Review of The Crypt of Ezra

arc7r7

Hello , I just recently published my first Foundry quest. I'm looking for reviews and feedback. The quest should run about 15-20 minutes and should be medium to hard in difficulty.

The Crypt of Ezra : NW-DA7GYAJXW

daikenurmouth

I'll give it a shot now. Give mine a whirl please!

Ch1 Discovery : NW-DS8ASIEED

arc7r7

Thanks for the good feedback , Ill work on those things. Your quest was awesome btw, very well made.

wininoid

Hey I just played and reviewed. Nicely done. It could use a few bits of polish, but it looks like a good quest for a small group. I have one in beta that needs some more plays to become visible. Can you please give it a shot? Black Ice Capades NW-DNOZ488LI

Here are my notes:
-Give names to interactable objects, like the crypts so they don't look like Crypt_01
-Traps made me have to resummon my companion a lot. They won't go past traps and so if you have a lot, players will have to resummon them a lot. Better to stick them in rooms so pets can go around instead of halls, or don't use them so much.
-Encounters were stacked - OK for low levels or groups, but will frustrate a lot of players. Better warn them ahead of time/suggest a group. I tagged it as a group quest, since it seems like what groups would enjoy.
-Edit the transitions/interactions so it isn't "Press F to go to next map/to interact" e.g. "Press F to enter the crypt"
-The book on the alter is screaming to have some text you can read.
-Crypt door had "go to next map" and "interact" I chose interact and got stuck, unable to continue. It is probably tagged as interactable and as the exit.

Let me know if you have any questions