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krennao

Greetings fellow foundry players. Please check out my foundry quest I have posted. It's a start of a series I am working on for a campaign. Mostly Forgotten Realms lore. It's a step out of the normal , of go here and get this job. Pretty much the quest here falls in your lap so to speak.


Any feedback would be greatly appreciated considering this is my first quest I have published.

Thanks in advance.

winterswitch

Not a bad search quest, especially considering that it's your first Foundry. Vex is an interesting adversary. I left a review and tip in-game.

--The forest could use more details, like bushes, grass, random stones, vines.
--Some of the map transitions say "Go to Next Map." I'd recommend changing these to something more descriptive like "Enter the Lair", or "Leave the Forest", etc.
--The drider mobs and one of the illithid have the name "Adventurer".
--It's worth the time to go through and carefully proofread it. I saw a handful of misspellings along the way. Check "obstacles", "happened", "disappointed".
--Your reward chest and nearby stones are floating off the ground.

Keep at it. I'll certainly play the next installment when it's completed. Please give "Hive Mind" a play when you get a chance. Thanks!

krennao

Thank you so much. It is so hard to proof read my own writing. I will fix those today! Thank you for your feedback.