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@Devs: please put in a good word for this ship

yreodredyreodred Member Posts: 3,527 Arc User
edited February 2015 in The Art of Star Trek Online
first and foremost:
This is NOT, i repeat NOT a T5 Constitution thread.

It is about this Beauty:
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created by john eaves. LINK


It's a early draft of the NX-01.
I'm not suggesting it should become a independent T5 NX class or something like that.

No, the first thing that came to my mind was "hey that look much more advanced than even kirks ship!"
For me it looks much more like 25th century design.
I especally like the side/front and top view and the short neck. The isometric (?) view looks too ordinary, since its nacelles are too far apart.


Wouldn't this beauty be a gorgeous 25th century Ambassador Vaiant?
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  • cbrjwrrcbrjwrr Member Posts: 2,782 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    That's basically a Sovereign/Noble/Majestic with adjustments?


    Cool looking mind.
  • turbomagnusturbomagnus Member Posts: 3,479 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    I like it. The secondary hull, especially. With the raised and lowered sections on the secondary/engineering hull, it has a nice 'layered' look without looking bulky.

    What are some good synonyms for Ambassador? Envoy... no, I think that's an Exploration Cruiser varient... Viceroy... no, that sounds too close to the family of names used for the Assault Cruisers... Consul, maybe?
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  • jeffel82jeffel82 Member Posts: 2,075 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Truthfully, if we're talking about Ambassador variants, I'd rather see Andrew Probert's original concept design first.

    If we're talking about the NX, I'd love to see the conceptual NX refit.

    Not to say I don't like the design in the OP - new designs are always welcome.

    Alas, I think it's pretty difficult to get non-CBS-owned ships, designed by non-Cryptic employees, into the game. Not impossible, as seen by the Vesta, but difficult.
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  • cmdrscarletcmdrscarlet Member Posts: 5,137 Arc User
    edited July 2014
  • angrytargangrytarg Member Posts: 11,016 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    I'd widen her, erm... Badonkadonk a bit (Yeah, I'm a butt person XD). I don't like that half to almost all of the newer designs feauture such a thin "beesting" aft section. If it would feature this "runway" extension around the aft that the Ambassador (Link) and Galaxy feature it would indeed be a nice alternate Ambassador variant.

    I'd call it Envoy-Type Refit and rename/remove the T4 Explorer skin (pulling an "Avenger" on it). Alternatively maybe "Emissary", if that's not otherwise occupied already.
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  • kestrelliuskestrellius Member Posts: 462 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Absolutely not to the NX refit and the Ambassador concept art. Neither of those are 25th-century designs. As for the OP...maybe? It looks okay. With a bit of adjustment, it could be pretty good.
  • pwecaptainsmirkpwecaptainsmirk Member Posts: 1,167 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    I like it!

    Plus I just really like the line work. Nicely drawn!

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  • psycoticvulcanpsycoticvulcan Member Posts: 4,160 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Awesome! I don't know if it would work for the Ambassador, but I'd love to see it hit the game somehow. Perhaps as an alternate Excelsior skin?
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  • zeuxidemus001zeuxidemus001 Member Posts: 3,357 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Awesome! I don't know if it would work for the Ambassador, but I'd love to see it hit the game somehow. Perhaps as an alternate Excelsior skin?

    Yeah that would be cool something to keep the excelsior as an iconic federation ship but also to maybe a 25th century design would be cool.
  • yreodredyreodred Member Posts: 3,527 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    angrytarg wrote: »
    I'd widen her, erm... Badonkadonk a bit (Yeah, I'm a butt person XD). I don't like that half to almost all of the newer designs feauture such a thin "beesting" aft section. If it would feature this "runway" extension around the aft that the Ambassador (Link) and Galaxy feature it would indeed be a nice alternate Ambassador variant.

    I'd call it Envoy-Type Refit and rename/remove the T4 Explorer skin (pulling an "Avenger" on it). Alternatively maybe "Emissary", if that's not otherwise occupied already.
    To be honest i wouldn't change anything on it.

    I think it could be a exemplar of a new 25th century ship design line without any big changes.
    You know no tongue like saucer and no Odyssey/Excelsior -like proportions.
    (small saucer, long nacelles *shudder* )

    It would be a nice and refreshing alternative to Cryptics predominant 25th century designs.

    Yeah that would be cool something to keep the excelsior as an iconic federation ship but also to maybe a 25th century design would be cool.
    As long as its proportions stay the same and no one changes its saucer to look like the avengers/odysseys, i am all for it. :)


    As i already said it's got almost perfect proportions IMO.
    Especially the front, side and top view look awesome. I think it is very important that a ship looks good from any angle (unlike some other designs :o ). It's a very basic and satisfying shaped ship IMO.

    Give it the right size (maybe Galaxy Class size or bigger, think out of the box) and some visual options, like additional pylons that position the nacelles under the saucer or some additional saucers (longer or wider), even a bigger "Badonkadonk" like angrytarg charmingly said ;) , i think it would be a gorgeous addition which starfleet could be proud of.


    @everyone
    Thanks so far for your kind responses!
    I think John Eaves did a real masterpiece with this ship concept.
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  • ruinsfateruinsfate Member Posts: 58 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    yreodred wrote: »
    I especally like the side/front and top view and the short neck. The isometric (?) view looks too ordinary, since its nacelles are too far apart.

    Not far enough apart, imo.
  • ruinsfateruinsfate Member Posts: 58 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    jeffel82 wrote: »
    If we're talking about the NX, I'd love to see the conceptual NX refit.

    One of, if not THE ugliest ship in all of ST? *barf*
  • tucana66tucana66 Member Posts: 710 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    As Scotty would say, "Aye! She's a BEAUTY!"

    Great ship design from John Eaves. But I can't resist posting this feedback:
    I have issue with the placement of the impulse engines on this model. I like them, but they're too close to the warp nacellles, like another Eaves ship...

    I've never been able to get over the Enterprise-B quad nacelle modifications by Mr. Eaves, because two of the impulse engines are right next to the warp nacelles. Like, literally pumping out propulsion right onto the fronts of the warp nacelles!

    http://techspecs.acalltoduty.com/images/excelsior/ex1.jpg
    http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r259/Trekriffic/Enterprise%20B/IMG_1112.jpg

    I think it's one of the more horrendous design ideas by Mr. Eaves. Other than that, I'm a fan of his work.

    Good suggestion. Who knows? Maybe we'll get something like it added to the game. (Or not. It does slightly resemble the STO Exeter-class design. Just enough.)
  • yreodredyreodred Member Posts: 3,527 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    ruinsfate wrote: »
    Not far enough apart, imo.

    Can you see the top view?
    The nacelles are clearly much more closer than at the isometric (big) view of the ship.
    That's what i like about it, it's different and yet beautiful.

    Nacelles don't have to be the dominant part of a ship (unlike at the Odyssey huge nacelles for example.)
    A good balance between saucer-nacelle-engineering hull and their proportions in relation to each other are much more important IMO. Additionally the relatively short neck and elegant and yet sturdy looking pylons complete the design very well.

    I wouldn't change much, heck i wouldn't even want a technical/angled looking surface like the sovereign has.

    Keep it smooth and elegant looking. :)

    EDIT:
    @tucana66
    If you look closely, you can see a little note on the big sketch (ISO view) labeled "Impulse".
    (it's not easy to read :o) It's at the rear end of the saucer, perceptible through the little arrow.

    The impulse engines aren't the big structures on the rear side of the saucer, but the small one in the middle.
    (For me it suggests a really big ship, even if Mr. Evans didn't had a Galaxy/Sovereign sized ship in mind.)
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    A tale of two Picards
    (also applies to Star Trek in general)
  • tucana66tucana66 Member Posts: 710 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    ruinsfate wrote: »
    One of, if not THE ugliest ship in all of ST? *barf*

    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. :cool:

    http://sto-forum.perfectworld.com/showthread.php?t=366771

    Personally, I'd welcome an NX-refit addition. Or the ship posted by the OP.
  • iconiansiconians Member Posts: 6,987 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    I approve and/or endorse this idea/suggestion. (Circle whichever applies on your monitor)
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  • canis36canis36 Member Posts: 737 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    yreodred wrote: »
    For me it looks much more like 25th century design.
    I especally like the side/front and top view and the short neck. The isometric (?) view looks too ordinary, since its nacelles are too far apart.


    Wouldn't this beauty be a gorgeous 25th century Ambassador Vaiant?

    Actually to me it looks like the Noble-class Assault Cruiser with all the rough edges smoothed out (and maybe a few aesthetic touches borrowed from the Exeter-class cruiser). If this is actually a concept for the NX-class done pre-series for Enterprise though...it's likely both ships took cues from that design already.
  • dragonsbrethrendragonsbrethren Member Posts: 1,854 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    That's a nice ship. I'm not sure I'd agree it looks like a 25th century design (it tosses several of the design trends Federation ships moved towards), but it definitely looks more "futuristic" than the Connie. I'd love to see a design based on this in-game.
  • rasalghul2rasalghul2 Member Posts: 10 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    yreodred wrote: »
    first and foremost:
    This is NOT, i repeat NOT a T5 Constitution thread.

    It is about this Beauty:
    nx-01_zps5cd046fe.jpg
    created by john eaves. LINK


    It's a early draft of the NX-01.
    I'm not suggesting it should become a independent T5 NX class or something like that.

    No, the first thing that came to my mind was "hey that look much more advanced than even kirks ship!"
    For me it looks much more like 25th century design.
    I especally like the side/front and top view and the short neck. The isometric (?) view looks too ordinary, since its nacelles are too far apart.


    Wouldn't this beauty be a gorgeous 25th century Ambassador Vaiant?

    1st sry for mi english.

    i really like this one a mix of clasic desing and 25th tech i love to fly one of this :D
  • yreodredyreodred Member Posts: 3,527 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    canis36 wrote: »
    Actually to me it looks like the Noble-class Assault Cruiser with all the rough edges smoothed out (and maybe a few aesthetic touches borrowed from the Exeter-class cruiser).
    [sarcasm/on]Except that it has a round saucer, shorter and less bulky Nacelles, a neck, completely different looking pylons, a different saucer/ nacelle distace ratio and let's not forget totally different proportions... Yes, it looks almost exactly like a noble class.[sarcasm/off]

    Sorry, i can't see much similarities between those two ships.
    It's rather the culmination of things that make a Starfleet ship look beautiful.

    canis36 wrote: »
    If this is actually a concept for the NX-class done pre-series for Enterprise though...it's likely both ships took cues from that design already.
    So you mean that we shouldn't even think about this ship, because we already have two ships that coincidentally share some similarities with it? If you look like it from that perspective, there shouldn't be ANY starfleet ships having a saucer/nacelles/engineering hull anymore.

    The thing that makes this ship special is the way all these elements work together.
    It's a classic Trek design that looks very modern at the same time, without saying "hey look here, i look cool!", this design doesn't need that.



    If i had the choice, i would have made the new Enterprise look like this ship (just make it 700-800 meters long).
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    A tale of two Picards
    (also applies to Star Trek in general)
  • sohtohsohtoh Member Posts: 620 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    If the Avenger Class had this design, I would like flying it a lot more.

    I really hope that they consider introducing this design into the game.
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  • mustrumridcully0mustrumridcully0 Member Posts: 12,963 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    cbrjwrr wrote: »
    That's basically a Sovereign/Noble/Majestic with adjustments?


    Cool looking mind.

    To some extent, but the neck is still very distinct and doesn't disappear in the transition from saucer to engineering hull. I think the lack of a real neck is what is a major aspect of the Sovereign (and Intrepid) class of ships.
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  • spockout1spockout1 Member Posts: 314 Arc User
    edited February 2015
    Nice looking ship. Gets my vote.
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  • warpedcorewarpedcore Member Posts: 362 Arc User
    edited February 2015
    I love the more traditional lines to her. I'd buy this one in a heart beat. Especially if it was more of a tactical bent to it.
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  • theraven2378theraven2378 Member Posts: 6,017 Arc User
    edited February 2015
    I like the design
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    • trinitycompletedtrinitycompleted Member Posts: 108 Arc User
      edited February 2015
      jeffel82 wrote: »
      Truthfully, if we're talking about Ambassador variants, I'd rather see Andrew Probert's original concept design first.

      I think we kind of have the "2409 refit" version of that as the Guardian class. Looked kind of blatant, to me, but I might be trying to see what i wanted to see.
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