avatar feedback pls

Majesta - Dreamweaver
Majesta - Dreamweaver Posts: 268 Arc User
edited June 2009 in The Fanatics Forum
Hey guys!

I would like to get feedback on the portrait for my sig b:victory
Constructive feedback would be appreciated b:pleased

majestasig2.png
When I got the meaning of melee mixed up:
'Maj.. Melee ffs.. means I'm punching you in the face 1 foot away!'
>.<
Post edited by Majesta - Dreamweaver on

Comments

  • MissWisteria - Heavens Tear
    MissWisteria - Heavens Tear Posts: 4 Arc User
    edited June 2009
    your drawing is lovely, i particularly like your colouring. b:victory
    if i have to be a critic id say just define the strand of hair on her face a bit b:pleased
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • Majesta - Dreamweaver
    Majesta - Dreamweaver Posts: 268 Arc User
    edited June 2009
    MissWisteria - Heavens Tear wrote: »
    your drawing is lovely, i particularly like your colouring. b:victory
    if i have to be a critic id say just define the strand of hair on her face a bit b:pleased

    Thank you for the reply b:pleased
    hmm.. I'll definitely try it out :)

    tnx!!
    b:bye
    When I got the meaning of melee mixed up:
    'Maj.. Melee ffs.. means I'm punching you in the face 1 foot away!'
    >.<
  • Reikara - Heavens Tear
    Reikara - Heavens Tear Posts: 1,321 Arc User
    edited June 2009
    Yeah, a black outline on the green strands of hair that touch her face would be nice, since the green is very hard to see against her pale skin. I'd say her neck is a bit thick, but I suppose that just comes down to artist style anyway.

    Overall I really love it, very beautifully done.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • Majesta - Dreamweaver
    Majesta - Dreamweaver Posts: 268 Arc User
    edited June 2009
    Reikara - Heavens Tear wrote: »
    Yeah, a black outline on the green strands of hair that touch her face would be nice, since the green is very hard to see against her pale skin. I'd say her neck is a bit thick, but I suppose that just comes down to artist style anyway.

    Overall I really love it, very beautifully done.

    I'm on it :) I'll post the new version asap.
    Tnx for the feedback!
    b:bye
    When I got the meaning of melee mixed up:
    'Maj.. Melee ffs.. means I'm punching you in the face 1 foot away!'
    >.<
  • Gangreen - Heavens Tear
    Gangreen - Heavens Tear Posts: 16 Arc User
    edited June 2009
    shadow or shading would finish it up nicely
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
  • FatherTed - Dreamweaver
    FatherTed - Dreamweaver Posts: 3,723 Arc User
    edited June 2009
    Lovely and well done. If I were to pick out anything, both the upper and lower left side facing parts of her nose stand out to me. Not that there is anything wrong, just might look a bit better were the lines lighter, IMO.
    [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
    Thanks for the sig Ophida :3

Categories