the start of the story, she'll drain all of the main villain's corruption at one point, he/she (haven't decided gender) will become good, Lilith will turn evil, the story will twist with the now pure-hearted villain becoming the main character as he tries to hunt the evil Lilith in a fight for his redemption. Lilith as a Hero drains corruption for the purposes I already stated, Dark Lilith continues to do so in hopes of becoming completely evil and soul-less to rise to the higher "ascended" level of a Demon.

Here is some picks of the prototype Lilith I made on Champions Online...


http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/2967/colilithlancer4.png

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1407/colilithlancerd.jpg

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3056/colilithlancer2.png

http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/8016/colilithlancer3.png

A bit generic looking I know, but I did just come up with all of this within an hour.
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Comments

  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    She has claw-like fingers, not visible in 4 pics. Stupid fist-clenching pose. lol
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    She doesn't look generic to me, I think she would look good with an average or vixen pose (both have open hands.) I like the story behind her and the only think I can think of is to play with the ears to give them a bit of a point, I like demon girls with ears pointed to the side, it's really cute and makes them feel a bit more inhuman.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    I only gave her the standard pose because it was the only one availble that didn't cause half of her body to be cut of the pic, makes it similar to see. Normally she has a beast-like stance, something I have chosen for her in-game on CO.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    You can share her costume file if you want. While in the tailor hit save costume. It will create a file that looks like the item I attached in the ChampionsOnline\Live\Screenshots folder.

    Post it and I'll make any my suggestions.


    +5 internetz if you can name that toon....
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    She has a chain wrapped around her right wrist. I put it there mainly because the Supernatural powerset uses chain attacks that are conducted with the right arm, only seemed right.

    Where do I check for my tailer screenshot? Somewhere on this website right?
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Obsidian_Rose wrote:
    Where do I check for my tailer screenshot? Somewhere on this website right?

    No on your computer. C Drive ....

    C:\Program Files\Cryptic Studios\Champions Online\Live\screenshots
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    I checked. I get as far as "Live", but there is no "Screenshots" folder within there.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Obsidian_Rose wrote:
    I checked. I get as far as "Live", but there is no "Screenshots" folder within there.

    Have you saved a costume before? Also, I actually have 2 versions of the game on my computer since I bought a copy of the game through steam. Check this path as well:

    C:\Program Files\Steam\SteamApps\common\champions online\Champions Online\Live\screenshots

    If not .... try going to the tailor and savign the costume. This screenshots folder is where you place saved costumes to load into your game as well (FYI)
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    I think I've done it now. Because of her pose you can't really her very well from the pic alone. You'd have to load it up on your game to see it properly.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    The only areas I would sugest you look at are the feet (they look too small) and the pants (try using jeans instead of wrinkled).

    Also, I created the second evil version of her for you to consider. This is the consumed too much corruption version.

    Hope you like it!
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Cool, thanks. I'll check out your corrupted design later this morning when I wake up. I already know about the proportion problem (mainly the feet, slightly the legs) because it was just quickly randomised a few times. I've been meaning to sort it out, but I was in a rush to get my character's costume deisgn and powers done.

    I had jeans originally but I don't know what happened to them. I think they got messed up during the time she was going through conversion from a gunslinger to an Axe wielder.

    I change it all later on, once I've had my nap that is.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    I'll let more qualified types help out with suggestions, but I'll echo that your toon doesn't look generic to me. I like her, especially for an effort that only took an hour or so.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    I changed her a little for those that didn't see. She now has a red scarf around her mouth. I also changed her pure white Rat tail to a Devil tail, becase I play on the lowest setting I didn't see that the rat tail had imprinted lines along it. Even though it pushes my Laptop I always temporarily push the settings the Max whilst I create/edit a character.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Adogg wrote:
    You can share her costume file if you want. While in the tailor hit save costume. It will create a file that looks like the item I attached in the ChampionsOnline\Live\Screenshots folder.

    Post it and I'll make any my suggestions.


    +5 internetz if you can name that toon....

    That is a badass Cobra Commander!
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Cobra Commander? I don't understand.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Obsidian_Rose wrote:
    Cobra Commander? I don't understand.

    He's referring to the example I attached earlier in the thread. And he guessed it correctly as well.
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Hmm Lilith in borderlands can basicaly teleport and lilith is a girl... and Lancer is the military force in borderlands? Did you mean to do that? :P
  • Archived PostArchived Post Posts: 1,156,071 Arc User
    edited January 2010
    Really? Aww damn. Makes it look like I copied -_-

    I haven't even played Borderlands. I know that one of the characters is named Lilith but I didn't know about the Lancer thing.

    Lilith is my favourite girls name, I use it for every female character I create in a game. I first came across it from the TV Show Supernatural, where Lilith is the first Demon.

    The Lancer thing came from nowhere. I was on the internet looking for common/uncommon Surnames beginning with "L". I didn't look long before the name Lancer just popped into my head. Maybe I remember the words from playing Gears of War way way back, the default Assault rifle with the Chainsaw underbarrel goes by that name. Who knows, but it definitely was nothing to do with Borderlands.

    The annoying thing is though, The average Champions Online player has probably played a popular mainstream game like Borderlands. Now Lilith Lancer looks like a phony :(
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