Literary Challenge #8 : Unknown Anomalies
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Literary Challenge #8 : Unknown Anomalies.
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Sorry, but my inner evil forces me to break the character of the literary challenge asap.
Please give me feedback so I can hone my craft.
I found the gradual change in attitude followed by the sudden reversal a bit of a twist and I found it somewhat unexpected but liked. Overall a pretty good story.
I have posted my story, its a two-parter and quite a big one s a result, so take your time reading it, constructive criticism is aalways appreciated so i can improve the next one. If you have any questions about any part of the story then feel free to ask here or in an in-game mail, I'll answer as best I can once I see it.
Cheers,
Brandon =/\=
Also I have an anomoly story I have already written but my story is got a different back ground than your suggestion does that mean I can't post it?
Just copy it into the other thread with a similar title (that one doesnt have discussion thread at the back of it) and alter it to fit the premise
My entry is over three posts. I hope it makes sense.
I'm enjoying reading the posts so far and am looking forward to seeing more (in this challenge and other ones).
Cheers,
Brandon =/\=