I Need Help With My Build

bld1

Ok so my character is a succubus, I kinda want her to use magic but elements and mental powers would be fine too, I tried makeing a build myself but I'm not sure how good it would work in practice. Please help.

this is the build I made: http://aesica.net/co/herocreator.htm?v=18&n=&d=1453g43RMNiW371M000Mf03MB03ML09MH00MK038900K5039K00FI04KC01MR01L7057B010mc33T3B0CAT

flowcyto

Here's a mix of Sorcery w/ a touch of Telepathy, assuming that's fitting:

(Unnamed Build) - Freeform

Super Stats
Level 6: Intelligence (Primary)
Level 10: Constitution (Secondary)
Level 15: Dexterity (Secondary)

Talents
Level 1: The Glacier (Con: 10, End: 10, Dex: 8, Int: 10)
Level 6: Covert Ops Training (Str: 3, Dex: 3, Con: 3, Int: 3)
Level 9: Healthy Mind (Con: 5, Int: 5)
Level 12: Acrobat (Dex: 5, Con: 5)
Level 15: Coordinated (Dex: 5, Int: 5)
Level 18: Quick Recovery (Con: 5, Rec: 5)
Level 21: Negotiator (Int: 5, Rec: 5)

Powers
Level 1: Eldritch Bolts
Level 1: Aura of Primal Majesty (Rank 2, Rank 3)
Level 6: Eldritch Shield (Rank 2, Rank 3)
Level 8: Skarn's Bane (Rank 2, Tranced)
Level 11: Concentration
Level 14: Conviction (Rank 2, Rank 3)
Level 17: Molecular Self-Assembly
Level 20: Soul Beam (Rank 2, Rank 3)
Level 23: Hex of Suffering (Rune of Lethargy, Nailed to the Ground)
Level 26: Resurgence (Rank 2)
Level 29: Ego Sleep (Plagued by Nightmares)
Level 32: Mental Leech (Rank 2, Rank 3)
Level 35: Ego Surge (Nimble Mind)
Level 38: Rebirth
Adv. Points: 34/36

Travel Powers
Level 6:
Level 35:

Specializations
Intelligence: Enlightened (3/3)
Intelligence: Battle of Wits (2/3)
Intelligence: Detect Vulnerability (3/3)
Intelligence: Expertise (2/2)
Overseer: Administer (3/3)
Overseer: Ruthless (2/2)
Overseer: Impact (2/2)
Overseer: Trapped (3/3)
Guardian: Fortified Gear (3/3)
Guardian: Ruthless (2/2)
Guardian: Find the Mark (2/3)
Guardian: The Best Defense (3/3)
Mastery: Intelligence Mastery (1/1)

Has a number of short cds to proc MSA, and Sleep and Hex can roll Trapped in Overseer. Else, it uses mainly Skarn's w/ its Tranced adv for AoE (and some CC), and Soul Beam for single targets. Gears mostly for Int and Con.