The Adventures of Sherlock Colms

luther8

Closed since I have a knew one up. http://nw-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?288522-The-Adventures-of-Sherlock-Colms

f9ntomas

Just finished playing v1.0. I like what you are trying to do.


-some issues I found

One of the guards was called "Guard Human 6".
A one stage Rosemary is called "Customized Alchemist Piniwin"


The following spelling errors (only partial text to limit spoilers)
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...best consalting (s/b consulting)...
so When (s/b when)... ...out of there (s/b their)...
We have a vary(s/b very) sick indavidual(s/b individual)...

"A Blue potion;...." and "A Blue potion sence..." both appeared in the text I assume it should have been only one (the first one?)

Thank you for you're(s/b your) time...
In do(s/b due) time...
...recall hearing rumers(s/b rumors)
There is definitly(s/b definitely) somthing(s/b something)..
...seem vary(s/b very) affraid(s/b afraid)..
If you where(s/b were)
a meaningful some(s/b sum)
...in her eye's(s/b eyes) and facel(s/b facial) expression's(s/b expression)...
.She starts mumbleing(s/b mumbling)
then she cast's(s/b casts)...
...is still vary(s/b very) close..
she burst(s/b burts) into a scary laughter(s/b laugh)
a shot time burrying(s/b burying)...
people into werewolf's(s/b werewolves)..
...feeling tired and releaved(s/b relieved)
...you're(your) arch..

luther8

Thanks f9ntomas I'll look into fixing these issues right now.

-update, OK fixed all the spelling and re spawning issues you mentions on the review, when you kill the mobs they will stay dead.

luther8

new update is out with spelling fixs, if you find any more please let me know.