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So i'm making another spaceship.

magniacapramagniacapra Member Posts: 544 Arc User
edited March 2017 in Ten Forward
It's going to be pretty chill. Feel free to hang out.
Current WIP model link:
https://p3d.in/ZM0Vz

Older WIP images
http://i.imgur.com/ugq9jY8.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/q66qQE4.jpg

FAQ
What is she called?

USS Innovator (working title), of unknown (Innovator?) class, with the sister ships being the USS Mars and USS Fermi

Why are you making it?
Mostly to test a few modeling and texturing techniques, recently picked up a copy of substance designer so there's going to be some learning curve.

What tools do you use?
Cinema 4D, Octane, Vray, Photoshop, Illustrator, Substance Designer, possibly more

What's the designs inspiration?
A friend challenged me to design a modern, prime timeline ship, with a neck. Sovereign Class and Prometheus classes (IE, my go to touch stones for good ship designs) are the main inspiration, with a lot of the new JJ-prize in their also.

Do you want it to be in STO?
Sure, but STO have plenty of talented designers and there own pipe line of designs and art direction so I'm not expecting anything.

Do you have more stuff?
Deviant Art as the most complete collection of my sci fi stuff.

I have a suggestion...
Fire away, I've got pretty thick skin and I'm open to hearing about geeky technical stuff, like the debate about the gap between nacelles. But, bare in mind that this ain't no design by committee.

But how would the decks in that goose tail work bro?
It'll work, I'll find away. :smiley:



Will try an update weekly.

Comments

  • skullblits#4627 skullblits Member Posts: 1,273 Arc User
    edited March 2017
    the body at the rear looks too duckish

    perhaps it needs a curve to it
  • theraven2378theraven2378 Member Posts: 6,015 Arc User
    The secondary hull needs to be straighter, not a fan of that secondary hull.
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    • admiralnatadmiralnat Member Posts: 22,432 Arc User
      The secondary hull needs to be straighter, not a fan of that secondary hull.
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    • vilikrie1vilikrie1 Member Posts: 7 Arc User
      oooO I like that
      ....I love that it has more curved lines, very sleek and sexy. I'd fly her!
    • magniacapramagniacapra Member Posts: 544 Arc User
      Made an update.
      https://p3d.in/ydeF7

      Is that what you guys meant re: the secondary hull? Made it so the tail isn't pointing down. Still looks like a duck though, but I'm ok with that. XD
    • ryan218ryan218 Member Posts: 36,106 Arc User
      I love the saucer and the neck! One thing I would say, is that the secondary hull could stand to be extended back a bit. At the moment it looks too short compared to the saucer and, particularly, the nacelles. It might work if the nacelles were lower down or if they were themselves shorter, similar to the Galaxy-Class with its nacelles on the same line as the neck. Depends on what kind of look you're going for really.
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