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Looking for some feedback on my mission?

Hi everyone,

I've been working on-and-off on a mission for about the last eighteen months, and I finally got it to a point where I'm pretty satisfied, so I'm looking for other opinions.

The mission is called Tylysus Crisis, and it's for FED players at level 31 and above.

This is a non-combat mission with lots of dialogue and possibly a complicated story. It's set in the year 2165 in an alternate reality, and instead of a transition or time travel involved, for now, it's seen through the eyes of a resident of that alternate timeline. This resident is a human, and so the mission assumes your character is also human (sorry if this bothers you).I'm working right now on a sequel, as I didn't feel I could fit the entire story from my head into a reasonable time for a mission. I was also planning to make corresponding missions with the same basic events happening, but told from different perspectives (a different perspective for the major species). Some background knowledge from Enterprise might be helpful, but not necessary.

I welcome any feedback or criticisms you have, so thanks in advance if you play and comment!

Thol Kaula Komihntra
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  • velocitorevelocitore Member Posts: 33 Arc User
    edited September 2014
    Hi,
    I just played your mission and it was fun. No combat just a good story with very well written dialog and characters. I also like that I was able to wear my Enterprise era costume during the mission. It's a good start.

    Thanks,
    Velocitore
  • uncle2fireuncle2fire Member Posts: 68 Arc User
    edited September 2014
    Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sure I'm satisfied with the ending, though. Can I ask how you felt about it and about how long the mission took you?

    Thanks again!
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • velocitorevelocitore Member Posts: 33 Arc User
    edited September 2014
    The ending of the mission in space was abrupt and definately one of those "to be continued..." endings. Your on to a good start, keep working on it, it seems your just getting started. How long the mission took, well I guess it depends on how much and how fast or slow you read, every player is different. You could add more with out it getting too long.
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