Perfect World Movie - Last Stand

I commebted. That was just amazing! If you ever do things like this again (and I hope you do), try voicing it over. The text I felt needed to be spoken. Other then that, good job!

Awesome! It's interesting to watch, not too long and very well put! As someone studying similar thing all I can say awesome job! Must have taken a while to capture it all right. I hope you got great grade on that project. ^^ Only trailer is a tiny bit too long, but maybe that's just me. Great job!

Thanks for the feedback on my comment. I'm finishing school this year, maybe when I get a laptop and recording programs I can voice for your next project!

no wizzy love b:cry

jks rofl. love every minute of the movie and the trailer. awesome work i enjoy watching it very well. thanks alot b:thanks. i actually was suprised at the end lol didnt think u'd get a whole bunch of mystics unify them in a circle. that was very cool. ofc u have to end the battle with an hf X3 ! it showed alot!!!! of pwi's land scape which i love. very nicely done

Things I loved: Most of the plot, the superbly done animations, and the general feel of the story. The music was well chosen, and the animations were mostly spot on. Bravo

Things I think I could use a bit more work: I think Kurthe overused the "think" gesture, for instance when he was warming his hands by the fire, "defend" might have been more appropriate as it sticks their hands out in front of them. I also feel like that one shot with the dueling circle could have been cut, cuz the dueling circle don't really look good as mentioned by others. I also wish the keeper of the wand had played a bigger part in the recapture of the wand. It wasn't really "her" story, it was Kurthe's story. But that's just nitpicky, I just tend to prefer strong female leads. It would have also made more sense since you chose to narrate it in first person, but she wasn't there for most of it. Also the scene at the end, I think it would have been better to have him run her to help. I mean he teleports from inside of the cave to outside, but can't be bothered to run his dying/dead finance to the healer?

Overall: I really did love it, and I can tell this was a labor of love. The only reason I pointed out the small criticisms is because you say this is for a grade. So maybe if you choose to do perfect world again, you can keep some of these things in mind. I'm sure your teacher will do a better analysis than I did though. XD Even though it was 14 minutes long, it felt short. But it wasn't short at all, which means it was just told so well that it kept the audience wanting more. This is always a good thing. If I had to grade it, I'd definitely give you guys a B+ or A, truly great job. And you should be really proud. b:victory

Really well made! Good job! b:victory

I'm thinking of making my own movie. Voiced with Speakonia and UTAU b:chuckle