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As a side note: this is my first attempt at using the foundry.
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Hey! Played through it, though there isn't much to play through yet. 1) Councilman Hanoe says "please don't free welcome". 2) The room with a big open space in the middle which is filled with a lime green plane is weird. I would replace the lime green plane with something else. 3) The white background and trees in the…
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I've made a bunch of updates, and now just need a few more playthroughs to be daily eligible. Thanks for all your help everyone!
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Quest is already solid, but could use a bit of love to push it even farther: 1. The village feels too small. Could you add more buildings, more ambiance to it? 2. As a player, I don't have very strong connection to what's going on. Who is supporting Valindra here? How do they know where I live, in the middle of a forest?…
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So, just ran through the quest. Not bad, but could use a lot of improvement: General: Story is cute. Having the prince as the guard works. Fighting with his soldiers was fun. The combat grows pretty tedious considering how much of it is just the same fight over and over again. If you add more environmental detail, that…
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Phenomenal feedback. I've already reviewed your quests, Chieori and Lumicakery. I'll get to yours, Eldarth, tomorrow.
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Hey Lumicakery! I went ahead an plaid through Twilight Arena V2, and it was great. Left a review, and here're a few suggestions. Story flow: The initial fight against the adventurer is sort of unusual, and doesn't make much sense. I'd rather see him die to the arena, and then see him again as an enemy. Also, the portal at…
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So, gave it a play and a review. Great quest! Got a little bit of feedback for it, though: Ambience - Great! Especially boss areas and the initial goblin camp. Great work on those, you should be proud of them! A lot of barren hallways, but willing to overlook for the sake of the boss areas. The work on the gates, portals,…
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Fabulous work! Biggest plus: Areas detailed and beautiful. Great work on the final area, and all of the fights. It'd be fine as is, but first a few bugs: 1. First guard you talk to in the second area is facing the wrong direction. 2. Both times you have a Ashmadai frozen in the air, they disappear one dialogue option too…