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ZeaKuro - Raging Tide
ZeaKuro - Raging Tide Posts: 631 Arc User
edited April 2011 in Off-Topic Discussion
Hey, I usually never post my writings out in the open but this was an on the spot piece so I figured I would post it for some feed back. Tell me what you think. b:cute

Never felt this way before
Gonna get my head straight
Give in to temptation
You never seen anything like this before
Up and down with my heart
Never knew what to do
Gonna set it free
Let everything be
You mean so much to me
Down at the core of it all
Never have I seen anything more beautiful
Gonna have to make this right
Run away from all the bad
Around and around with my head again
And we know how this will end
Desert me like I never meant anything
You always do this to me
Never will I let you win
Gonna get through this
Make all this right
You will see
Cry for the years we lost
Never will we truly let go
Gonna get through the night
Say it all meant something
Goodbye is the last thing I want to hear
Never will I feel the same
Gonna bear this in my heart forever
Tell me what this means to you
A world with no light?
Lie to me
And say we meant something
Hurt is all I can feel
You were all I ever had
as-sas-sin
/əˈsasin/
n.
1. One who murders by surprise attack, especially one who carries out a plot to kill a prominent person.
synonyms: murderer, killer, gunman, executioner, informalhitman, hired gun.
Latin assassnus; Greek δολοφόνος
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  • asywishes123
    asywishes123 Posts: 7 Arc User
    edited April 2011
    Wow, I really like this poem, This one is completely seems as an experienced person have wrote this, I think you are having a great interest in Poems. This is truly wonderful.
  • Tetsachi - Sanctuary
    Tetsachi - Sanctuary Posts: 10 Arc User
    edited April 2011
    this poem is beautiful. who ever wrote this is a genius. if u wrote it ur awsomesauce and shud be famous. if i had a sticker i'd give you oneb:victory
  • bmxforlife
    bmxforlife Posts: 2 Arc User
    edited April 2011
    b:victory

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