Literary Challenge #11 : Hidden Agendas
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ill try and make something up between my foundry creating.
i will think on this.
It shows how indecisive my captain can be, how stubborn and temperamental he can be, his mannerisms very much mirror my own.
This also plays off his backstory, as he mucks up a great many things that don't involve tactics, and the connection he shares to his senior staff, whom he has served with for a long time.
I have intentionally left a great many holes in the details of what happens on the surface, to signify some sort of event occuring that is not to be disclosed for some reason (the exact reason I know, but to disclose it is to break it, thus making it unsuitable. Choose your own reason :P)
Yours I enjoyed. Always like a little mysterious conspiracy.
For any who are interested or didn't know exactly where the origins are: Camus II, land of body-swapping
If you just don't recognize that episode as actually having had happened, you're good.
And mines no better. It has mind melding squid arms....
i must admit i had no idea about the episode which is why i didnt do anything around it.
Mind melding squid arms i love it
Well thank you very much! b(:D)d <--- thumbs up
Cheers,
Brandon =/\=
And the people in there also did a better job. Or are we not allow to say they did a better job?
God knows i wouldn't mind getting a writting job for Cryptic. I've got the ideas, i'm just not that great with the foundry to do them my self just yet.
then team up with someone. (not me because I'm a Foundry n00b too lol). But there was a thread around here a couple of days ago where someone who had nothing for story ideas but could work the Foundry asked for someone just like how you described yourself.
That's along the same lines of thought I had when I read that thread too. I can't blame you.