"...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
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The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
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The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
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Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
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"...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.
- You need to have someone proofread your dialogues for you. The lack of interpunction makes it sometimes hard to follow - especially to non-native speakers (like me)
- Ogres as encounters are SO overdone, man.
- I do like the humor so far (bakery, journal)
- The default street map is... well, default. It's a little bit boring to use the pre-made maps and not add details. Just sayin'.
- An encounter spawning after every clue seems a little pointless to me. At least, they seem random. People, spiders and guards? Unless there's an explanation for randomness later on...
- Oh, okay. Spider fetish. Heh.
- I just looked to the rooftop. Holy ****, that's a big spider xD
- I like Bumpy's costume.
- The rooms inside the mansion could use more decor and the stuff that was already there seems a bit random, sometimes (like graveyard crypt, for example)
- Quite nice use of sounds and music.
- Fights were a bit challanging for a solo lv60 cleric, but I think it had more to do with the fact the fighting space was limited
- Huh. The long corridor after brazier of hell is a nice visual effect.
- Okay, the lights going off and then on was kinda awesome, had me chuckling.
- Shadarkai and Drow as opponents don't make sense. You can keep the encounters as they are, just rename them and re-skin into something else (at least that's what I would do)
- JFC, that's a big spider xD But weirdly enough, easy to kill, easier then the encounters inside
Okay, so overall, I really liked it - which kinda surprises me, since I don't really like fighting foundries. I didn't mind fighting here though, maybe because the difficulty seemed scaled just right for me (I am a squishy, squishy cleric) or maybe it's because Bumpy was helping? I dunno, but I didn't mind running around and fighting at the braziers.
You know, I really do want Harry and Bumpy as companions now.
That quest has a potential to be really great but you need to work on your maps. Details, details, details. And randomness of some encounters.
Also, I might be missing some info, but why the duplicate of the quest?
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1.) The second to last sentence in Zigto's dialogue is a run-on.
2.) The dialogue with Weird Pete mentions armor, but not every class uses armor. (Such as Control Wizards which happens to be what I'm playing now.
I already reviewed the old version a while back and it looks like you implemented all of that feedback so there wasn't much more for me to find.
"...projects are never finished, only abandoned....."
HellsHot is a proud member of Scribes' Enclave.
1. The Haronomous Saga NWS-DJIKP5IWK a four part, story driven, campaign.
2. The Ruins of Xylon NWS-DC76ORA4I a two part, dungeon crawl.
3. Armor Odyssey NWS-DAUPTR46M a three part, story driven, odyssey.