Argus Array Sabotage Daily

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• Archived Post Member Posts: 2,264,498 Arc User

  May 2012 edited May 2012

  Gotta love the Argus Array! Always causing problems!

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• Archived Post Member Posts: 2,264,498 Arc User

  May 2012 edited May 2012

  Duke-of-Rock wrote: »

  Hey Brian,
  
  If you have time with all you do, I did a reverse spin on my Argus Array daily mission for the Klingon
  Faction.
  
  Name: Argus Array Sabotage Daily
  Any Level / Klingon Faction
  
  I added a computer core to the arrays interior and added a little combat and demolition tasks.
  Just what every healthy and happy Klingon wants.
  
  Still very quick like my Fed version. I really wanted to post a Klingon mission, and it seemed like
  the best way to break the ice.
  
  Please give it a go if you have a chance. Your review is of course optional, and not required if you
  are too busy. Thanks.
  
  Craig aka: Duke-of-Rock

  
  Klingon Mission - Argus Array Sabotage Daily
  Author: Duke-of-Rock
  Allegiance: Klingon
  Project ID: ST-HAKUYY9KY
  
  

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  Summary: This is a short but great mission. The map designs and battles are good. The story dialogue is excellent and even though it was a short mission it was a lot of fun. I would highly recommend this mission to anyone who likes great map design, good battles and excellent supporting story dialogue. I really enjoyed it.
  
  Below are a couple of things I noted while playing the mission that I wanted to let you know about. Everything in this write up should be seen as suggestions on ways I felt you could improve certain elements of the mission. They are yours to do with as you see fit.
  
  Mission Description: This is detailed description but contains very little about the mission. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description. I noted one item to consider changing:
  -Consider changing the description around and adding more actual mission details.
  
  Grant Mission Dialogue: This is a good grant dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
  -Consider changing "QaPla [Rank]" to read "Qapla' [Rank]".
  
  Mission Task: Despite the fact that you indicate the start location in the description consider adding the location of the entry point to the first custom map to the initial mission task. I noted no spelling errors with this task.
  
  Mission Entry Prompt: This is a good use of the prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this prompt.
  
  MAPS:
  Argus Array: This is a good map design with a nice battle and well written dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
  -The post battle dialogue; consider changing "Of course your supreme tactics made the battle easy" to read "Of course your superior tactics made the battle easy".
  
  Argus Array Maintenance Core: This is a great map design with a nice battle and well written dialogue. The explosion effects are very well done. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
  -The map transfer dialogue NPC appears to be one of my ship BOFFs but is speaking as if with the away team.
  
  Damaged Argus Array: This is a good map design with well written story dialogue that serves to wrap up the mission. I did like the evil laugh too. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.
  
  

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  Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. Yet another find mission brought to you by Duke-of-Rock. As always I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future.
  Brian
  
  This critique report also filed 05/27/2012 on forum posting for: [URL=" http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?t=236755&referrerid=312767"]In depth mission reports upon request[/URL].

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• crackerloc1 Member Posts: 5 Arc User

  November 2012 edited November 2012

  Bababooey!!!

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