You have a good concept, but the amount of action in a video directly correlates to the amount of interest your viewers will have.
The first few sequences could be removed entirely. The other sequences (with your character running then pausing, then cutting to another scene with running and pausing, and a third time before finally shooting someone) could be trimmed up to include mostly action. Have your character run once, then engage the enemy. That would be more interesting to watch.
Again, this is a good concept and I'm sure your next video will be much more fun to watch if you keep it to mostly action.
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And put some cannons on that thing. By the time you made your first pass, they would have been dead in my ship!
The first few sequences could be removed entirely. The other sequences (with your character running then pausing, then cutting to another scene with running and pausing, and a third time before finally shooting someone) could be trimmed up to include mostly action. Have your character run once, then engage the enemy. That would be more interesting to watch.
Again, this is a good concept and I'm sure your next video will be much more fun to watch if you keep it to mostly action.