Hi everybody, I just want to post a note letting everyone know that I have just published my first Foundry mission "Ferengi Recovery"
It is a mission about a federation bounty hunter who takes a commission to find a lost ferengi cargo ship. It plays through at 45 minutes.
You can find it by going to the Foundry and click on "Review Content" then click on the "Top Rated" Tab, then click on the "New" Tab and type "Ferengi Recovery" in the text box and click Search.
It is a lot of typing to find new missions and it needs 5 reviews to get out of the review phase. I greatly appreciate the effort anyone makes to find the mission. Please let me know what you think of it good or bad, feedback is welcome, especially from other Foundry Authors.
Hey, thanks for making missions. I'll give yours a run through. Some feedback as it comes to me below:
For the first objective, consider giving the location so it shows up in the mission tracker. Right now it says "Defeat the Klingons". Consider changing it to "Go to the console on Drozana Station in Eta Eridani"
The plot could use a bit more explanation. First I'm killing Klingons in space, then Cardies on the ground. What's the common thread?
Unfortunately I got disconnected and was unable to get back on to finish the mission, lol. I'll try to continue it soon, but that's something to start on.
Got around to finishing it just now after rebooting my internet!
The plot ended up being.... ridiculous, lol. But also kinda fun, thanks to that Ferengi jerk.
In general you could use a pass for spelling, as I spotted some errors but it wasn't enough to detract from the experience IMO.
The maps could use a bit more customization, but I think as you get more experience you'll get a better handle on it.
Last but not least, there was a LOT of ground combat in this mission, a bit more than my personal taste, but I never really got overwhelmed and didn't die in ground combat.
Thanks for playing and reviewing the mission. I have made several updates to the mission, cleaning up spelling and grammar.
I also took your suggestion about there being too much ground combat and reduced the number of enemy mobs. I also added a bit more interactions to make the story more entertaining.
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For the first objective, consider giving the location so it shows up in the mission tracker. Right now it says "Defeat the Klingons". Consider changing it to "Go to the console on Drozana Station in Eta Eridani"
The plot could use a bit more explanation. First I'm killing Klingons in space, then Cardies on the ground. What's the common thread?
Unfortunately I got disconnected and was unable to get back on to finish the mission, lol. I'll try to continue it soon, but that's something to start on.
The plot ended up being.... ridiculous, lol. But also kinda fun, thanks to that Ferengi jerk.
In general you could use a pass for spelling, as I spotted some errors but it wasn't enough to detract from the experience IMO.
The maps could use a bit more customization, but I think as you get more experience you'll get a better handle on it.
Last but not least, there was a LOT of ground combat in this mission, a bit more than my personal taste, but I never really got overwhelmed and didn't die in ground combat.
Keep 'em coming
I also took your suggestion about there being too much ground combat and reduced the number of enemy mobs. I also added a bit more interactions to make the story more entertaining.
It is intended as a humorous mission.
Thanks.