A Story
Deonra - Heavens Tear
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I decided to crate a story based off my adventure as a veno in perfect worl yes i know most of you would dissaprove but i asspire to be a writer some day. even though i have many typos hee hee ^^ and mispells but hey im only human.
[Chapter 1]
From a youngling i was told of a maginificent story. One of the most beautiful place i have never heard of, were i can frollic among my own kind and be free. With trees taller than the sky and mountains standing high and mighty. The cities were gleaming with bright people who greeted you kindly and no one ever said one bad word of you. This place they called the perfect world, my friends talked about it every day saying they wished they could go there and live out thier lives. Once we learned a few years later our world has been over ran by the wraiths, my parents were devistated. As soon as i hit sixteen i was trained to be a powerful untamed mage. Our teachers told us we had to become one of a thousand to destroy the threat for good. The training was long and harsh on us, at least we were able to sleep at the end of the day. Over time i grew older and more aware of what was going to happen between my friends and i, all of us were seperated once we finished our training at 18. Every trainee with mearly a magical staff and the knowlege of one simple spell. I reaced the final training groud were my adventure began, a guide awaited the three other venomancers i was grouped with. She called us over to her and greeted each of us nicely and shook our hands. "Welcome outside of training girls. Its your first time around these parts and i know you are strange to this place. But thats no reason to just stand around here and do nothing." She said to us roughly. "What do we have to do Mam?" one of the other venos asked.The guide pointed to a plant like creature slideing across the ground with lein like arme protruding from its base. "That is a horribite, your first mission out here is to each kill 10 of them and return to me. Do not worry they look menacing, but they will not harm you to much. Try to stay at a distance." We looked at each other and the guide ordered us off takeing our names in a small book. Whhat did we get ourselves into.
[Chapter 1]
From a youngling i was told of a maginificent story. One of the most beautiful place i have never heard of, were i can frollic among my own kind and be free. With trees taller than the sky and mountains standing high and mighty. The cities were gleaming with bright people who greeted you kindly and no one ever said one bad word of you. This place they called the perfect world, my friends talked about it every day saying they wished they could go there and live out thier lives. Once we learned a few years later our world has been over ran by the wraiths, my parents were devistated. As soon as i hit sixteen i was trained to be a powerful untamed mage. Our teachers told us we had to become one of a thousand to destroy the threat for good. The training was long and harsh on us, at least we were able to sleep at the end of the day. Over time i grew older and more aware of what was going to happen between my friends and i, all of us were seperated once we finished our training at 18. Every trainee with mearly a magical staff and the knowlege of one simple spell. I reaced the final training groud were my adventure began, a guide awaited the three other venomancers i was grouped with. She called us over to her and greeted each of us nicely and shook our hands. "Welcome outside of training girls. Its your first time around these parts and i know you are strange to this place. But thats no reason to just stand around here and do nothing." She said to us roughly. "What do we have to do Mam?" one of the other venos asked.The guide pointed to a plant like creature slideing across the ground with lein like arme protruding from its base. "That is a horribite, your first mission out here is to each kill 10 of them and return to me. Do not worry they look menacing, but they will not harm you to much. Try to stay at a distance." We looked at each other and the guide ordered us off takeing our names in a small book. Whhat did we get ourselves into.
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boring
grfgrfgdgdWe're MysticAve my name is not Dave
(Poem in the making - Shall be epic)0 -
Yes, boring. Trying to be interesting but in fact meaningless. Kinda like Nightwish.0
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Not to be rude, but you should really try and have someone proof-read this...(Besides yourself -_-)[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0
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So who in here's a gamer?0
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Maddrox - Harshlands wrote: »So who in here's a gamer?
And thus, the OP's thread was casually hijacked. b:pleased[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]0 -
Gurl Friend, That Story Wuz Smexxy! Dont Let Those Guyz Bring Ya Down. And Darlin, As A Veno I Thought It Wuz Pimp, But If Ur Gonna Write Sumthin About Pw, U Need To Add A Little, Oh I Dont Know, Pazazz! Other Than That Hun, It Wuz Oober Pimpalicious! Keep On Writing[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]Thankiez to Dorset for the sig!
MagicHamsta will remain in our hearts forever
P.S. I am a female venomancer ^^ I know it's rare, isn't it?0 -
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