Becoming: a BladeMaster's Tale (FanFic)

MissEbil - Heavens Tear
MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
edited April 2010 in The Fanatics Forum
Yes, I wrote Fanfic too!
When I told them I was a writer, somebody asked me if I'd ever written anything about PWI, I said "Not yet!" b:laugh

So, ever up for the challenge, I picked up a pencil and paper (yes, pencil!) and started to write. I finished the first 2 parts in about the same amount of days and then got distracted by playing PWI xD.
I promise to update as often as I can and feel free to comment and critique as much as you like.
The story is rated Teen, because I never know where my imagination will throw at me, and there will be some violence.

My FanFiction.net profile is here: http://www.fanfiction.net/~mcvinster

Becoming:
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

It says chapters, they're more like parts, as a short story has really short chapters.
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    :P left you a review. I like it so far ^^
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Heehee thanks!
    I'm partway through part 3 as we speak, but I'm stuck on the "I know what I want to happen but don't know how to do it!" phase b:chuckle
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  • Kyna - Lost City
    Kyna - Lost City Posts: 1,597 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    Ouch! I hate those! xD I'm stuck with that at the moment on my chapter five b:surrender I got a page into it and now the words just aren't coming -_-

    I know what will fix this! COOKIES!
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    COOKIES! *noms a cookie* AHA see, it does work! I'll get onto the next part soon as I'm swamped with signature requests atm. b:chuckle
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited July 2009
    *BUMP*
    (I'm writing more, I promise!)
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  • Sile - Lost City
    Sile - Lost City Posts: 15 Arc User
    edited August 2009
    ...I don't wanna kill monsters anymore. ;_;
    I like your writing. It's very absorbing.
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  • Kuroblood - Dreamweaver
    Kuroblood - Dreamweaver Posts: 17 Arc User
    edited August 2009
    This is intresting. Usually the fan fics i read have the same class as the persons main. i'll be keeping an eye on your writting. i hope to see another chapter soon. b:pleased
  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited August 2009
    Kuroblood - Dreamweaver wrote: »
    This is intresting. Usually the fan fics i read have the same class as the persons main. i'll be keeping an eye on your writting. i hope to see another chapter soon. b:pleased

    Don't get me wrong, I love being a veno, but all the veno fan-fic I could think of was:
    "Yey! I got a pet!"
    *pet chomps a mob*
    "WOOT!"

    The End.

    Writing a little more in just a second, I promise part 3 will be up soon, even if I make it a really short part.
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  • __Fluffy__ - Heavens Tear
    __Fluffy__ - Heavens Tear Posts: 258 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    Wow, you are a great writer! I cant wait for part 4!! b:victory
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  • The_Champion - Sanctuary
    The_Champion - Sanctuary Posts: 988 Arc User
    edited September 2009
    I remember doing the bettle quest, I like how you made it seem more interesting then just exp. though if I good make one suggestion, try to make the dialogue seem more realistic towards the time. The game was set in ancient china and I'm pretty sure they didn't use hours back then :). Other then that the story is a page turner, good luck!

    (P.S. “Lowly tailor's assistant, remember.”

    “You are far more than you believe, young one.”
    You stole that from Star Wars didn't you? :) )
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited November 2009
    A long-awaited update!

    Well, part 4 is halfway through, but I reached a block and took to writing more on my novel. Shame really as I have so many ideas for later on in this story!
    Love the feedback I've been getting, and I know it's late, but your suggestion Champion, I did consider when I started writing, but too much archaic language puts a lot of people off. Rest assured though, the Elders are very much archaic. I wanted to have the nice division between the young generation of the main character (players) and the old people (most NPCs).

    Nuuuu I didn't steal it from Star Wars! I was in the middle of playing Fable2 at the time, so it's more like Theresa from that...
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited March 2010
    By Don King's Hair! Chapter 4 is up!

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5184150/4/Becoming_A_Blademasters_Tale
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  • __Fluffy__ - Heavens Tear
    __Fluffy__ - Heavens Tear Posts: 258 Arc User
    edited March 2010
    Oh my goodness... that is awesome! you should really write it in book form to get published. Do you have any other stories? i'd love to read any if you have some!! im a big fan :D
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited March 2010
    __Fluffy__ - Heavens Tear wrote: »
    Oh my goodness... that is awesome! you should really write it in book form to get published. Do you have any other stories? i'd love to read any if you have some!! im a big fan :D

    Well shucks, thank you! I really do love writing and I do have lots of other stories I've started and a couple I want to get published when I finish them, not sure PWI would like me publishing a fan-fic but you never know!
    *shouts to the Admins* I promise to put your logo on and advertise it if you let me!
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  • __Luna_ - Heavens Tear
    __Luna_ - Heavens Tear Posts: 15 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    Wow! you are an amazing writer!! i can't wait for chapter 5?? i know how hard it is to find the right words, ive written a couple little stories myself, except not about PWI b:chuckle

    Welp, ill be checkin back soon! I hope all goes well!
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  • Grippieluver - Lost City
    Grippieluver - Lost City Posts: 9,807 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    oh my goodness Ebil this is really good! I just love getting the updatez on partz. see this is a sign of a great writer, where you all can write super long stories, i write a few pages, and thatz it o-o wow really great work, keep it up!
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    Heehee thanks!

    I know it is hard to find the right words most of the time, but when I get going, I just write pages and pages and then it just peters out and I end up writing really slowly and often it doesn't make sense lol. That's the time where I usually delete the last 3 sentences I wrote and come back to it another day.
    That's why I don't update my fanfic as often as some, if I force myself to write it ends up being bad :( I'd sooner leave it and be happy with the quality of what I write.
    Guess that's why it's taken me 6 years to write hardly a third of a novel, eh?
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  • Grippieluver - Lost City
    Grippieluver - Lost City Posts: 9,807 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    lolz ya prolly, see when i start it all flows and i get about 5-6 pages, then i start to think, and really try to fit things together and then i end up basically at a road block
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  • MissEbil - Heavens Tear
    MissEbil - Heavens Tear Posts: 369 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    The amount of times I get distracted when I run out of ideas and just accidentally write what someone on TV just said... I dunno lol the mind of a writer is a complex and scary place xD
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  • Grippieluver - Lost City
    Grippieluver - Lost City Posts: 9,807 Arc User
    edited April 2010
    oh meh gawd that happenz to me all the time lolz, and yes i totally agree with u
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