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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Updated all missions.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Gave Zira her proper uniform in the latest mission updates.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Foundry lag has prevented me from applying fixes to several missions. They will be delayed.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    I've been thinking of adding an overall theme to the story.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wmdl2nG7X3c

    I think this is good.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Foundry lag still prevents me from correcting a few things in Scars 4....


    In other news, I've gotten in contact with a fellow player in-game who is an artist. I should have some cool portraits of all the characters to put out on the front page eventually :D.

    Also, I have finally got back to writing the book for Perfection. Past couple of weeks have been busy, but now we are back in business.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    5 and a half pages have been written today for Perfection.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    The foundry lag should be fixed tomorrow. If so, I will begin doing some minor fixes to my missions.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited July 2014
    Several more pages have been written. I am approaching the completion of the first half of the story. The second half will be the events from Perfection 2.

    In addition, there will be small and minor updates today to some of the Scars mission. One in particular should fix the issues had with a reach marker in part 3.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    Should be getting some portraits of the main cast eventually.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    When I complete the Scars series and its spinoffs, I will probably make missions around the Caitian Diaspora doff chain.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • voporakvoporak Member Posts: 5,621 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    ashkrik23 wrote: »
    When I complete the Scars series and its spinoffs, I will probably make missions around the Caitian Diaspora doff chain.

    So we can expect those sometime in mid to late 2016? ;)
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    voporak wrote: »
    So we can expect those sometime in mid to late 2016? ;)



    Soon(TM)

    In all honesty, I do not know. There is no promise of it right now, just a likely project I can pursue after Scars. It will give me more material to work with, since my strength lies in stories about the cat species.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    There will be a delay in getting the first of the new character portraits for the main page.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    A major typo update is being applied to Scars 3. I am also doing a small update to the end credits of Scars 4. Thanks to @lindaleff for the Scars 3 grammar review.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    I am going to separate the characters into a major and minor characters section eventually.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • midnighttlcmidnighttlc Member Posts: 107 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    ... :) ....
  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    I am not sure what the smiley face is for?
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    I am performing some minor costume updates for a few major characters in Scars 3 and 4 today.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    Writing will continue for Perfection's novel, soon.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    A few more pages have been written.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • kjwashingtonkjwashington Member Posts: 2,529 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    ashkrik23 wrote: »
    When I complete the Scars series and its spinoffs, I will probably make missions around the Caitian Diaspora doff chain.

    I'm curious if you plan on making 10 or so small missions (many of which won't involve combat) to reflect the actual assignment chain, or condense it into one or two missions (with small amounts of combat). :D
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    I'm curious if you plan on making 10 or so small missions (many of which won't involve combat) to reflect the actual assignment chain, or condense it into one or two missions (with small amounts of combat). :D

    I will have to look at the events of each mission. So far, I intend to expand each doff mission into it's own story. I will just have to see.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • kjwashingtonkjwashington Member Posts: 2,529 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    ashkrik23 wrote: »
    I will have to look at the events of each mission. So far, I intend to expand each doff mission into it's own story. I will just have to see.

    Another thing I just noticed:
    You have the events of these missions taking place in 2412. Two years after the Fed/KDF war ends. Are I'Zira and her followers rouge KDF elements? I would be surprised if they were since the KDF would probably hunt them down. :confused:
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    Another thing I just noticed:
    You have the events of these missions taking place in 2412. Two years after the Fed/KDF war ends. Are I'Zira and her followers rouge KDF elements? I would be surprised if they were since the KDF would probably hunt them down. :confused:

    As stated in my mission descriptions, my missions take place in an alternate timeline. In this timeline, the factions become aligned by 2412. Yes, I'Zira is part of a rogue group.

    My KDF version of the stories will show you being tasked by the Ferasan prides to seek out I'Zira's forces and stop them, etc.
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  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    I'm gonna try to write some more pages this weekend, hopefully.
    King of Lions rawr! Protect the wildlife of the world. Check out my foundry series Perfection and Scars of the Pride. arcgames.com/en/forums#/discussion/1138650/ashkrik23s-foundry-missions
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  • huntingdon1701huntingdon1701 Member Posts: 155 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed playing your first missions and I'll look forward to playing anything else that you publish. It's nice to have some really detailed storylines to play - most of the main missions don't manage anything like your level of characterisation.
  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    What is your in-game handle? I love to talk to players in-game about their experiences.
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  • naharikajalnaharikajal Member Posts: 232 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    Hi Ashkrik23,

    I've just finished the second part of your Perfection series and I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed both episodes. They had a great and exciting story. Normally I don't like foundry missions with that much combat but yours had the right mixture so to say. Not too much not too less. The way you told the story kept me wanting to know about what's going to happen next all the time.

    The ground battles in the first part were really challenging for my lvl46 romulan alt who wasn't even fully equiped at that time and still used MKVII stuff.
    So I had to come up with some strategy to defeat the Borg. I also had to pick up every single loot just to see if I could upgrade my and the BOs gear to MKX. This was a lot of fun and a "need" which I didn't have for a long time in STO.

    I also wanted to share a nice screenshot I did during the final battle :-)

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    The idea with the soundtrack suggestions was nice and gave a good impression about what feeling you want to "create" for the player. The rest of the time I was listening to some soundtrack from a well known movie with some alien... It fit perfectly to the dark and cold scenario of your mission.

    On a sidenote: I didn't save M'Sarabi because I felt that it would be too dangerous to maybe loose all the results we (the united fleet and me) fought so hard for. So I was with the klingon captain on this. You know... the old "the needs of the many..."-thingy ;-)

    Again thank you very much for giving me a great play-time the last two days!

    Nahari
  • ashkrik23ashkrik23 Member Posts: 10,809 Arc User
    edited August 2014
    I'm very happy you enjoyed the series! We'll have to meet in-game for further in-depth discussions. Do you plan on playing Scars as well?
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  • naharikajalnaharikajal Member Posts: 232 Arc User
    edited September 2014
    Yes I am planning to play your other missions as well. If you want I can post some feedback here as well :-)
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