Literary Challenge #14 : Facility 4028
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its hard to remember all that detail and i want to be as close to the original as possible.
Again, feedback people, its no fun to be ignored.
Yeah, that's what I found too. Ok. Thanks for checking. Time to get scribblin'!
This is more than just a simple security breach for Kim. This is a life-changing event.
Essentially, Kim is finding out that when she lived on Romulus, she might have chosen the wrong friends. Other things going on that may come in later is that it's looking like Taris tried to have Kim killed. Whether it was on purpose or not, we don't know, though it may have something to do with an alliance with Donatra.
After Kim's disappearance in 2387, Ynala became a well-loved governor of an outer colony, and then was given a Senate seat by Taris herself.
So many questions for her now: Did her Romulan wife betray her? Was there something more sinister behind Vaihuu's conception? Did Taris try to frame Sela for Ynala's murder to pit the Hvallis against Sela? Or, did Sela kill Ynala on purpose with the intention of preventing her from challenging her ascention to power?
Suddenly, Kim is questioning whether she misjudged Sela, or if Sela is a different animal altogether. Either way, it's the first time in her life she doesn't want to kill her.
Regardless of those personal truths, in the eyes of even what little allies in the RSE she had, she now looks like a traitor, especially with Taris escaping under her watch, and the only way to exonerate herself will be to find Taris and kill her.
I might post another from Vaihuu's perspective, since this is also a life-changing event for her.
Well done using your officers to create your report. I was tempting to use the same format.
Ooh, well in that case how about my previous idea of 'what if your FED and KDF characters met'? Of course I'm not biased....
Hmmm your Klingon toon meets a promenat Federation Captain for control of Donatu, its smack in the middle of the disputed area of space and its rather under utilized in-game. Instead of a simple officer report you writ a short story that details the events of the battle. And maybe Cryptic will chose the best and make it into a mission for the System for the Klingon side.
Just a thought.
I like this idea!
I am going to unsticky this now as I prepare to post #15 -- feel free to keep discussing, though!
Cheers,
Brandon =/\=