I've just published a new Foundry mission, and I would appreciate any reviews and comments. This mission is now out of review and is in the Top 3 for its mission door.
The Details:
Name:
Of Damsels And Distress
ID: ST-HHYHKXKKA
Author:
@Thomas_Baston
Faction: Starfleet
Location: SPR-5195, Draylon Sector, Alpha Quadrant
Play Time: Approximately 1/2 Hour
Your ship has intercepted a weak radio signal coming from the SPR-5195 area of space.
The signal appears to be a looping distress signal from an unknown alien vessel.
Will you save her?
Comments
For those interested in some images from the mission, I offer these:
I don't mind trading mission plays, but I will be honest about your mission and expect the same from anyone who rates my work.
As always, I truly appreciate the reviews and the constructive comments of those who choose to play my missions
I really love the maps, more particularly the first ground map as it had a great, creepy atmosphere to it, reminded me of the first Alien movie. I love the subject matter of the story and there's only really two thing that bothered me.
The first is there's a small typo when you beam down to the planet that says "we will be see each other as we are", which is honestly barely noticeable. The other has to do with the story and is weird, because I'm not sure if it was a flaw, or just something that bothered me personally.
Thank you for making my mission better
I do, however, reserve the right to tell the story that I wish to tell. Some will dislike it, this is true. Others might like it very much. The plot is the plot.
Even though Im not too fond of the ending myself, I can see other people really liking it and if I were you I wouldn't change it either, especially if you feel satisfied with the story you were trying to tell.
Again, not terrible, I just personally wanted something different.
And I will probably play it again, i am curious about the optional dialogue paths that I didnt take.
Keep up the good work !